EA的CDR请教几个问题

hkcya

我是Mechatronics Bachelor去年年底毕业，因为Skill Assessment不在SOL上了,准备评Techonologist曲线救国。
现在写CDR，就用的大三大四的毕设和两个Project,看了之前的那个俄国人的范例，基本上就是工作流水帐，但是要注意扣住那个Summery来写。
第一篇写了1000就搞定了，会太少么？可能因为就是一个Project的缘故，感觉就是按流程解释自己做了什么，扯不出太多，这样OK么?

附上三小段，要是有过去写过的牛人，麻烦稍稍看一眼,提个意见。我就是希望别自己写得和人家应该看到的东西差开十万八千里。[]里面是对应的Engineering Technologist Summery条款

Upon the beginning of the project, I was responsible for analyzing the objectives and developing a detailed specification and requirements for the robot structure design. I listed out mechanical and software requirements based on the assignment objectives and developed an outline for software.   [ET 1.1 1.2 1.3 2.1 2.4]

I organized a team meeting where each team member was assigned to research on possible solutions to satisfy those requirements. After discussion on the technique difficulty and limitation on available components and parts, I chose the double revolution joint arm for physical structure in the second team meeting.  [ET 3.6 ]

Based on the knowledge of forward and reverse kinematics and Jacobian matrixes, I established a mathematical model that can be used to predict the velocity and trajectory of the arm. Then I created a simulation of the robot arm in Matlab which was later used in testing to determine the optimum arm lengths. I made the decision based on the provided environment details and the performance of simulation considering responding time, movement complexity and structure robustness.   [ET 1.2 1.3 1.6 2.1 2.2 2.3]

先谢过各位啦

[ 本帖最后由 hkcya 于 27-2-2013 16:50 编辑 ]

windwing00

关键是你要把summary里面提到的那些关键信息都体现在你的career episode里面就行了，每篇CE字数是有限制的。
我当时的CDR写的也跟流水帐一样的，为了保险期间，我附了工程师证书等一些其它资料作为补充。

hkcya

话说请问EA会要求提供补充资料来确认你不是胡编么？
还是我从一开始就把资料附过去比较好？

scarewing

刚完成了EA评估，看了楼主发的几段文字，觉得按着这个模子写就可以了。他们不会要求什么补充资料来确认的，因为他们也不是这方面的专家，也看不出真伪。只要你写的合乎逻辑，表明了你在CDR那个工作的主要责任，在summary那里联系上大部分要点就可以了。不需要太担心的，EA没有那么容易被fail的~~

hkcya

谢谢！