雅思写作范文-跨国旅游兴盛的好坏-陆文波原创范文

澳洲雅思

跨国旅游兴盛的好坏-陆文波原创范文

Never before was travelling to foreign countries so convenient and popular as in this century. This phenomenon is partially attributed to improved technology and cheap flight tickets. Facing this travel frenzy, some are concerned that it will bring about too many side effects whilst others insist that is should be supported and maintained.



Admittedly, cross-border travel has more downsides than one. Firstly, the carbon dioxide planes emitted is reported to be disproportionately more than that emitted by other transportation means. The carbon dioxide will lead to ozone layer thinning and thereby increase the probability of people contracting skin cancer. Moreover, being easier and more convenient to travel among countries means that some criminals could flee to other countries after committing hideous crimes. This will pose a threat to local security and community stability.



However, the downsides cannot overshadow its upsides. For starters, travelling around the world with more ease could expand individuals’ horizons and stimulate their love of life and they will be more productive at work in the future. Moreover, companies could visit foreign markets more conveniently than before and as a result, they could locate potential target market and sell goods there or buy materials from there if the price is competitive enough. If a company could flourish this way, employees will benefit and the society in which companies are operating will be more stable and harmonious. Last but not least, if more and more people are afforded opportunities to go to other countries, there will be less misunderstanding and more respect among countries. All these will contribute to a diverse but harmonious culture.



To sum up, despite the numerous drawbacks mentioned above, travelling to other countries with more convenience and ease is, by and large, a positive development.

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nlb

我疯了，跨国旅游破坏臭氧层。跨国旅游罪犯就能到处跑？这算是缺点？

文章写的确实范文，但是这逻辑是否也要占个很大分数，还是现在的教育失败到这种地步了，非要胡诌和牵强么。。。

牧马人

你咋没完没了在这做雅思广告

youmin

文笔真生涩，还存在若干错误，
实在误人哪

金鱼和农夫

嗨 我是一来估摸着这里雅思冲七的人大概喜欢  二来对这雅思哥执着的发帖精神有所打动，没人回帖人家也照样发贴啊而且就喜欢在我们布村这个电线杆上贴   因此城管一直没出来抄单啊

cstone

彻头彻尾的雅思八股文。前年还大批读来着，现在咋看不下了呢。可能是ABC和BBC看多了吧。如果扣除模板、大词和无逻辑的论据就啥都不剩了。
建议移到学习或签证版去，这里的人恐怕都没兴趣。如果真想看的话，杨帆的雅思写作书风格类似，但水平要高太多。