请大牛指点一下我的farewell letter to colleagues

wonderful518

要离开公司了,想写封信给同事, 谢谢他们这几年的帮助和支持. 想写得地道点,外加一点幽默。请大牛指点一下！！非常感谢！



Dear my friends,

I wanted to take this opportunity to express my thanks to all of you who have made my time here such a great experience on both a professional and personal level. Thanks for all the support and guidance – I have learned so much and will really miss you all, my friends!!!

I have enjoyed working with a great staff of professionals. It has been a wonderful experience. I could not ask for a better group of colleagues. You are so nice and friendly,sometimes, I misunderstood what you mean and made some jokes, hahaha.... you could forget, but I do not.  I would never forget each single day I worked here. The card and photos will be my best reminder in my life.


I wish you all continued success in all your endeavors.


Sincerely,

牧马人

那么麻烦干嘛啊，一句青山不改绿水长流就得了。如果要英文就是“Blue mountain never changes. Green water always flow."让他们自己领悟去吧

yping88

I would like to have a go at it, please don't hesitate to speak up your mind if the following letter goes to the contrary to what you initially meant to convey!

Dear All,

I would like to take this opportunity to express my thanks to all of you who have made my experience here a great one on both professional and personal level.

During the years I have been here, I have the privileges to witness the wonderful approaches you have taken to what you do. I have learned how to deal with different issues professionally, how to work cooperatively with the multi-disciplinary teams and how to put things into perspective when understanding others.

All of above skills I have picked up from you make me feel so empowered and confident, and I will take them on to my next journey and make them count in my future career.

More importantly is that I have been empowered with the knowledge and wisdom you all passed on to me. And this makes my future adventures less scary and more rewarding.

No much how much I love this working team and how tough it is for me to leave, the nomads characters inside of me have been awakened. So, with the season's changing, I should move on to different pastures.

I would never forget every single day I worked here, and I will count all of you as one of the best team I could ever work with.

Also, I love the card and photos you send me, and they will be the best reminder of my experiences here in the warm memories.

I wish you all continued successes in all your endeavors.

Sincerely yours,

XXX

wonderful518

非常感谢LS 的指点, 第二,三,四段可以简单一点, 我想表达的是谢谢他们每一个人, 我真的学到了很多,不仅仅是专业知识,还有英语.虽然曾经我误解过他们的意思,闹过很多笑话, 他们可能不记得了, 但我不会忘记,  

yearshappy

yping88 发表于 11-9-2013 21:44

                               
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I would like to have a go at it, please don't hesitate to speak up your mind if the following letter ...

Dear all - much better than 'my dear friends'

lynddnyl

不要写套话就好了

nihaowohao

动机很真诚，方式也恰当。
支持楼主。

cais

You are so nice and friendly,sometimes, I misunderstood what you mean and made some jokes, hahaha.... you could forget, but I do not.

Some of you might not remember, but I could always recall moments when Alex (or Tim or John) told a joke and my laughter only came 5 seconds after everyone else, even though it's twice as loud. (add emoticon of your company online chat tools, e.g., : $ for sky, (oops) for hipchat, etc.)

浮云云艾米莉

牧马人 发表于 11-9-2013 13:51
那么麻烦干嘛啊，一句青山不改绿水长流就得了。如果要英文就是“Blue mountain never changes. Green water ...

你太有才了!!! 这个好!!

dorolam

学习了。

liluliang

Hi <your_name>,

Well folks, it’s been a pretty awesome ride.  And we sure had some lulz, didn’t we?  But the time has finally come for me to bid farewell.  After a long process of deliberation, I’ve decided to leave the profession and become a XXXX.  

I want to sincerely thank everyone for making my time at COMPANY enjoyable and rewarding, and I wish you and COMPANY all the best.

If anyone would like to stay in contact (and please do!), here’s my personal email:

XXXXXXXXXX@gmail.com

Cheers,
XXX XXXX