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511#
发表于 23-6-2009 23:51:35 | 只看该作者
整了几天终于把简历弄好了。
哪位老师有空可以帮我看看修改一下,多谢了!

Resume

Contact Details
Name:

Phone:

Mobile

Email Address:


Address:



Career Objective
Java/J2EE software developer

Professional Summary
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8 years full-time Java/J2EE development experience
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4 years experience in a world famous multilingual company – HP
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Overseas working experience - 1 month in San Jose, USA and 2.5 months in Tokyo, Japan
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Solid knowledge of Software Development Lifecycle - Waterfall and Agile(Scrum)
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Sound understanding of Design Pattern, OOP and AOP
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Fast and eager learner, always interested in new technology
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Strong problem solving ability
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Work well under pressure

Skill Summary
Years of experience on J2EE technologies – Servlet, JSP, EJB, JCA and JMS
6 years experience on Struts
5 years experience on Spring
4 years experience on Hibernate
5 years experience on XML, master of XSD
8 years experience on SQL
Master of socket, multi-thread programming

Employment History
Feb, 2005 – May, 2009
HP Global Delivery China Center

Senior Software Engineer
Responsibilities:
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Developing project’s framework which other programmer can program on.
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Resolving and answering technical questions programmers come across during programming.
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Defining various specifications like code convention, log processing rule, exception processing rule, etc.
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Writing tools to help developing and testing.
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Communicating with client about the requirements.
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Coaching junior developers.
Achievements:
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Won the Star of Month.
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Led the architect team in a project of GDCC Dalian branch, which is its first big project over 300 man month, and its framework, based on Struts, Spring and Hibernate, became the base of the following projects.
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Led a team designed an algorism to dynamically show the relationship of all kinds of devices on a web page using VML, won the HP Japan's Best of Practice award.
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Designed the REST style Web Service framework serving thousands of KDDI mobile customers, using Spring, XML/XSD, XmlBeans.
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Led the first Flex project practicing Scrum, a very popular Agile development method.
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Built the department's Continuous Integration environment by combining Maven2, SVN, Hudson and the Issuing Tracking system Trac.

Mar, 2003 – Feb, 2005
Zhong Jing Internet Company Ltd. Shanghai

Senior Software Engineer
Responsibilities:
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Analyzing requirements with customer.
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Making high level design.
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Guiding programmers to do coding.
Achievements:
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Developed China Eastern Airline domestic flights’ Electronic Ticket System.
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Designed China Eastern Airline international flights’ Electronic Ticket System.

Aug, 2003 – Jan, 2003
Yuan'hua Computer Company Ltd., Jinan, China

Software Engineer
Responsibilities:
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Writing detail design documents.
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Writing implementation code.
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Writing test design document
Achievements:
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Became a regular employee 5 months in advance.
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Delivered the first EJB project of the company.
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Integrated Weblogic with JBuilder which smooths the developing and testing effort.
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Worked around a memory leak problem caused by JInternalFrame component of Swing.

Education
Institution:
Shandong University of Technology
City/Country:
China
Qualifications:
Bachelor of Computer Science
Completed:
2001


Other Information
My open source project: iDao – Writing persistence layer in plain Java interface.
http://idao.googlecode.com

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参与人数 1威望 +20 收起 理由
飞天雪狐 + 20 原来是校友:-)

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512#
发表于 3-7-2009 02:01:49 | 只看该作者
打着灯笼也找不到的好帖啊!
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513#
发表于 29-7-2009 14:52:16 | 只看该作者

请各位高人帮忙看看,多谢了

Job objectives: Automation Engineer

- Key skills/Experience-
        15 years of experience in project management, quality control and engineering in process control
        Experienced in industrial processes especially in Power plants,
        Involvement in major engineering tasks such as planning, team build-up, system design, DCS and PLC configuration, testing, training and site commissioning
        Involvement in handling technical inquiries and generating proposals for customers
        Certificated to LRQA ISO9000:2000 Series Auditor/Lead Auditor


Employment Experience
04.2005-02.2009    Quality Manager

04.2000-04.2005                 Assistant Quality Manager

06.1996-04.2000                 DCS System Design Engineer

01.1994-06.1996             DCS Quality Engineer

07.1992-01.1994     Turbine Technician
Education & Training
09.1988-07.1992            Zhejiang University
Thermal Engineering
Bachelor Degree

MAIN PROJECTS INVOLVED
•        DURATION:                 04/2005—02/2009
POSITION:                 Quality Manager
MAIN JOB: Building and maintaining company QMS; Approval of the release of the DCS projects.

•        DURATION:         04/2000—04/2005
PROJECT:                 NPI(New Product Introduction) of XDPS–400/XDPS-600 Distributed Control System
POSITION: Assistant Quality Manager
MAIN JOB: Planning and implementing a full-scale testing of the NPI(New Product Introduction) of XDPS-400 / XDPS-600 including functional, critical state and environment testing to ensure the availability and reliability of the new DCS system.

•        DURATION:                11/1999—04/2000
PROJECT: Power Plant Control System(DAS, BMS, SCS, CCS)
Feichen Power Plant, Shandong China
POSITION:                 DCS Senior System Engineer/Project Manager
HARDWARE: XDPS-400(Xinhua CO.)
SOFTWARE:         ACAD 12.0, Windows-NT
MAIN JOB: Resource and client management, System Design, DCS Configuration, User Training, Testing and Site Commissioning

•        DURATION:                10/1999—11/1999
PROJECT:        2x300MW Unit Power Plant Control System W2K
Zhouxian Power Plant, Shandong China
POSITION:                 DCS Senior System Engineer/Project Manager
HARDWARE:        Westinghouse WDPF-II DCS
SOFTWARE:                                 ACAD 10.0, Solaris
MAIN JOB:        Team leader responsible for Configuration, Testing, and Site Commissioning

•        DURATION:                 01/1997—10/1999
PROJECT:        2x300MW Unit Power Plant Control System(DAS, BMS, SCS, CCS)
Luohe Power Plant, Anhui China
POSITION:                 DCS Senior Design Engineer
HARDWARE:        Westinghouse WDPF-II DCS(Westation)
SOFTWARE:         ACAD 10.0, Solaris
MAIN JOB:        Team leader responsible for Configuration, Testing, and Site Commissioning


•        DURATION:                06/1996—01/1997
PROJECT:        2x300MW Unit Power Plant Control System(DAS, BMS, SCS, CCS)
Shiliquan Power Plant, Shandong China
POSITION:                 DCS System Design Engineer
HARDWARE:        Westinghouse WDPF-II DCS(Westation)
SOFTWARE:         ACAD 10.0, Solaris
MAIN JOB:        System Design, Configuration, User Training, Debugging and FAT, and Site Service

•        DURATION: 12/1995—06/1996
PROJECT:        300MW Unit Power Plant Control System(DAS, BMS, SCS, CCS)
Qingdao Power Plant, Shandong China
POSITION:                 DCS System Design Engineer
HARDWARE:        Westinghouse WDPF-II DCS(Westation)
SOFTWARE:         ACAD 10.0, Solaris
MAIN JOB:        System Design, Configuration, User Training, Debugging and FAT, and Site Service

•        DURATION: 09/1994—12/1995
PROJECT:         300MW Unit         Power Plant Control System(DAS, BMS, SCS, CCS)
Maanshan Power Plant, Anhui China
POSITION:                 DCS Quality Engineer
HARDWARE: Westinghouse WDPF-II DCS(Classic)
SOFTWARE:         ACAD 10.0, RMX,
MAIN JOB:        Configuration, Debugging, FAT and Commissioning.

•        DURATION: 03/1994—09/1994
PROJECT:         300MW Unit         Power Plant Control System(DEH)
Shuangliao Power Plant, Jilin China
POSITION:                 Quality Engineer
HARDWARE: DEH-III ( Xinhua CO.)
SOFTWARE:         Windows
MAIN JOB:        Configuration, Debugging, FAT and Commissioning

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参与人数 2威望 +40 收起 理由
飞天雪狐 + 20 我也是在国内的电力行业,去澳洲很迷茫。
chenlocus + 20 看你这简历,跟我以前做的一样,火电厂DCS, ...

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514#
发表于 13-8-2009 22:32:24 | 只看该作者
godddddddd
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515#
发表于 13-8-2009 23:37:47 | 只看该作者
goooood
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516#
发表于 4-9-2009 20:41:33 | 只看该作者
留爪,该找工作了
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发表于 10-9-2009 13:28:39 | 只看该作者

不才贴一下我的简历,请老大卫等提提意见

请诸位在方便的时候给我的简历也提提宝贵意见吧,谢谢先:)

Name: **** ***

Mobile: ************


Email:********@hotmail.com


OBJECTIVE
Software Engineer in C/C++
Test Engineer
PROFESSIONAL SUMMARY
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8 years’ experience on software design, implementation, deployment and validation
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Over 4 years’ experience in software test
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Complete understanding of SDLC
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Over 6 years’ C/C++ programming experience on platform UNIX/LINUX and Windows
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6 years’ experience in software development in GSM/GPRS/EDGE system.
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2 years’ experience in software development in industry system especially thermal power system
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3 months’ working experience in Velizy, Paris, France to provide technical support in GPRS system.
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Rich knowledge of product development, team management and training skills
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Good communication; Good English(IELTS: 6.5)

AWARDS
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Best hunters
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Best test progress controller
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Senior software engineer in Alcatel
SKILLS
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C/C++ programming experience on platform UNIX/LINUX and Windows
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Competence in accelerate software test progress and ability in finding more bugs
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A strong understanding of wireless networking protocols such as GSM/GPRS communication protocols of 3GPP
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Deeply understand GPRS/EDGE 2.5G mobile communication system
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SDL2000
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Perl and Unix/Linux shell
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C/C++ programming, C# .net Web programming
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Embedded system programming
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Know well about Clearcase
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CMMI
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JAVA and SQL
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FIX--- a strong configuration software used in many industry systems.
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Very strong communication and documentation skills

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
Software Engineer

July, 2004 to present

******************* in Shanghai, P.R.China
********************** is the Chinese flagship company in Asia Pacific.

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GPU integration (2004/07~now)

GPU software is a central component in GPRS/EDGE system coping with packet data, and it is divided into two parts, one part in GPU board, another part in BTS, these two parts are connected with each other on IP or Frame relay. This project is to do software integration for these two parts.

I acted as a key team member in test platform establishment, some test tools generation such as parameters downloading tools, scripts generation, test strategy document review and project related document review and doing some test cases.

Be proficient in Alcatel’s test tools GAMES, UNIX/LINUX operation environment and Shell programming etc.
Software Environment: UNIX/LINUX
Development Tools: C/C++, Perl, Shell
Achievements:
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Alcatel MFS B11 all features’ functional test.

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Alcatel MFS B10 all features’ functional test.

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Alcatel MFS B9 all features’ functional test.

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Best hunters, almost half of the FRs in our team are raised by me

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Established GPU INT and MFS INT platform, including scripts for test platform.

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Always finish test tasks in advance because of my strong ability in project progress control


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International technical support. (2005/04)

As a tester and also as a reward for my outstanding performance in the past work, I won the opportunity to support French colleagues in VAL (validation) team and load test team for their MFS version B10mr1 testing work in ******* headquarters in Paris. MFS is the core device of mobile communication system, for packet service. Analyze all kinds of traces of the problems and bugs delivered by VAL and Load in locale. I communicated with foreign colleagues efficiently, analyzed large of trace and solved many problems in locale.

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Software Development for GPRS/EGPRS (2005/11~2007/05)

Research and develop in 2.5G GSM system. I participated in the development of MFS, which is the core device of GPRS/EDGE service of mobile communication system..
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I acted as a key software developer in development and maintenance of the PTU which is the core part of embedded system of MFS. I participate in the whole R&D process of the projects Alcatel MFS B9, B10 and B11. Be proficient in 3GPP protocols, BSCGPBSSGPPMU-PTU interface, etc. Developments were based on either DSP or PowerPC.

Software Environment: UNIX/LINUX
Development Tools: C/C++, SDL2000, Perl, Shell
Achievements:
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Developed MFS version B10 PTU RLC layer.

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MFS B9’s, B10’s and B11’s PTU maintenance, correct software’s bugs.

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Wrote detail technology documents of Alcatel MFS B10 PTU RLC layer.

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Promoted to Senior Engineer in 2005.


Software Engineer

April, 2001 to June, 2004

****ShanghaiPRC

**** is one of the largest telecom equipment providers in China, principally engaged in the design, development, production, distribution, installation and maintenance of a broad range of advanced telecommunications systems and equipment.

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BSC Simulation (2003/12~2004/06)

The main function of this system is to simulate basic functions of a BSC to implement parameter configuration procedure and calling procedure between BSC and BTS.
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I was the key team member for the requirement analysis, the whole software system design, software implementation, software debugging, software test and software maintenance, also corresponding document writing.

Development LanguageC and VC++/Delphi
Development platformPSOS and Windows 2000
ProtocolGSM4.08, GSM5.02, TCP/IP
Achievements:
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Provide a successful software tool for test team to validate behavior of BTS

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A good tutor to give training to test team how to use the tool.


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WIA ( Wireless Interface Analyzer ) (2002/02~2003/11)

This project is done for National Security Agency. This system can intercept voice and signal messages between mobile telephones. Dialogues and short messages between two speaks can be captured and store into a personal computer and replayed.
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My divisions(1) The design and development of PC software

(2) Planning of the database system,


(3) The design and development of signal frame in on-board software


(4) Communication between PC and on-board system
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Development LanguageC for Windows API (applied in data communication)

VC++(applied in interface display & sound play)


C for PSOS

Development PlatformPSOS and Windows 2000
Development ProtocolGSM4.08GSM5.02TCP/IPUDP
Achievements:
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Provide a friend PC terminal to operators to supervise signals and voice between MS.

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Provide a magical product for customers to use.


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O&M( Operation and Maintenance ) software in BTS (2001/04~2002/01)
The function of BTS is to transfer data between mobiles and exchangersoperation & maintenance is an important software part in BTS system. It is responsible for system startsoftware version download and parameter configurationit is also responsible for the controlling of carrier frequency and base band. O&M is a key component in all software of BTS and it copes with parameters configuration module, alarm management module, signal management module, software downloading module.
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I was responsible for the requirement analysis, the whole software system design, software implementation, software debugging, software test and software maintenance, also corresponding document writing.

Development LanguageC and VC++/Delphi
Development platformPSOS and Windows 2000
ProtocolGSM4.08, GSM5.02, TCP/IP, GSM 12.21
Achievements:
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Provide a successful software tool for test team to validate behavior of BTS

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A good tutor to give training to test team how to use the tool.


PROJECT EXPERIENCE IN UNIV.

Sep. 1998 to Mar. 2001
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Java technical support (2001/01~2001/02)
Give advice on how to treat data accepted from Lonworks in Shun Tai CorporationShang Hai;

1998/09~2000/12

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Statistics Information Browses and Real-time Price Announcement in Hefei Power Plant
Development LanguageJava2
Development PlatformWindows NT4.0 & SQL Sever 7.0

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DCS (Distribution Control System) of chemical water treatment system in Nanjing Thermal Power Plant

Development LanguageVc++
Development PlatformWindows NT4.0 & FixLintools
Prototol:(1to communicate with existent instrument with MODBUS
         2To communicate with Fix by DDE (Dynamic Data Exchange)

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MPE—III electric energy accumulation system

Development LanguageC
Development PlatformDOS  

EDUCATION BACKGROUND
Master Degree of Engineering.
March 2001

***********. NanjingCHINA

Bachelor Degree of Engineering.
Jun. 1998

***********NanjingCHINA

PROFESSIONAL TRAINING
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CMMI


Jun. 2003

*** internal training
CMMI is Capability Maturity Model for Software, which is very helpful for me to understand the software process, software quality control methods.

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New Project Management
April, 2006

*** internal training

I learn from the training not only the general project management process, but also a very important element in the application of management, that is risk prevention, it is not difficult to figure out plan, it is difficult to let things go in the planned track.

Interest:
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518#
发表于 10-9-2009 15:30:00 | 只看该作者
太棒了。。。。
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519#
发表于 10-9-2009 16:26:03 | 只看该作者
原帖由 我的霍巴特 于 10-9-2009 14:30 发表
太棒了。。。。


您老是说我的简历写得太棒了:)?
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发表于 23-9-2009 19:28:33 | 只看该作者
原帖由 chenlocus 于 10-9-2009 12:28 发表
请诸位在方便的时候给我的简历也提提宝贵意见吧,谢谢先:)

Name: **** ***

Mobile: ************

Email:********@hotmail.com

OBJECTIVE
Software Engineer in C/C++
Test Engineer
PROFESSIONAL  ...


有类似的简历格式,投出去反应不是很好。工作超过10年,项目经验一写出来,简历太长了,5-7页,准备换种格式。

问问老大卫,类似这种简历太长是不是很严重的问题呀?应该如何改呢?
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521#
发表于 24-9-2009 14:58:52 | 只看该作者
贴上我的简历,烦劳各位给提提意见。

之前用一个很长(5、6页)的简历,详细的列了参加过的projects, technologies, responsibilities, achievements,好像效果不好。都说简历不要超过两页,下面这个就是精简了以后的,两页以内。感觉少了些项目相关的技术细节,不知道是不是个问题。

MY NAME                                                 Mobile: 04xx xxx xxx          Email: myname@msn.com
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An accomplished Software Engineer specializing in embedded software development with extensive experience in a wide variety of products, including: networking, consumer electronics, and white goods.

SUMMARY OF QUALIFICATIONS:
  • Over 10 years experience in embedded software development with C/C++
  • 7-year experience in embedded Linux from kernel, device driver, application, to system
  • Project experience in a variety of industries: networking, consumer electronics, white goods
  • Comprehensive knowledge in software development life cycle from concept to production
  • Proven capability in quick-learning of new technology and product knowledge
  • Analytical thinker and consistently resolves issues or defects
  • Team player, hard working, and good communication skills in oral and written

TECHNICAL EXPERTISE:
  • Programming languages: C/C++, Assembly, Shell, Perl, PHP, Java Script, HTML, XML, SQL
  • Operating Systems: Linux, vxWorks, pSOS, Windows, FreeBSD, SCO Unix, Solaris
  • Processor architectures: ARM, PowerPC, MIPS, C51, x86, 16- and 32- bit microcontrollers
  • Tools: ClearCase, Subversion, CVS, ClearQuest, Mantis, Test Track Pro, PC-Lint, MS Visio, MS Project, MS Office
  • Technologies: Linux Device Driver Development, Linux Kernel Development, Embedded Application Development, Protocol Implementation, TCP/IP Networking, Router, Switch, LCD TV, Washer/Dryer

PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE:

Software Engineer                                                                                Company A 2004-2009
  • Embedded software development for a variety of products, including network appliance, consumer electronics, and white goods.
  • Successfully developed the mini projector within 6 months that brought more projects to the design team. Responsible for boot loader porting, Linux kernel porting, customization of the file system, user interface framework (multi-thread), keypad driver, communication between ARM and microprocessor.
  • Developed the user interface control for 6 commercial washer/dryer models for Customer A that resulted in successful mass production. Responsible for implementing the Wide/Reveal communication protocol, washer cycle management, power management, service menu, factory test mode.
  • Developed the slimmest LCD TV software for Customer B. Responsible for software integration and release, and implemented part of the OSD menu.
  • Participated in the General Embedded Linux Platform development. Prepared for the development tools; ported Redboot and Linux 2.6 to IXP422 (ARM) board; created the mini root file system; all from the open source community.
  • Developed All-in-One networking gateway based on embedded Linux. Responsible for porting boot loader (Redboot), Linux kernel, and drivers, and managing software integration and release.
Software Engineer                                                                                Company B  2001-2003
  • Embedded software development for networking products: Ethernet switch and firewall.
  • Successfully developed a software stack for layer 2 Ethernet switch based on open source Linux with a team of 8 and resulted product launch in 6 months, which gained very high reorganization from top management. Responsible for porting Linux kernel to the ARM based VIA chipset, developing two level virtual device drivers for the VIA chipset, and implementing protocols. Created a proprietary protocol for stack management. Expanded the Linux kernel socket to support user application to communicate with kernel for specific Ethernet packets.
  • Successfully developed a SOHO firewall based on NEC MIPS SoC and embedded Linux within 3 months. Responsible for porting Linux kernel and device drivers, customizing the file system to minimize the storage and memory usage, implementing the network services: PPPeE, DNS, DHCP, NAT, IP Routing/Forwarding, IP Tables.
  • Developed the brand new software stack for enterprise level firewall with hardware accelerating capability from Intel Network Processor IXP1200. The software stack was based on vxWorks. Responsible for the routing sub-system. Implemented the forward engine, routing engine, and BGP routing protocol.
  • Won Top Employee twice within 3 years.

Software Engineer                                                                           Company C 1999-2001
  • Participated in the first generation multi-protocol router product design of China as a software engineer. Responsible for developing the BGP protocol on pSOS, and other software modules: policy routing, route-map, prefix-list, resource manager, and command line interface. Analyzed the IP multi-cast and related routing protocols, and created the design proposals, including: IGMP, DVMRP, PIM-DM, and PIM-SM.
  • Pre- and after- sales technical support for TCP/IP network solution, network configuration, and trouble shooting. Provided customer technical consulting and training on TCP/IP networking, router and switch configuration. Successfully closed several cases for big customers in China bank market.
  • Gained in-depth knowledge in TCP/IP networking, protocols, standards, and products.

EDUCATION BACKGROUND:
   1992.9-1996.7        My University
                                  Bachelor Degree majored in Computer Communication

TRAINING AND CERTIFICATES:
   2008.6        Training on Leadership Principles, from DDI - Jabil
   2005.9        Presentation Skills Certificate, from Shanghai Synergy Consultancy
   2004.8        Certificate of Project Management, from ChinaHR Academy
   2002.11        Training on Improve Capability of Leading, from Global Knowledge
   2001.1        ClearCase Fundamental of Windows Certificate, from Rational University
   2001.1        ClearCase Metadata of Windows Certificate, from Rational University
   2001.1        ClearCase Administration of Windows Certificate, from Rational University
   1995.11        National Programmer Certificate of Computer Software

REFERENCE AVAILABLE UPON REQUEST
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522#
发表于 29-10-2009 18:58:22 | 只看该作者
今天花了一整个下午看完了这个帖子,学到了不少,根据各位老大的评语总结了一下同志们在Resume中常犯的错误,大家可以对照这个List自己先改改:
1.        你的summary写的太简单了,没有闪光点。
基本上如果在第一页抓不住雇主,你的希望就很小了。要根据JD写到你会的非常小的细节。
2.        sofeskill太多,没有用的,这些话套在谁身上都能说
3.        多突出技术方面的内容. 而且技术要写的详细, 你的项目经验介绍不多,建议加一些项目介绍,着重突出你做了哪些项目,用的什么技术. 这样应该有助于你找工作
4.        突出技术优势
5.        只有一次,偶刻意隐去了地址,因为住在南区,申请的是一个很北面的工作
6.        Manager for Research and Development (建议隐去manager title),
7.        Responsibilities  Conduct(用过去时)
8.        觉得你的工作没有写出特色来. 虽然说你是实验室经理,但实际工作经验只有三年,还很年轻.在实验室做新产品开发,写的大都是project management and coordination的经历和routine work. 没有写出你的行业技术. 如果你想继续进同行业实验室的话,建议你多写一点你的行业技术, 做过什么新产品开发,什么技术, 多长的项目,你在里面做什么.
写出自己的特点来. 至于project management 的经历, 合起来写一二条就够了, 这不应该是你过来找工的主要优势.
9.        建议你用你自己的行业关键词搜索一下招聘广告,看看人家是怎么描述这些responsibility
10.        最近的工作经历要具体写
11.        (volunteer的工作很重要,有这段经历绝对是加分的)
12.        注意每一条都要得分,不是把你所做得都说出来,而是有挑选有侧重点地说
13.        Ensuring that correct materials and equipment are used; (基本职责,不写也罢)
14.        Oversee researching staff of concern to fulfill the related experiment tasks; (太高级了,这里找工没有用)
15.        每句话用短语,不超过30词。多用主动词,多些行业经验,少直接翻译项目名字。
16.        summary里重点不突出,softskill太多,这样得话谁都会写,没有什么意思得,一般summary里softskill一条就够了。
17.        另外注意你申请得职位是什么,就要突出那部分得经历
18.        如果看见你认为非常理想的职位, 就给中介打电话.没什么客气的.
19.        如果大于2条不合格,那你少来了,别投了,省的这个公司以后出来个你能行的职位,但你的简历已经有不合格的记录,被自动喀嚓下来。(Advert/Disclaim)
20.        1,把项目背景介绍清楚,这是一个什么样的项目,用于什么地方,大概什么规模。2,突出技术背景,比如硬件环境,软件环境,用的开发工具写的详细一点,另外这个项目中由你handle的是哪些方面,有没有什么不一样的技术难点,是由你攻关解决的。
21.        不要写的千篇一律,换个名字就可以做别人的简历。
22.        简历不是经历,人家要什么你说什么,没有必要把无关的东西写上去。技术性的简历很重要的一点是根据你申请的职位来描述简历。比如你申请PLC的工作,你就要说出相关PLC编程的经验
23.        (achievements 不够有力,可以考虑加进自己对公司内部管理得作用以及公司业绩得具体数字提高)
24.        工作经历得描述要突出最近2个工作得,至于以前得工作,建议有针对性地写写对方要地技术。
25.        (数字支持
26.        你会的东西写太多了,删除90%的东西,只写雇主要求的,自己最熟练的,写详细了
27.        Personality:  我从来没在简历里写这个
28.        我个人的理解Cover Letter要简单,明了,细节在简历里交代。我自己用的Cover Leter很简单,三,四句话而已。
Dear **, I am very interested in (I would like to apply for) this position, ***, Reference No. ***.  I have * years experience as a *** in ***. Also, I ***. You can refer to my CV for more details.
29.        Industry        Pharmaceutical (不要强调你的行业,limit了你的找工范围)
30.        SH office renovation(多少时间完成,省了多少钱,用数字表明)
31.        summary 太多了,是否能去掉一点,现在的东西不够突出重点。看上去眼花了,注意根据广告修改。
32.        项目经验很重要
33.        cover letter主要就是抓眼球让人看你的简历,10秒钟内抓不住眼球就pass了。
34.        不用写objective。
35.        你的summary写的不好,你写的这些技能是非常基本的,吸引不了眼球的。最起码我看了你的summary,要对你有初步的了解,才能吸引我继续看下去,也才能知道你对于我手头上的工作合不合适。
36.        工作经历,最近的要多写点,最远的要少写点,
37.        Interests & Hobbies (都不用写,没有意义)
38.        你的简历最大的问题就是在你的技术上实在着墨太少。一篇简历估计只有三分之一在谈你的技术。建议你在这方面 多多加强,有参与什么大的项目吗?请把项目经验加进去。
39.        你的简历的问题就是完全看不出你的技术优势。请把你的responsibility好好整理一下
40.        我感觉这里的找工作最重要的就是match,如果你在国内有丰富的经验,那么就尽量找和你经验最match的公司,做好充分的准备,包括公司的情况,可能问到的问题,如何把自己的经验和公司的需求扯在一起,只要面试发挥正常,应该说希望很大。
41.        另外你曾经和你们公司在全球各地的分公司合作的经历也可以写到summary里去,突显一下你有过跨国合作的经验,这一点对于在海外求职是很加分的。
42.        简历有很多可改的地方,但是没有收到电话不只是简历要改。还要看你
1。发了多少简历?
2。发完简历有没有打电话跟进?
3。你的简历是不是千篇一律,就是不管哪个职位,你简历没有针对职位修改就发出去了。
43.        偶感觉简历忌太长,忌长句子,如果字码的太多要注意分point,或者分段。一个字就是要readable,否则给人的第一印象就不好,没耐心看下去啦

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523#
发表于 21-11-2009 04:41:24 | 只看该作者
這個帖子很強大~~ 謝謝大家得分享
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524#
发表于 26-11-2009 19:14:14 | 只看该作者

good thread

good thread
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发表于 17-12-2009 20:59:17 | 只看该作者
好帖子阿 .做个记号,以后用的时候来参考.
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526#
发表于 27-1-2010 18:59:31 | 只看该作者
不错的,很久没有人顶了,莫非是大家都找到工作鸟。

打算找新工作了。浏览中。多谢各位大大
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527#
发表于 2-3-2010 21:39:03 | 只看该作者
求个LABOR工简历。。。

好像3大高手都不出现了。
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528#
发表于 5-3-2010 00:31:24 | 只看该作者
我在想,如果厨师是否也要自己做一份简历呢?

我还是先给老公做一份吧!!
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发表于 20-3-2010 22:18:53 | 只看该作者
太强大了,太晚发现,刚刚针对老大们的要求改了一下简历.希望能有好的消息.
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发表于 1-6-2010 13:58:13 | 只看该作者
这里还有高手关注么?好像很久都没有更新了
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发表于 13-6-2010 10:46:09 | 只看该作者
打着灯笼都找不到的好贴!
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发表于 16-6-2010 12:16:22 | 只看该作者

恳请工作室大牛看看我的简历

改了很多,请教了同学,花了不少心思,投了,收到拒信,继续改,投了,又收到拒信,准备继续.......
Name:xxxxx
Structural Engineer
xxx,xxxx
ACT 2615
Tel: +61 2 80xxxxxmobile:+86 138xxxxxxx
mail: xxx@gmail.com
Summary
       I am looking for a role position where I contribute my 7 year experience in structural design, FEA analysis and project management skills to the employer’s profitability.
Qualifications
        MSc,  Civil Engineering, xxxx ,China(2005)
(xxxx ranks among the  top x universities  in China.)
        BEng, Civil Engineering, xxxx(2002).GPA :3.2
(xxxx is one of the best universities in Central Part of China.)
Professional Profile
        5-Year experience in performing structural design during large material handling engineering projects .Proven structural design ability in FEED to fabrication, construction, commissioning of Bulk material handling equipments with a demonstrated ability to work with all levels of employment .
        3-Year experience working with a design team as project design leader, and learned the value of teamwork in the process
        In-depth Knowledge of  international standards such as FEM(FEDERATION OF EUROPEAN MATERIALS HANDLING),BS2573,BS 5400
        Excellent understanding of relevant office computer software, eg. Ms-Office,and use of Auto CAD
        Proficient in use of ANSYS , AutoCAD, good familiarity with SolidWorks , Inventor , experienced in  MathCAD, Staad.Pro and Etabs
        2-year experience in building structural design and pit foundation design.
        Effective report and technical specification writing skills requirements and techniques.
Employment
Structure Engineer, xxx company, (2005 -Present)
(xxx is famours in xx areas, a subsidiary of xxxx-a Fortune 500 company )
During my tenure as a Structural Engineer of xxxx, I traveled around a lot of countries, involved in many word-class important projects. I started my career as an entry level engineer, and now became a project design leader in design teams.  

Tasks Include but not limited to:
        Perform structural calculation and design on steel structure of heavy-duty hoist, material handling equipments, steel bridge structure to satisfy technical specifications  and develop project construction plans
        Stress analysis (linear static, nonlinear and dynamic analysis), crippling and buckling calculation, deflection and fatigue assessment
        Raise project requirements and initiate scheme according to needs of customer needs and the characteristics of each specific project, solicit opinions of the customer, and  optimize the scheme, then make further adjustments to the scheme according to the experts' opinions
        Work in coordination with fellow engineers, e.g., electrical engineers and mechanical engineers, with the view of attaining the project objectives
        Conduct technical exchanges with user and third party, make analysis of technical problems encountered in the process of project bidding, design and construction, work out solutions and provide technical support
        Negotiate with the customer to make necessary adjustments to the facilities, materials, and construction methodology selected
        Compile detailed structural diagrams and design drawings, write structural design and structural calculation specifications
        Render tech support on work site, keep close watch on progress and quality of construction works, come up with solutions to address technical problems experienced
        Carry out research and investigations on construction site, make comparisons
        Prepare technical report, give instructions to drawing designers ,provide technical guidance and training to new hires
Brief Introduction of achievements by me in xxxx:
        Preliminary concept design  was successfully selected in tendering xxxx
        Devised the xxxxxx fatigue design standard and specification.
        Finished the structural design for more than 20 huge xxxx projects, each of them is about xxxm long,xxxm heigh.xxm wide.
        Investigation and analyze the failure reasons for xxx cracked, came up the repair suggestion and new design plan and suggestion. Carried out the site investigation and troubleshooting, guiding a group of 5 engineers.
        Guidance a group of 6 engineers is short term design(xxxof xxx Group),completed the design tasks in 2 weeks advance,
        Devised the structure for new style upper part-detachable uplifting system for heavy equipments as one of the main contributor. Designed the fastening system for the shipment of the heavy equipments with considering the conditions of wave loading
        “Mr.xxx and his team are quite capable of dealing with difficult problems”——comment from a client maintenance supervisor for my team of site management

Projects Selected
        Material Handling Equipments projects selected
  Responsibility
  
  Project
  
  Client
  
  Country
  
  Time
  
  Team Leader of structure  design Part, structural Calculation, shop drawing and as-build drawing oversea
  
  xxxx
  
  xxxx
  
  Thailand
  
  03/2008-07/2009
  
  
Steel structure  design and calculation

  
  xxxx
  
  xxx
  
  08/2005-05/2006
  
  Steel structure design and analysis
  
  xxxxxxx
xxxx  USA
  
  02/2006-01/2007
  
  Steel structure design
  
  xxxx
  
  xxx
  
  Netherlands
  
  07/2009-03/2010
  
  Steel structure design, structural calculation
  (08/2005-08/2006)
  
  Site Manager, manager a  team of 8 engineers in commissioning and handover, documentation, Liaison
with the client and subcontractors

  (12/2007-004/2008)
  
  xxxxx
  
  xxxxx
  (Largest xxx project in Europe)
  
  08/2005- 04/2008
  
  Preliminary design , concept design, Technical tendering
  
  xxxxxxx
xxxxx  05/2006-09/2006
  
  Gantry Crack Failure Analysis and Reparation Plan Design
  
  xxxx
  
  xxxxx
  
  Spanish, Egypt,  Morocco
  
  07/2009- 02/2010
  
  Structural design, analysis, fatigue assessment, Modal  analysis.
  
  xxxxxx
  
  xxx
  
  Korea
  
  03/2005-06/2005
  
  xxxxxxxxx
xxxxx  Brazil
  
  08/2005-08/2005
  
  Team leader of structural Design team, Budget controlling  ,Progress supervising,
  
  xxxxxx
  
  xxxxxx
  
  Quanzhou,China,
  
  09/2008-7/2008
  
  Steel structure design, calculation, optimizing
  
  xxxxxx
  
  xxxxxx,
  
  Haikou,
  China,
  
  05/2007-11/s2007
  
  Steel structure design

  
  xxxxxx
  
  
  
  Iran
  
  06/2006-05/2007
  


Ø         xxx Bridge of the United Statesof Amerian,03.2007-12,2009 :
Thisproject
is the new landmark for xxxxx.


Responsibilities
Planed the construction method of main towers,selected and devised the construction equipments for transmission and hoisting systemsuch as hoist chains, transporting trolleys, lifting frames, optimized theconstruction method and fabrication procedure.
Designed the voyage fastening supporting systemfor the tower shaft with considering shipment load conditions, built the finitedelement model of the tower Shaft using ANSYS, carried out the analysis.


Teaching Assistant of Civil Engineering, Schoolof Civil Engineering and Mechanics, xxxx University,China (2004-2005, part time)

Responsibilities:
Gave advices andsuggestions to the undergraduate students to complete their graduate designwork, particularly in the direction of concrete structural building design,oversaw their drawings and calculation. Supervise the schedule and progress.

Junior Civil Engineerxxx Engineering Consultancy, Shanghai, China (2003- 2004, part time).
Responsibilities:
Worked as an assistant civil engineer.Plan, design, and supervise the construction of residential buildings andindustrial buildings, concrete structures and earthworks; evaluatingalternatives and make sound recommendations; work cooperatively with thosecontacted in the course of work, carried out the modeling and analysis for deepfoundations.

OTHER FACTS

·
Languages:
English and Chinese

·
Training:

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533#
发表于 14-7-2010 01:01:43 | 只看该作者
感觉简历要简洁明了, 一般别人都是着重看你的education跟工作经验, 其他都是带过而已
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发表于 1-1-2011 22:44:19 | 只看该作者
花了一个下午时间学习了这个好帖,开始修改简历,不知道几位前辈还能现身此帖否?不管怎样,非常感谢各位前辈的经验分享!!!
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535#
发表于 8-5-2011 22:49:02 | 只看该作者
不错,有空可以仔细读读。
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536#
发表于 8-5-2011 22:49:24 | 只看该作者
不错,有空可以仔细读读。
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537#
发表于 14-6-2011 17:01:03 | 只看该作者
好贴,不顶不行
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538#
发表于 14-6-2011 17:06:44 | 只看该作者
强帖兼好贴,不顶是不行的
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539#
发表于 29-6-2011 01:27:21 | 只看该作者

好贴!

好贴! 祝大家都找到好工作 !


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540#
发表于 3-7-2011 14:53:08 | 只看该作者
全贴通读,受益匪浅!!!感谢先辈的经验分享!!!希望此贴能一如既往地火下去!!!
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