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Dear Jack,
I am really glad that you and your family are coming to visit me. I am writing to give you some information about your upcoming trip.
As far as the accommodation is concerned, you don’t have to worry about it at all. My house is big enough to accommodate all of you. My parents would be more than happy if you could stay at my home with us.
As you may know, there are so many fascinating tourist attractions in this city, and it would take you lots of time if you visit them in turn. Actually, you have to visit them all. Some places of interest are just similar. Below are some places that you couldn’t miss, the Badaling Great Wall, the Bird’s Nest and the Summer Palace.
By the way, it is summer in the city. You had better avoid any outings at noons, as it could be rather hot. Anyway the night view of the city in summer is also wonderful.
Hope you enjoy your trip and I look forward to seeing you soon.
With love,