澳洲的同事和朋友帮我纠正过的句子(1)

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B: My landlord gave me ride this morning because he was going to city to give blood.
G: a ride

B: All my landlord’s children married to a person who is from a single family( parent are divorced)
G: My landlord's son married a person from a single family (divorced parents).

B: How long is course? (How long it takes to finish your course?)
G: How long is the course? How long will it take to finish your course?

B: There is Chinese restaurant on the Marion road. It is on the left-hand side of the road when you head to city direction. It is opposite a patrol station.
G: There is a Chinese restaurant on Marion Road. It is on the left hand side when you're heading towards the city. It is opposite a petrol station.

B: What do you the lady who is writing the receipt.
G: What do you think of the lady who is writing the receipt.

B: Laptop hard drive is very fragile. Try to avoid move the laptop too often. It is a good idea to buy an external hard drive and backup your data monthly or fortnightly. You can buy another laptop but you cannot buy your data back.
G: The laptop hard drive is very fragile.Try not to move it too much. It's a good idea to buy an external drive for monthly or fortnightly backups. You can always buy another laptop, but you can't buy back your lost data.

B: It is not easy to setup you gmail account on outlook express. You have to take extra steps to set up your email account so that you can download message from gmail. In the mean time, you have to use a trick to unlock your email in google otherwise POP access doesn’t work.
G: It's not easy to setup your gmail account on Outlook Express. You have to take extra steps to setup your email account for downloading messages from gmail. In the mean time, you have to use a trick to unlock your email in google, otherwise POP doesn't work.

B: 36ers won the basketball match last Friday. They won by 27 points. The attendances were very good. They played townsvill. There was a 40-year-old player in the team. He played very well for his age. He scored 20 points.
G: Last Friday, the 36ers won the basketball. They won by 27 points. There were many spectators. They played in Townsville. One of the players was 40 years old. He played very well for his age. He scored 20 points.

[ 本帖最后由 du0012 于 6-4-2010 20:51 编辑 ]

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