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本帖最后由 wzhszh 于 30-6-2017 16:45 编辑
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Topic:Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
When it comes to the impact of computers have on young generation, I completely agree with the opinion that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
It is true that young children could benefit from the use of computers in some ways. There are virtual tours and online museums, presenting vivid and authentic images, which expand youngsters’ worldview. For example, city children can pay virtual visits to farms and forests, while children in rural locations can learn about urban art. These visual experiences allow them to create new insights into the world. Moreover, playing computer games is a good way to develop children’s learning skills. When playing a game, youngsters may wonder which step comes next, or what the effects of different actions might be. This is helpful for their learning, especially in Math and Logical Reasoning.
Nevertheless, negative effects of using a computer everyday need to be emphasized. Children indulge themselves into the online world, which fosters antisocial behaviours. Spending too much time online, children may have less time to socialize or do exercise. It is definitely detrimental to their overall wellbeing. Apart from this, a virtual world is sometimes dangerous especially to children who possess less knowledge of true or false. For instance, children may imitate aggressive behaviours shown in video games. They may also have access to pornographic information without limitations. If children continued browsing these webpages without supervision, there would be more serious consequences.
To sum up, while it seems that computers provide sound benefits to the young generation, I personally believe that they are producing more issues, and effective supervision is in need. |
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