找回密码
 FreeOZ用户注册
楼主: leily
打印 上一主题 下一主题

[求职信与简历] Freeoz工作室的简历样本(目前不提供修改,历史记录仅供参考)

  [复制链接]
301#
发表于 10-8-2007 15:47:33 | 只看该作者

麻烦给看看

Mary  Wang
Residency Status: Australian Permanent Resident

                                                               
Email: mary-wang@sohu.com

KEY SKILLS
        NAATI Accredited Translator (English and Chinese)
        13 years experience in broadcast industry
        Proficient in operating betacam sx, betacam sp, IMX, DVC-PRO editing systems.
        Basic knowledge of ENG/Studio lighting and exposure
        Familiar with Final Cut non-linear editing system
        Basic understanding of microphones, recording and audio levels
        Advanced in Microsoft Word, Powerpoint, intermediate in Excel

EDUCATION
1988 – 1992                        Bachelor Degree in English Language
                                        Xiamen University, China

EMPLOYMENT
1996 – present                 Editor, Producer-Programme Department
                                         XXXX  Satellite TV, China
1994 – 1996                 Editor and Translator-Englsih News Department
XXXX TV, China

                                        Responsibilities
        Select topics of programmes and conduct pre-production research
        Coordinate shooting equipments and operators
        Co-ordinate studio recordings and location shoots
        Edit rushes with linear editing systems (first stage)
        Conduct non-linear editing of the rushes (second stage)
        Dub with music and narration, in cooperation of musical editor and audio technician
                                       
KEY PROJECTS
2006                                Editor
Find the Parents: a news feature won the Best Programme conferred by China TV Association
2002        Producer, director  and editor
CHOICE: a documentary entered the final selection of the 4th Women’s Film Festival in Seoul (wffis), among over 100 films submitted from Asian countries.


TRAINING
2003- 2004          Studied in Center for Communication studies, XXXX University
                    as  academic visitor, funded by Chinese government。 Courses
taken included :
Communication, Culture and Media Theory                                240 Hours
Research in Communication Culture and Media I, II                      240 Hours Applied Communication                                                 240 Hours
Visual Cultures                                                         240 Hours
Information Society                                                     240 Hours
Journalism                                                             240 Hours
Public Relations and Information Management                              240 Hours


REFEREE                 Dr.XXXX
Director of Centre for Communication Studies
XXXX University, UK
                    Priory Street
                    Tel: +44 (0) XXXXXX
                    Email:  K@XXXX.ac.uk

                    CJ
                    Deputy Director of XXXX TV
                    1  Chang An Road, China
                    Tel: +86 1234567
                    Email: cj@sina.com
回复  

使用道具 举报

302#
发表于 14-8-2007 14:56:05 | 只看该作者
朋友介绍,发现这个宝地,真是太有帮助了,LZ们真是辛苦了,谢谢先!
我的简历自己都不好意思出手,看了前面的贴子,把我的简历又改了改,贴出来,希望各位老师给点意见!看不明白,不要生气哦,我改我改我改改改

我简单说一下,我是对SMART CARD非常熟悉,项目比较集中在用CARD的项目上,语言用的比较杂,什么都用过,却不太专,其中c用的最多,对C开发的工作还是比较自信的.澳洲好象CARD的开发不多,要是CARD方面的开发,我是最最自信的,可惜啊  做项目呢,从设计到开发测试一条龙都做;同时希望能给点建议我最好申请什么方面的工作啊?(我自己是定位在开发上,觉得测试也可以)



下面是我的简历:
name
Australian Citizen
address
tel,  mail

Career Objective
A highly experienced IT professional with comprehensive skills in software and smart card and some terminals development as well as project management seeking a position as an IT Engineer where these skills will add value, enabling continuous learning and development of personal and organizational goals

Professional Skill

²        Possess 8 years experience in software development, systems improvement.
²        Experience in developing applications in different development environments    especially in C (Visual C++, MSC, TC, BC, UNIX C, C51) and Visual Basic 6.0.
²        Familiar with full software lifecycle, from analysis, design, coding through to testing and implementation.
²        Familiar with all kinds of card: Smart card (CPU card). Memory card, Mifare one card etc.
²        Familiar with some kinds of terminal: card reader/writer, ATM, POS, bank terminal and bus terminal etc.
²        Experience in card and terminal application and development, technology consultation.
²        Experience in process improvement, knowing a successful project is the effective combination of Technology, Management and Process.
²        Able to work as part of a team, high sense of responsibility, teamwork spirit.
²        Able to investigate, identify and solve problems quickly and efficiently.

Employment Background
Job title: Software Developer
Duration: 1/2001 - 12/2003
Company name:
       Website:
Duties:
1.        Analysis requirements outlined by customers, document and design programming solutions.
2.        Provide the technology guidance of the card technology specifications to support project scope and card system scheme programming.
3.        Assist in the modification, amendment and updating of software programs.
4.        Undertake programming and development of the applications.
5.        Translate the solutions provided by project designers into detailed program specifications.
6.        Perform comprehensive unit testing and participate in system testing, ensuring that software meets agreed specifications.
7.        Prepare reports, user manuals and documentation.
8.        Train the customers, including the configuration of software and the use of application software.

Major Projects Involved:
²        IC Card General Platform Building System(Win98/2000, SCO UNIX, VB, C in UNIX, Oracle)
n        Private Key Management System
n        Issuing Card Management System
n        Transaction Processing System
²        Bank of Agricultural Credit Card System of TianJin(Win98/2000, Cash register, Terminal, VB6.0, Pro C, C51, Sybase, Access)
²        Smart Card Electronic Payment System (ALX, Win9x, NCR ATM, VC++, VB6.0, C in Unix, Sybase, CICS)
n        Private Key Management System
n        Issuing Card Management System
n        Bank Transaction Processing System (Account Processing subsystem, Transaction control subsystem, Function Customization subsystem etc)

Job title: Technical Supporter and Programmer
Duration: 05/1997 - 12/2000
Company name:
                Website:
Duties:
1.        Develop Smart card application, development, technology consultation and provide the solution for the customers.
2.        Undertake programming and development of the applications.
3.        Modify and document program code to correct errors or to enhance a program's capabilities.
4.        Undertake connection program developing under various system platform.
5.        Technical support for company's products, include Smart Card, IC Card Terminal and IC Card Reader/Writer.
6.        Undertake program design activities including definition of card personalization and crypto-key management and transfer.

Major Projects Involved:
²        Market Salesman PALM System of Insurer (MetroWerks CodeWarrior 4.0 for Windows 95/98、Palm OS Conduit SDK for Windows 、VC++、Dephi)
²        ID Authentication System of People’s Bank of Kunming (Win98/2000, SCO UNIX, VB, C in Unix, Oracle)
²        Remote Electro-Declare System of Tax(Win98/2000, TCP/IP, IC Declaration Machine, C51,VC++,ODBC,SQL,MS SQL 6.5 Server)
²        CPU Card Management System of Residents Power Supply System(Win32, LOGIKA950, BC3.1, VB6.0)
²        Social Welfare Key Management Systems of Shanghai(VC++,VB6.0)

Job title: Programmer
Duration: 08/1994 - 05/1997
Company name:
Major Projects Involved:
²        Financial Network Management System of JCS (Foxprow, Novell Network)
Duties:
1.        System requirement analysis, plan and design overall application.
2.        Flowchart, scheme design, detailed design, system databases design and maintain and system financial report design and account balance check.
3.        Undertake programming and development of the applications.
4.        Prepare user manuals and training the user.

²        CAD/CAM/CAPP of Numerical Control Machine Technology management Project
Duties:
Undertake programming user interface and development with XWINDOWS C in UNIX workstations as well as testing and debugging.

²        CIMS Numerical Control Workshop Management System
Duties:
Developed and tested communication management module by Turbo C to implement the data communication between Numerical Machine tools and Computers and document preparation.
Education

Qualifications        Bachelor of Engineering in Computer Application
Institution        Haerbin University of Technology, Heilongjiang, China
Completed        1994

Personal Description

²        Creative and critical thinking.
²        Love to learn new technologies and learn quicker.
²        Open-minded, optimistic, love entertainment and sports.

多谢,辛苦各位老师了!
回复  

使用道具 举报

303#
 楼主| 发表于 15-8-2007 12:25:17 | 只看该作者
dflovely

Mr Fred ××××

×××××××××××                                Hm: (02) ×××× ××××
×××××, NSW ××××                        Mob: 0420 ××× ×××
                                                Email: ××××××××@yahoo.com.au
CAREER PROFILE
Programmer with over 6 years experience in C/C++ programming, network application programming using TCP/IP. Energetic, reliable team player with excellent interpersonal and problem solving skills.
建议这里加上以下信息,你的程序的end user是哪个行业为主,比如互联网?金融?电信业?等等。另外加上一些你的项目的信息,比如参与过多少项目。你在项目中承担的角色,比如是架构?coding? 你的summary太简略了,没有突出你的个人特点。


TECHNICAL SKILLS
•        6+ years experience in C/C++
•        4+ years experience in Streaming Technologies
•        Solid knowledge of TCP/IP Application Layer Protocols
•        Good knowledge of SDLC methodology
•        Strong experience with Visual Studio .Net in Windows platform
•        Strong experience with GCC and GDB in Linux platform

这一段不过不失,有一部分内容,建议和上一段的profile合并,写成summary,就是突出你的技术特点。让人家看完这一段就知道你是做什么的,你的特长在哪里,你适合什么样的位置。

EMPLOYMENT
2003 - 2007         Senior Programmer
        ***** Technologies Inc., Shanghai, China
        ****** offers end-to-end solutions for network operators in the realm of IPTV, streaming media, VOD, time-shift TV. For more detail, please visit http://www.*******.com/.

Responsibilities
        Discussing module implementations with system analyst
        Implementing main part of the module
        Unit and integration testing

Projects
        ContEx2: Content Delivery Network (CDN) system, delivering Video On-Demand (VOD) services to the customer over real IP networks with Qos guaranteed. It has been chosen and deployed by many Province Telecom of China such as Shandong Netcom, Zhejiang Telecom and Guangdong Telecom etc.. As a key team member, I went through the whole development life cycle and was responsible for developing and implementing base libraries, load balance service and authentication service using C++. And after finishing development of ContEx2, I was in charge of the maintenance, modifications and enhancements according to client requirements.
        UServer: a important part of ContEx2, a server which supports download protocols (ftp, http) and Windows Media protocols (wmthttp, wmtmms, wmtrtsp) and RealNetworks Media protocols (realhttp, realrtsp) and isma mpeg4 and h.264. I was responsible for developing modules relative to the Windows Media protocols and the RealNetworks Media protocols.

项目经验写的不大清楚。建议按照以下格式写:
项目名称:
时间:
项目简介:
软硬件环境:
主要使用工具及语言:
职责:
这样人家扫一眼就能看出你做的是什么。不用一个字一个字的去读。清楚明白。另外少用连结词啊少用连结词。


2002 - 2003        Programmer
***** Broadband Technologies Inc., Shanghai, China
        The creator of ContEx system series, the most popular Content Delivery Network software, was taken over by ***** in 2003.

Responsibilities
        Implementing tasks assigned by the manager
        Unit and integration testing
        Researching streaming technologies, including Windows Media Service version 4 and version 9, real network media system

Projects
        ContEx1: previous version of ContEx2, similar to Contex2, but based on win32 platform and supporting Windows Media Service only. I was responsible for developing base libraries in ContEx1.
        CDN Manage and Operate Support System (CMOSS): a support system of ContEx1 and the other CDN devices. I was responsible for implementing content delivery module of CMOSS. It delivers content as required into devices, included ContEx1 component and the third party company devices. I was involved in implementing the control module of CMOSS. It is an interface connecting CMOSS and cache servers of third party company.

2000 - 2002        Programmer
**** Network Security Research Centre, Nanjing, China
        The Research Centre, which belongs to the Nanjing ***** University, provides products and services of network security for Nanjing local government offices.

Responsibilities
        Implementing assigned modules
        Unit and integration testing
        Solving network security problems for clients by phone or in person

Projects
        Desktop Firewall system, base on Windows platform and Driver Development Kit 2000 (DDK 2000). As a key member, I was responsible for implementing NDIS Intermediate Driver and cooperating with UI designer.   
        I was involved in the implementation of an Intrusion Detection System (IDS) product based on Linux platform and sniffer technology.
        I developed the administrator user interface (UI) for IDS product jointly with a web designer. The administrator user interface base on PHP and MySQL, can reconfigure the system and show network traffic and report suspicious behaviour from the network.
EDUCATION         
1996 - 2000        B.Sc. in Computer and Application
**** University ,
Nanjing, China
OTHER SKILLS
Problem solving
Researching
Teamwork
INTERESTS
Swimming, playing basketball, playing cards, listening to music
REFEREES
Available upon request

有关你提到的responsibility太简略,我觉得不是问题,因为程序员的responisibility是这样的,重点是你要把你的项目经验写好,写清楚,按照我给你的格式,好好整理一些有代表性的项目,哪怕你在每个项目中都做一样的事,也一个一个认真列上去。只要项目简介是不一样的就行了。

[ 本帖最后由 leily 于 15-8-2007 11:33 编辑 ]
回复  

使用道具 举报

304#
 楼主| 发表于 15-8-2007 12:46:22 | 只看该作者
lxxtyy  

Curriculum Vitae for

Personal Details                                          
NAME:                     
Email:                        lxxtyy2001@hotmail.com
Mobile Phone:                 

Summary                                                                  
20 years extensive experience with mechanical design, focus in full function engineering job.20年的经验!好senior.我相信你一定是full function都可以胜任,但还是建议你找几个你自己认为最强的地方强调一下。有的时候太贪全反而得不偿失。
6 years experience of CNC program in Singapore很不错,有海外经验,可以加上有和不同文化背景的合作经验。
Bachelor of Engineering没有必要放在summary里
Proficient in AutoCAD, Pro/Engineer, and familiar with UG
With advanced skills using CAMAND packages, an established understanding of CAM/CNC program
Strong teamwork and good communication skill没有必要放在summary里,这句话是一百份简历一百份里有。人家看见也不会当真的。
Positive attitude, reliable, outgoing, quick learning and strong problem solving ability
这句也是,建议还是把技术部分的描述加强一些,这些虚的没多大意思。

Professional Skills                                          
Create CNC program for manufacture of machining center
Operate CNC machining center (Fanuc system)
Design tooling, fabricate jig and fixture
Use CMM to coordinate and control quality of product


Computer Skills   
这一段放到后面去,否则简历太久不进入正题 了。                                         
AutoCAD2005                  Constant Use
Pro/engineer Wildfire 3.0          Constant Use
Camand 17.0                    Constant Use
Solidworks 2007                 Intermittent Use
Unigraphics NX                 Intermittent Use
IDEAS                         Intermittent Use

Training in Singapore                                          
UG Digital Mold Design Process Training
(07 April 2003 to 11 April 2003)
UG Digital Manufacturing Process Training
(21 April 2003 to 25 April 2003)

Work History                                                
09/2003-05/2006      The Electrical Machinery Plant
Shanghai, P.R.China
Position:            Engineer of CNC machining Department
Duties:             (1)  CAD/CAM for turret fabrication
(2)        Manufacture’s supervision and coordination
(3)        Sales promotion and customer contact
Referee:             Bing Tang (Mr.)
                    Manager of Engineering
                    Phone:
=============================================================
08/1999-08/2003       Lian Jun Industrial Pte Ltd
                    Singapore
Position:             CAM programmer
Duties:            (1)Use Camand, Unigraphics software to create CNC program for machining steel and electrode
                    (2) Solve problems with in production
Referee:             Catherine Choo (Ms)
                    H.R. Executive
                    Phone:
=============================================================
04/1997-05/1999      Chueng Who Metal Works Pte Ltd
                    Singapore
Position:             Design Engineer
                    Process Engineer
                    Leader of CNC machining Department
Duties:              (1) Design new tooling, fabricate jig and fixture
(2)        Mould design with AutoCAD
(3)        Edit CNC program for manufacture of IKEGAI WADO KITAMURA and BROTHER machining center
Referee:             Xuezhong GAO (Mr.)
                    Senior Engineer
                    Phone:
=============================================================
08/1988-03/1997     The Electrical Machinery Plant
Shanghai, P.R.China
Position:            Assistant Engineer
Duties:             (1) Participated in the design of various metal mould
(2)        prepared the final drawings
(3)        new products design and development
Referee:             Chufang Dong (Mr.)
                    Manager of Technology Department
                    Phone:

Education & Qualification                                    
Bachelor of Engineering
Major:   Mechanical Designing
Shanghai Jiao Tong University,    P.R.China (09/1989-12/1994)

Graduation Certificate
Major:    Machine Die Specialization
Shanghai Aviation Institute Industry,  P.R.China (09/1986-07/1988)

你的简历最大的问题就是在你的技术上实在着墨太少。一篇简历估计只有三分之一在谈你的技术。建议你在这方面 多多加强,有参与什么大的项目吗?请把项目经验加进去。机械的技术我一窍不通,不能给你更实用的建议,但我想总还有一些你没提到的地方吧?比比如你一般使用什么软件,还有一些专业名词,多多的罗列。
回复  

使用道具 举报

305#
发表于 16-8-2007 16:26:49 | 只看该作者
谢女王陛下御笔批阅, 小的这就奉旨照改。
(:你可以退下了。)
(:诺。)
回复  

使用道具 举报

306#
发表于 18-8-2007 23:12:38 | 只看该作者

请问刚毕业出来,一点经验也没有的要怎么写简历呢

我是accounting刚毕业的,一点工作经验也没有的,只打过一份餐馆的工,我的简历要怎么写呢?
好像写了学历之后就没东西写了啊,怎么办啊?
回复  

使用道具 举报

307#
 楼主| 发表于 19-8-2007 12:44:20 | 只看该作者
原帖由 xycxt7 于 18-8-2007 22:12 发表
我是accounting刚毕业的,一点工作经验也没有的,只打过一份餐馆的工,我的简历要怎么写呢?
好像写了学历之后就没东西写了啊,怎么办啊?


只能这样了,以社会新鲜人的角度找呗。。。看看你有没有什么实习,社会实践的东西可以写上去?
回复  

使用道具 举报

308#
发表于 20-8-2007 11:40:12 | 只看该作者
还没轮到我还是我的简历实在是没发下手?
回复  

使用道具 举报

309#
发表于 21-8-2007 15:23:22 | 只看该作者

帮我看看简历, 非常非常感谢

各位帮忙看看  我是这边毕业的会计硕士, 但经验都是国内银行和证券
工作半年还没有进展,我会计和银行都找了, 该怎么办阿
Financial Analyst
xxx Securities Co., Ltd
October 1999- September 2003


●        Working to targets and selling products to customers, including credit cards,   Working with a team of dealing with 500-800 transactions on a daily  basis including pre-match, value date and failing trades
●        Covering all markets on behalf of clients, with focus on high risk markets including HK.
●        Sending daily fails report to clients and liaising with them to resolve outstanding issues.
●        Building and maintaining external client relationships through daily client contact and some client visits.
●        Ensuring the accuracy of all trades undertaken in the market and monitors the settling process.
●        Liaising with other internal and external groups like settlements, traders and custodians to resolve any trade discrepancies and client issues.
●        Prematch trades in risky markets and all IPO trades.
●        Reviewing of financial announcements and modifying/ creating Corporate Action evens base on the sources
●        Reviewing of all announcements cancellations



Bank of xxx, China
            Foreign Currency Loan & International Settlement Manager
April 1997 – October 1999

Duties and Responsibilities:
●        Monitoring the processing of letters of credit, guarantee and international money transfer.
●        Monitoring Process loan payments Remit payments to respective institutions. Review loan documents.
●        Managing a team of 5 in the administration team in the international settlements department
●        Monitoring the team to ensure they are working to the required level
●        Meeting with every team member on a weekly basis to discuss performance from the previous week and the following week’s objectives
●        Completing appraisals on a yearly and 6 month basis and setting goals and objectives for the following year
●        Compiling reports on a yearly basis on each individuals performance and advising on the level of their bonus
●        coordinating the team’s holiday allowance and recording this on a spreadsheet


Deputy Manager (Non-performing assets)
Bank of xxx  China
April 1996 – April 1997

Duties and Responsibilities:
●        Collecting large debts owed to the bank
●        Investigating into the company’s asset by analyzing financial statements of the company from several years and producing reports
●        Evaluating all information and concluding whether or not to sue the company and file a court case or negotiating the repayment to the bank with clients
●        Managing a team of 8 office inspectors
●        Monitoring the team to ensure they are working to the required level
●        Meeting with every team member on a weekly basis to discuss performance from the previous week and the following week’s objectives
●        Completing appraisals on a yearly and 6 month basis and setting goals and objectives for the following year
●        Compiling reports on a yearly basis on each individuals performance and advising on the level of their bonus
●        coordinating the team’s holiday allowance and recording this on a spreadsheet

Deputy Manager (Customer Services)
Bank of xxx, China
September 1995 – April 1996

Duties and Responsibilities:
●        Working with over 200 VIP customers of the bank who have a high net wealth of over 500000 RMB or a business turnover of over 10 million RMB
●        Providing first class service to each client and suggesting solutions to them to increase their return by using our products
●        Maintaining close relationships with every client
●        Managing a team of 5 customer service advisors
●        Monitoring the team to ensure they are working to the required level
●        Meeting with every team member on a weekly basis to discuss performance from the previous week and the following week’s objectives
●        Completing appraisals on a yearly and 6 month basis and setting goals and objectives for the following year
●        Compiling reports on a yearly basis on each individuals performance and advising on the level of their bonus
●        coordinating the team’s holiday allowance and recording this on a spreadsheet


Customer Service Advisor
Bank of xxx, China
June 1992 – October 1995

Duties and Responsibilities:
●        Providing customers with high level of service
●        Dealing with all the customers transactions, including cash, cheque and foreign exchange
●        certificates of deposits, loans and mortgages
●        Opening of customer accounts



School Teacher
            July 1990- June 1992
●        Instruct children ages 13-16 in Chinese Language, Reading, Writing Studies
●        Formulate, administer, and grade exams
回复  

使用道具 举报

310#
 楼主| 发表于 22-8-2007 12:51:22 | 只看该作者
janllylee

朋友介绍,发现这个宝地,真是太有帮助了,LZ们真是辛苦了,谢谢先!
我的简历自己都不好意思出手,看了前面的贴子,把我的简历又改了改,贴出来,希望各位老师给点意见!看不明白,不要生气哦,我改我改我改改改

我简单说一下,我是对SMART CARD非常熟悉,项目比较集中在用CARD的项目上,语言用的比较杂,什么都用过,却不太专,其中c用的最多,对C开发的工作还是比较自信的.澳洲好象CARD的开发不多,要是CARD方面的开发,我是最最自信的,可惜啊  做项目呢,从设计到开发测试一条龙都做;同时希望能给点建议我最好申请什么方面的工作啊?(我自己是定位在开发上,觉得测试也可以)
怎么讲,你提出这个问题表示你是对自己非常有想法的人,但我个人意见,光凭一份简历,很难回答你的问题,确实这是一个非常严肃的有关职业发展的问题,牵扯到方方面面,比如你目前的经济状况,你对自己的要求,你的兴趣,你对于将来的职业发展与经济的期望。我只能就你的简历上的问题给你提出修改意见。


下面是我的简历:
name
Australian Citizen
address
tel,  mail

Career Objective
A highly experienced IT professional with comprehensive skills in software and smart card and some terminals development as well as project management seeking a position as an IT Engineer where these skills will add value, enabling continuous learning and development of personal and organizational goals

个人认为简历里放这个职业目标利少弊多。写的好,投对位置当然加分。但大多数情况下,这个度很难把握。建议改成summary吧。多谈谈自己的优势。

Professional Skill

²        Possess 8 years experience in software development, systems improvement.这句话建议写的细一点,什么软件开发,什么系统开发,不见得是软件你都做对吧?第一句是提纲挈岭的话,不要一带而过。
²        Experience in developing applications in different development environments    especially in C (Visual C++, MSC, TC, BC, UNIX C, C51) and Visual Basic 6.0.
²        Familiar with full software lifecycle, from analysis, design, coding through to testing and implementation.这个不错,很多公司需要经历过软件开发的整个生命周期的人,如果能加上一句,比如经历过多少个项目或者开发过多少个产品,更有说服力一点。
²        Familiar with all kinds of card: Smart card (CPU card). Memory card, Mifare one card etc.你的简历,看到现在我觉得比较贪全,但是现在招聘一般讲究一个萝卜一个坑,建议根据你要应聘的位置来改这个summary,突出某一方面的优势,相信你都懂,但没必要都写出来,或者都强调,有的时候有舍才有得。
²        Familiar with some kinds of terminal: card reader/writer, ATM, POS, bank terminal and bus terminal etc.
²        Experience in card and terminal application and development, technology consultation.
²        Experience in process improvement, knowing a successful project is the effective combination of Technology, Management and Process.
²        Able to work as part of a team, high sense of responsibility, teamwork spirit.
²        Able to investigate, identify and solve problems quickly and efficiently.
看了你的summary,觉得就象你自己说的一样,就是多而杂。属于多面手。以后如果真的申请某个位置,建议有针对性的一份一份修改,你要针对不同的机会,详细的改,找出你自己最擅长,最和这份工作match的地方来改summary.不要贪多贪全,做过的也不一定非要写。

Employment Background
Job title: Software Developer
Duration: 1/2001 - 12/2003你03年12月份之后没做过事情?有读书吗?如果都没有,你真的要好好想想怎么解释这么长时间的职业中断。IT业是一个发展非常迅速的行业,尤其是软件开发,隔这么久再找工作,可能真的会非常困难。
Company name:
       Website:
Duties:
1.        Analysis requirements outlined by customers, document and design programming solutions.
2.        Provide the technology guidance of the card technology specifications to support project scope and card system scheme programming.
3.        Assist in the modification, amendment and updating of software programs.
4.        Undertake programming and development of the applications.
5.        Translate the solutions provided by project designers into detailed program specifications.
6.        Perform comprehensive unit testing and participate in system testing, ensuring that software meets agreed specifications.
7.        Prepare reports, user manuals and documentation.
8.        Train the customers, including the configuration of software and the use of application software.

Major Projects Involved:
²        IC Card General Platform Building System(Win98/2000, SCO UNIX, VB, C in UNIX, Oracle)
n        Private Key Management System
n        Issuing Card Management System
n        Transaction Processing System
²        Bank of Agricultural Credit Card System of TianJin(Win98/2000, Cash register, Terminal, VB6.0, Pro C, C51, Sybase, Access)
²        Smart Card Electronic Payment System (ALX, Win9x, NCR ATM, VC++, VB6.0, C in Unix, Sybase, CICS)
n        Private Key Management System
n        Issuing Card Management System
n        Bank Transaction Processing System (Account Processing subsystem, Transaction control subsystem, Function Customization subsystem etc)

你的项目写的不仔细,我之前修改的简历里有列了写项目的格式,你可以参考一下。
Job title: Technical Supporter and Programmer
Duration: 05/1997 - 12/2000
Company name:
                Website:
Duties:
1.        Develop Smart card application, development, technology consultation and provide the solution for the customers.
2.        Undertake programming and development of the applications.
3.        Modify and document program code to correct errors or to enhance a program's capabilities.
4.        Undertake connection program developing under various system platform.
5.        Technical support for company's products, include Smart Card, IC Card Terminal and IC Card Reader/Writer.
6.        Undertake program design activities including definition of card personalization and crypto-key management and transfer.

Major Projects Involved:
²        Market Salesman PALM System of Insurer (MetroWerks CodeWarrior 4.0 for Windows 95/98、Palm OS Conduit SDK for Windows 、VC++、Dephi)
²        ID Authentication System of People’s Bank of Kunming (Win98/2000, SCO UNIX, VB, C in Unix, Oracle)
²        Remote Electro-Declare System of Tax(Win98/2000, TCP/IP, IC Declaration Machine, C51,VC++,ODBC,SQL,MS SQL 6.5 Server)
²        CPU Card Management System of Residents Power Supply System(Win32, LOGIKA950, BC3.1, VB6.0)
²        Social Welfare Key Management Systems of Shanghai(VC++,VB6.0)

Job title: Programmer
Duration: 08/1994 - 05/1997
Company name:
Major Projects Involved:
²        Financial Network Management System of JCS (Foxprow, Novell Network)
Duties:
1.        System requirement analysis, plan and design overall application.
2.        Flowchart, scheme design, detailed design, system databases design and maintain and system financial report design and account balance check.
3.        Undertake programming and development of the applications.
4.        Prepare user manuals and training the user.

²        CAD/CAM/CAPP of Numerical Control Machine Technology management Project
Duties:
Undertake programming user interface and development with XWINDOWS C in UNIX workstations as well as testing and debugging.

²        CIMS Numerical Control Workshop Management System
Duties:
Developed and tested communication management module by Turbo C to implement the data communication between Numerical Machine tools and Computers and document preparation.
Education

Qualifications        Bachelor of Engineering in Computer Application
Institution        Haerbin University of Technology, Heilongjiang, China
Completed        1994

Personal Description

²        Creative and critical thinking.
²        Love to learn new technologies and learn quicker.
²        Open-minded, optimistic, love entertainment and sports.
回复  

使用道具 举报

311#
发表于 22-8-2007 14:05:03 | 只看该作者
插队呀?为什么我的还没改呢? LEILY,谢了先
回复  

使用道具 举报

312#
发表于 22-8-2007 14:12:11 | 只看该作者

Re: #311, Qiaoqiao

原帖由 qiaoqiao 于 21-8-2007 14:23 发表
Financial Analyst
xxx Securities Co., Ltd
October 1999- September 2003


●        Working to targets and selling products to customers, including credit cards,   Working with a team of dealing with 500-800 transactions on a daily  basis including pre-match, value date and failing trades
●        Covering all markets on behalf of clients, with focus on high risk markets including HK.
●        Sending daily fails report to clients and liaising with them to resolve outstanding issues.
●        Building and maintaining external client relationships through daily client contact and some client visits.
●        Ensuring the accuracy of all trades undertaken in the market and monitors the settling process.
●        Liaising with other internal and external groups like settlements, traders and custodians to resolve any trade discrepancies and client issues.
●        Prematch trades in risky markets and all IPO trades.
●        Reviewing of financial announcements and modifying/ creating Corporate Action evens base on the sources
●        Reviewing of all announcements cancellations



Bank of xxx, China
            Foreign Currency Loan & International Settlement Manager
April 1997 – October 1999

Duties and Responsibilities:
●        Monitoring the processing of letters of credit, guarantee and international money transfer.
●        Monitoring Process loan payments Remit payments to respective institutions. Review loan documents.
●        Managing a team of 5 in the administration team in the international settlements department
●        Monitoring the team to ensure they are working to the required level
●        Meeting with every team member on a weekly basis to discuss performance from the previous week and the following week’s objectives
●        Completing appraisals on a yearly and 6 month basis and setting goals and objectives for the following year
●        Compiling reports on a yearly basis on each individuals performance and advising on the level of their bonus
●        coordinating the team’s holiday allowance and recording this on a spreadsheet


Deputy Manager (Non-performing assets)
Bank of xxx  China
April 1996 – April 1997

Duties and Responsibilities:
●        Collecting large debts owed to the bank
●        Investigating into the company’s asset by analyzing financial statements of the company from several years and producing reports
●        Evaluating all information and concluding whether or not to sue the company and file a court case or negotiating the repayment to the bank with clients
●        Managing a team of 8 office inspectors
●        Monitoring the team to ensure they are working to the required level
●        Meeting with every team member on a weekly basis to discuss performance from the previous week and the following week’s objectives
●        Completing appraisals on a yearly and 6 month basis and setting goals and objectives for the following year
●        Compiling reports on a yearly basis on each individuals performance and advising on the level of their bonus
●        coordinating the team’s holiday allowance and recording this on a spreadsheet

Deputy Manager (Customer Services)
Bank of xxx, China
September 1995 – April 1996

Duties and Responsibilities:
●        Working with over 200 VIP customers of the bank who have a high net wealth of over 500000 RMB or a business turnover of over 10 million RMB
●        Providing first class service to each client and suggesting solutions to them to increase their return by using our products
●        Maintaining close relationships with every client
●        Managing a team of 5 customer service advisors
●        Monitoring the team to ensure they are working to the required level
●        Meeting with every team member on a weekly basis to discuss performance from the previous week and the following week’s objectives
●        Completing appraisals on a yearly and 6 month basis and setting goals and objectives for the following year
●        Compiling reports on a yearly basis on each individuals performance and advising on the level of their bonus
●        coordinating the team’s holiday allowance and recording this on a spreadsheet


Customer Service Advisor
Bank of xxx, China
June 1992 – October 1995

Duties and Responsibilities:
●        Providing customers with high level of service
●        Dealing with all the customers transactions, including cash, cheque and foreign exchange
●        certificates of deposits, loans and mortgages
●        Opening of customer accounts



School Teacher
            July 1990- June 1992
●        Instruct children ages 13-16 in Chinese Language, Reading, Writing Studies
●        Formulate, administer, and grade exams


不知道你有没有对比seek.com.au广告中的job description想过自己的优势在哪里?劣势在哪里?怎么去填补劣势?或者说把这个劣势淡抹掉,说圆。

你应该在工作经验之前,用简短的文字,一条条的概括自己的优势,譬如X year Financial Analyst experience in banking industry;另起一行! Experience in XXX (ERP) system; X year banking customer service experience........这样,agent可以很快地看到你的优点,不必去仔细琢磨你下面那么多的信息,他们很忙得,没时间看完,最多20秒一份简历,看到闪光点就看到了,看不到就delete了。

还有就是,你做Financial Analyst期间,作了什么,好像没有说啊。如果你要投的是Financial Analyst得职位,你就要突出这段经历,如果是customer service representative职位你就要突出sale信用卡那段!否则,别人也是看不懂你要什么的。

我觉得,你要么去做Financial Analyst,要么去做银行或者信用卡公司的Customer Service Office之类的职位,这是两条路,你要自己看清楚,想清楚。

除了把简历注册上网和email到雇主和agent的邮箱,你还要在发完建立后,勤打电话给agent,promote自己的优势,提请他们的关注,这样会大大增加你求职成功的可能性,不至于让自己的简历淹没在茫茫email的海洋中。

半年了还没有理清头绪,你的简历或者你求职的思路肯定有问题,自己要多审视,多看论坛里的帖子,我想应该有很多值得你借鉴的地方!


[ 本帖最后由 qqyang1980 于 22-8-2007 13:13 编辑 ]
回复  

使用道具 举报

313#
发表于 22-8-2007 14:36:07 | 只看该作者
yes you are right


i had object in my cv, but i didnt put in

what i want to say is   do i need to delete manager in my jobtitle.

i applied bookkeepers , very junior positions,
agents called sometimes, always said great great, but no interview

very sad
回复  

使用道具 举报

314#
发表于 22-8-2007 15:02:16 | 只看该作者
原帖由 qiaoqiao 于 22-8-2007 13:36 发表
yes you are right


i had object in my cv, but i didnt put in

what i want to say is   do i need to delete manager in my jobtitle.

i applied bookkeepers , very junior positions,
agents  ...


Yes, your experience is really great, so that lead to issue of overqualify.  You should not just apply that junior position, that mis-match your experience and the position.  Think about it, the CFO coudn't do better data entry job than a trained school leaver.  That's the common sense to you as well as agents/employers.

So don't be upset, and keep seeking for the positions that matched your prior experiences.  Sydney is the economic core of Australia, that would bring you opportunities to kick in the industry.

And your Chinese experience is valuable, try to find some transferable skills and knowledge in it, and promote them to the agents/employers.  Sometime, they would be confident to you when you are confident to yourself.

And finally, you should call agents, not just waiting for their response.
回复  

使用道具 举报

315#
发表于 22-8-2007 15:13:35 | 只看该作者
thanks for your reply

i didnt apply senior position because my english is not advanced

and i dont have local experience

i did apply some position in jpmorgan , but even not get an interview

maybe bad luck
回复  

使用道具 举报

316#
发表于 22-8-2007 16:27:52 | 只看该作者
原帖由 qiaoqiao 于 22-8-2007 14:13 发表
thanks for your reply

i didnt apply senior position because my english is not advanced

and i dont have local experience

i did apply some position in jpmorgan , but even not get an interv ...


Why not try more agent's advertisement?  The large agent, i.e. Michael Page, Hays, Hudson, etc.,do have industry knowledge and a big talent pools that can help you aware your situtation.  And I have to point it out again as I mentioned in other places, in Australia, over 90% positions are controlled by agents, if you don't want to go through agents, definitely you missed a lot of opportunities to kick into the career.  And your communication skills and interpersonal behaviour would be also in doubt.

You can't afford to ignore the importance of English, it's a good chance to practisee English when you call/talk to agent.
回复  

使用道具 举报

317#
发表于 22-8-2007 16:38:04 | 只看该作者
i did try all of them

the positions including payment, operation, settlement,  these jobs really match my experince, but only got one interview,
but i faild ,


i just want to make sure if there is problem with my cv,  
if no,

i will keep trying
回复  

使用道具 举报

318#
发表于 22-8-2007 16:42:31 | 只看该作者
原帖由 qiaoqiao 于 22-8-2007 15:38 发表
i did try all of them

the positions including payment, operation, settlement,  these jobs really match my experince, but only got one interview,
but i faild ,


i just want to make sure  ...


You have not presented the most important part of your CV that agent will look in.  So how can we help you catch the points you missed?
回复  

使用道具 举报

319#
发表于 22-8-2007 16:47:38 | 只看该作者
Qualification:
                  Master of Accounting               July 2004 – July 2006      
                          
           
           Stock Dealer (Shanghai Stock Exchange, China)
           Economist of middle rank (Ministry of Personnel of China)
           National Debt & Futures Dealer (Shanghai Stock Exchange, China)
           Bachelor of xxx, China
            

Career Profile:
A professional individual with master’s degree  is looking for a challenge within financial services. My performance the last 10 years has resulted in several promotions and has presented me with opportunities to gain further skills and in-depth knowledge in cash equities and global markets. The two major components of this role involve risk management; building and maintaining client relationship which I wish to utilize it in a more challenging and rewarding position in australia.

I am able to cope with heavy workloads, work under pressure and achieve results, whilst maintaining a professional, friendly and client focused approach. I have the ability to communicate and interact effectively with all level of clients, colleagues and third parties.

Availability:  Immediately

Software
skills:       Microsoft Excel, PowerPoint , Word, SWIFT and QuickBook

Professional
training
course:      CFA program in process.

Career details:


i did have this part, but  dont think this part has problem,    how do you think , thanks mate
回复  

使用道具 举报

320#
发表于 22-8-2007 17:21:45 | 只看该作者
你的career profile还要简短一些,最好用一点一段这样的表达方式,这样不容易让agent在很快的阅读速度和极度烦躁的心情下漏掉你最重要的point。

你的工作经历已经跟Master of Accounting没有关系了,大可不用理这个,但如果你有CPAA的话,倒可以mention一下。你这样的经历,投bookkeeper肯定没人要的啦,你又不熟手。还是瞅准有QFII资格的澳洲券商吧。我看到还有些证券交易call centre的工作,credit card risk assess的工作,你打可以申请,既然你都不怕投bookkeeper了。
回复  

使用道具 举报

321#
发表于 22-8-2007 18:17:20 | 只看该作者
找工作1.5个月,虽有电话回复,但是面试机会不多,不知道什么原因,请Leily,老大为和衣纵酒帮忙看看简历有什么问题。非常感谢!

RESUME of IOS

        PERSONAL DETAILS
Name: IOS
Email: XXX@hotmail.com
Phone (home): XXX, Mobile: XXX
Residential Status: Permanent Resident of Australia
Address: XXX, NSW, 2210
       
        PROFESSIONAL QUALIFICATIONS
        07/2002                CCIE Certificate (R&S, No. XXXX, recertificate in 2004,2006)
        01/2001                CCDP Certificate
        01/2001                CCDA Certificate
        12/2000                CCNP Certificate
        10/1999                CCNA Certificate

        PROFILE HIGHLIGHTS
        10+ years CISCO expertise in network design and technical support
        5 years Pre & Post sales and high-end support experience with proven consulting skills
        Extensive engineering and support experiences ranging from telecom and internetworking technologies, project analysis, design and implementation of telecom networks
        Hands-on skills in installing, configuring and troubleshooting CISCO switches, routers and Firewall.
        In-depth knowledge of TCP/IP protocol suites and various routing protocols including RIP, IGRP, EIGRP, OSPF & BGP4
        Profound experience with MPLS VPN and VoIP technologies
        Hard working and creative thinking as well as responsible and proactive
        Proven excellent communication, negotiation, coordination and presentation skills.

EMPLOYMENT HISTORY
April 2005-June 2007                 XXX
TITLE:        Senior Design Engineer (Network & Telecommunication Division)
Responsibilities:       
        Telecom system design of electric power system
        IP network design of electric power system
        Technology consultant of telecom network system of electric power system
        Technical support for system integration
Key Achievements:        Responsible for the design, consultant and engineering technical support of following engineering projects:
        Power Information Network of XXX Power Grid, the largest PIN in China, US $20.5 million, key architecture
        Power Dispatch Network of PDNet of XXX, the largest PDN in China, US $30 million, key architecture
        IDC Network and Security Design of XXX, 21 Sites, US 5m, key architecture
        The System Layout in the 11th Five years of XXX Power Grid
        The System Layout in the 11th Five years of XXX Power Grid
        SDH system of XXX Power Grid
        Won the Best Employees of XXX in 2006

June 2004-March 2005           XXX (Cisco Gold Partner)
TITLE:                Senior System Engineer       
Responsibilities:       
        Installation and maintenance of information system integration
        Provide presentation and technical proposal to customers
        Responsible for technical support for system integration
Key Achievements: Responsible for engineering implementation of following projects
        Power Dispatch Network of XXX Power Grid, US$2.5 million, team lead
        Network System of XXX Airline in XXX Airport, US$2 million
        IT infrastructure of XXX Airport(the largest airport in China), US$2.5 million, team lead,

January 2003-May 2004           XXX
TITLE:                Senior System Engineer
Responsibilities       
        Provided presentation and technical proposal to customers
        Responsible for technical support for system integration
        Implementation and maintenance of information system integration
Key Achievements:               
        OA system of XXX Telecom
        Information system integration of XXX

April 1997-December 2002    XXX( Cisco Silver Partner)
TITLE: Technical Support Team Lead (Sep.1999-Dec. 2002)
Responsibilities:        
        In charge of technical support team.
        Key account system integration support and consultant.
        Scheduling the support activities for key projects, including presentation and technical proposal.
        Network technical training to sales and technical support engineers.
Key Achievements:
As the leader of the technical team of South china, I managed all technical support for system integration of information system. Under my leadership, the technical team of South China became the No.1 technical team in the whole company. I lead my technical team to implement the following key engineering projects
        XXX 163/169 Network Project (XXX, China Telecom), US$5 million, key architecture
        XXX City internetworking Networks(XXX, China Telecom),US$3million, key architecture
        XXX Telecom BRAS system 2001(China Telecom), ,US$3million, key architecture

TITLE: Product Support Lead (Jan.1999—Aug. 1999)
Responsibilities:                
        Technical support and training on Cisco internetworking & IBM RS/6000.
        Responded quickly with system engineer for various IT products
        Team leader of inside sales.
Key Achievements:
        As a vice manger, I assisted the manager to manage the technical team;
        As a Systems Engineer, I gained extensive working experiences on telecom and Internetworking technologies, project analysis, design and implementation on telecommunication networks.

TITLE: Customer Support Lead (Apr. 1997 —Dec. 1998)
Responsibilities:
        Responsible for technical support and sales of Telecommunication Solution, SYBASE, Cisco, SUN and IBM equipment in Zhejiang Province
Key Achievements:
        Offered fundamental training on network knowledge and network products for the staff and provided consulting and technical support for the projects in Zhejiang Province.
        XXX Telecom Billing System, US$5 million
        XXX Telecom Switch Network Management System, US$2 million
        Won the Best Employees of XXX in 1998.

EDUCATION
        1994 – 1997                        Master of Engineering in Material Science
        1990 – 1994                        Bachelor of Engineering in Material Science
                                College of Materials Science & Engineering
                                XX University of Technology, Guangzhou China
       
LANGUAGES SKILL
English, Chinese (Mandarin & Cantonese)

REFEREES
Available upon request

[ 本帖最后由 ios 于 22-8-2007 17:19 编辑 ]
回复  

使用道具 举报

322#
发表于 22-8-2007 18:33:14 | 只看该作者

回复 #322 qqyang1980 的帖子

thanks i will make it shorter, and tried again

no choice.
回复  

使用道具 举报

323#
 楼主| 发表于 22-8-2007 21:04:00 | 只看该作者
IOS

找工作1.5个月,虽有电话回复,但是面试机会不多,不知道什么原因,请Leily,老大为和衣纵酒帮忙看看简历有什么问题。非常感谢!

RESUME of IOS

        PERSONAL DETAILS
Name: IOS
Email: XXX@hotmail.com
Phone (home): XXX, Mobile: XXX
Residential Status: Permanent Resident of Australia
Address: XXX, NSW, 2210
      
        PROFESSIONAL QUALIFICATIONS
        07/2002                CCIE Certificate (R&S, No. XXXX, recertificate in 2004,2006)
        01/2001                CCDP Certificate
        01/2001                CCDA Certificate
        12/2000                CCNP Certificate
        10/1999                CCNA Certificate  

        PROFILE HIGHLIGHTS
        10+ years CISCO expertise in network design and technical support
        5 years Pre & Post sales and high-end support experience with proven consulting skills
        Extensive engineering and support experiences ranging from telecom and internetworking technologies, project analysis, design and implementation of telecom networks
        Hands-on skills in installing, configuring and troubleshooting CISCO switches, routers and Firewall.
        In-depth knowledge of TCP/IP protocol suites and various routing protocols including RIP, IGRP, EIGRP, OSPF & BGP4
        Profound experience with MPLS VPN and VoIP technologies
        Hard working and creative thinking as well as responsible and proactive
        Proven excellent communication, negotiation, coordination and presentation skills.summary写的不错啊。很清楚,很让人明白你在做什么。

EMPLOYMENT HISTORY
April 2005-June 2007                 XXX
TITLE:        Senior Design Engineer (Network & Telecommunication Division)
Responsibilities:      
        Telecom system design of electric power system
        IP network design of electric power system
        Technology consultant of telecom network system of electric power system
        Technical support for system integration
Key Achievements:        Responsible for the design, consultant and engineering technical support of following engineering projects:
        Power Information Network of XXX Power Grid, the largest PIN in China, US $20.5 million, key architecture
        Power Dispatch Network of PDNet of XXX, the largest PDN in China, US $30 million, key architecture
        IDC Network and Security Design of XXX, 21 Sites, US 5m, key architecture
        The System Layout in the 11th Five years of XXX Power Grid
        The System Layout in the 11th Five years of XXX Power Grid
        SDH system of XXX Power Grid
        Won the Best Employees of XXX in 2006

挑几个你认为最能表达你的技术的项目,稍为写的细一点。个人意见,你的背景没什么问题,你可以适当在简历里强调技术的部分,把summary里的售前售后的职责去掉吧。对于一个新移民来讲,post & pre sales的工作会非常难找,偏技术的会方便一点。刚开始的时候挑一个好下手的来做吧。

June 2004-March 2005           XXX (Cisco Gold Partner)
TITLE:                Senior System Engineer      
Responsibilities:      
        Installation and maintenance of information system integration
        Provide presentation and technical proposal to customers
        Responsible for technical support for system integration
Key Achievements: Responsible for engineering implementation of following projects
        Power Dispatch Network of XXX Power Grid, US$2.5 million, team lead
        Network System of XXX Airline in XXX Airport, US$2 million
        IT infrastructure of XXX Airport(the largest airport in China), US$2.5 million, team lead,

January 2003-May 2004           XXX
TITLE:                Senior System Engineer
Responsibilities      
        Provided presentation and technical proposal to customers
        Responsible for technical support for system integration
        Implementation and maintenance of information system integration
Key Achievements:               
        OA system of XXX Telecom
        Information system integration of XXX

April 1997-December 2002    XXX( Cisco Silver Partner)
TITLE: Technical Support Team Lead (Sep.1999-Dec. 2002)
Responsibilities:        
        In charge of technical support team.
        Key account system integration support and consultant.
        Scheduling the support activities for key projects, including presentation and technical proposal.
        Network technical training to sales and technical support engineers.
Key Achievements:
As the leader of the technical team of South china, I managed all technical support for system integration of information system. Under my leadership, the technical team of South China became the No.1 technical team in the whole company. I lead my technical team to implement the following key engineering projects
        XXX 163/169 Network Project (XXX, China Telecom), US$5 million, key architecture
        XXX City internetworking Networks(XXX, China Telecom),US$3million, key architecture
        XXX Telecom BRAS system 2001(China Telecom), ,US$3million, key architecture

TITLE: Product Support Lead (Jan.1999—Aug. 1999)
Responsibilities:               
        Technical support and training on Cisco internetworking & IBM RS/6000.
        Responded quickly with system engineer for various IT products
        Team leader of inside sales.
Key Achievements:
        As a vice manger, I assisted the manager to manage the technical team;
        As a Systems Engineer, I gained extensive working experiences on telecom and Internetworking technologies, project analysis, design and implementation on telecommunication networks.

TITLE: Customer Support Lead (Apr. 1997 —Dec. 1998)
Responsibilities:
        Responsible for technical support and sales of Telecommunication Solution, SYBASE, Cisco, SUN and IBM equipment in Zhejiang Province
Key Achievements:
        Offered fundamental training on network knowledge and network products for the staff and provided consulting and technical support for the projects in Zhejiang Province.
        XXX Telecom Billing System, US$5 million
        XXX Telecom Switch Network Management System, US$2 million
        Won the Best Employees of XXX in 1998.

EDUCATION
        1994 – 1997                        Master of Engineering in Material Science
        1990 – 1994                        Bachelor of Engineering in Material Science
                                College of Materials Science & Engineering
                                XX University of Technology, Guangzhou China
      
LANGUAGES SKILL
English, Chinese (Mandarin & Cantonese)

REFEREES
Available upon request

你的简历不错,背景也挺好,可能是还没遇到合适的机会吧,或者就是你应聘的职位比你的经验来说太junior了,有over qualified的问题。另外你跳槽MS很频繁。你的稳定性可能也是很大的concern,你要想一下如何把这个问题解决好。因为你都没写公司,是不是有一些工作是在一个集团下面的?还是有一些职位只是内部调动?如果是这样,建议改成这种格式

XX/1997-XX/2001       XXX company
                               XX/1997-XX/1998
                                Title

这样看上去会稳定性好一点,如果不是这种情况,那你最好思考一下每一次跳槽的理由,如何说服别人对你打消这种疑虑。


[ 本帖最后由 leily 于 22-8-2007 20:07 编辑 ]
回复  

使用道具 举报

324#
发表于 22-8-2007 21:29:08 | 只看该作者
谢谢Leily的帮助。根据意见修改!
1997-2001的是一个公司的不同部门。
回复  

使用道具 举报

325#
发表于 22-8-2007 22:01:27 | 只看该作者
303#真的很难改吗?还是无药可就呢?万能的FREEOZ呀,救救我吧!
回复  

使用道具 举报

326#
发表于 23-8-2007 14:32:10 | 只看该作者
看到大家的工作经历都好丰富,觉得有些惭愧。

我的问题就是没有什么经验,而且没有自己的专业(国内是英语本科,硕士也是英语语言学方面的)。在澳洲来了3年,前一年半都是在newsagency打工。去年2月份开始学习customs broker的课程,找到一份进口公司的shipping assistant的工作。今年4月份动了换工作的心思,因为做的事情太简单,而且对我学的customs课程没有帮助。很快我就通过agent找到了现在的工作,在一家freight forwarder做customs clerk (job registration). 可是我干了3个多月却一点都不开心,很迷茫。

先说说我现在工作的公司吧,公司不算大,20个人,是典型的家族企业,老爸也是老板和两个儿子一个女儿都在这儿工作,儿子女儿好像工作都不卖力,感觉很不好。人员流动很大,刚来3个月,在这儿结交的3个好友都先后离去,他们分别都只在这儿工作了11个月,5个月和3个月。我想离开的最重要的原因就是我觉得在这儿没有发展,当时面试的时候,经理曾经许诺我3-6个月就让我做customs方面的工作(compiler/classifier),可是两个星期前一对一谈话,我的supervisor明确说,至少要等到明年才有这种可能。

还有一个学期我的学习就要结束了,可是我到现在还没有跟学习直接相关的工作经验,明年的全国考试铁定没戏,因为考试中有很多东西都是跟工作直接相关的。我真的很希望能够从事compiler/classifier的工作。 在现在这个公司呆下去又担心苦等也是白搭,他们好像就没有培养我的意思。这两天在找工网站上看了看,compiler这方面的工作真的不多,而且都是要工作经验,跟几个主要的中介联系,人家也是打哈哈,没有经验人家根本不希罕,真的很烦躁,我该怎么办啊~~
回复  

使用道具 举报

327#
发表于 23-8-2007 14:36:39 | 只看该作者
Rachael L


Competencies and Skills

•Superb data entry skills
•High attention to details
•Sound computer skills in Word, Excel, Outlook and EDI enterprise
•Excellent time management and self-organization skills
•Outstanding verbal and written communication
•A dedicated team player


Working Experiences


May 07 - Current        Customs Clerk
                xxxx Customs Brokeage

Responsibilities:        -Registration of import sea and air shipments
                              -Verification of documents
                -Compiling customs files and matching documents
                            -Liaison with clients and shipping lines
                -Obtaining transhipment details
                -Assisting with cartage enquiries

Apr 06 - Apr 07        Shipping & Purchasing Assistant
                                xxxx Australia Pty Ltd

Responsibilities:        -Liaise with overseas suppliers, export agents and Freight Forwarders.
                                -Receive shipments and maintain records
                                -Prepare all necessary export documentation
                                -Raise purchase and sales orders
                -Coordinate with sales representatives and other internal departments  

Oct 04 - Mar 06        Sales Assistant
                                xx Authorised Newsagency

Responsibilities:        -Cash handling and customer service
                -Liaise with suppliers and subagents

Mar 05 - Jun 05        Transport Surveyor
                                xxxx Transport Solutions

Responsibilities:        -Work in a team to conduct commuters survey and collect data.
                -Help with data entry



Education and Qualifications:

•        National Customs Broker Course, Holmesglen TAFE (2nd year)
•        Degrees in Arts and Applied Linguistics, Wuhan University (2000, 2004)
•        Certificate in Economics, Wuhan University (2000)


Reference

The following people know the value of my contributions and my capabilities. If you would like to contact them, please let me know and I will facilitate the arrangements.
回复  

使用道具 举报

328#
发表于 24-8-2007 13:09:53 | 只看该作者
原帖由 老大卫 于 19-7-2007 16:21 发表
不好意思,最近比较忙,来得少了,改简历时看到就改,可能没有顾及先来后到,望原谅


前一阵FREEOZ打不开,郁闷了好久,惦记这个帖子,谢谢你了,老大卫,你的建议非常有用.这里的工作确实都是些sales的职位,不管是银行还是mortgage,已经开始着手修改简历。在ADELAIDE这个地方,第一份工非常的不好找,中介面试时也说了不好找,因为我们是TR,不可能给你长期的工作,最好也就是临时的和合同的,不过我还是会耐心和继续努力。再努力几个月,可我很少看到小银行招工的广告,有些金融组织,可能阿德莱德的金融机构还是少吧。
回复  

使用道具 举报

329#
发表于 24-8-2007 19:04:04 | 只看该作者
多谢leily指点!!好好改改!
回复  

使用道具 举报

330#
发表于 25-8-2007 22:12:24 | 只看该作者


不好意思, 你的简历偶看过, 但真的实在改不出来. 因为专业不对口.
你想过过来做什么吗? 你现在的经历,偶看不出该怎么改好. 或许你有对应想申请的职位, 再看看怎么customize的比较好.
回复  

使用道具 举报

您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | FreeOZ用户注册

本版积分规则

小黑屋|手机版|Archiver|FreeOZ论坛

GMT+11, 23-12-2024 23:26 , Processed in 0.080203 second(s), 43 queries , Gzip On, Redis On.

Powered by Discuz! X3.2

© 2001-2013 Comsenz Inc.

快速回复 返回顶部 返回列表