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上次就是因为写作害我现在不能申请州担保，准备再考一遍。研究了剑桥里的几篇考官范文，背了一些好词好句，对写作7分还是没什么概念，不知怎样才算合格..
发篇刚练的作文，求指点，求修改，求拍砖..！
As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing.
What factors contribute to job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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People spend more than one third of their lifetime at work. For most of them, a job is not just a way to earn a living, but a way to gain fulfillment and self -satisfaction.
What factors are key to gain job satisfaction? In my opinion, there are three major points that leads to it: the satisfying payment, the comfortable working environment and the friendly relationship between colleagues. Payment is essential to an employee because that directly effect the life quality of themselves, and even their families. Most people work so hard for one whole year in the hope of having a huge yearly bonus. Beside payment, it is also a comfy working environment that most employees care about. Nobody wants to work in a noisy, dark or cold place after all. Last but not least, the relationship between colleagues is not an ignorable factor too. A company, or even an office could be seen as a mini society. When everyone around is friendly and easy going, willing to help each other, the job satisfaction of every employee would raise, undoubtedly.
As we all know, the world is no perfection, which means the reality is always not so appealing as we imagine. Some people are struggling to feed their families by working over 10 hours a day with little pay. Some are working hard in the condition lack of water, sunshine or even enough air. Some are involved in office politics and seeing colleagues as enemies.
However, even though it is unlikely that everyone could be happy about their work, there are many ways to improve the job satisfaction of the employees. If the factors identified above implemented, then more workers would enjoy doing their jobs.
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[ 本帖最后由 cccaat 于 18-1-2011 03:02 编辑 ] |
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发表于 18-1-2011 02:58:18
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