Freeoz工作室的简历样本(目前不提供修改，历史记录仅供参考)

maggieZN

麻烦你，我老公在国内是教钢琴的，在那边有可能找到相关工作么？谢谢

maggieZN

老大卫，我刚毕业时是做编程工作的用VB，但是后来就转行做销售了，现在几乎就丢的一干二净了，你说我该不该也把这段工作写在简历里，还有我还有没有必要关注一下技术方面的东西？

Apple_Lui

来悉尼近2个月了，发出求职email近20份，得到的却只是auto reply，没有接过任何一个agent的电话。也有尝试过打电话主动找agent，但不是正在开会就是正在面试。现在把CV从4页纸改为了2页纸并上传到这里，希望能得到工作室和论坛各位的一些意见。另外，还有一点不是太清楚：为免有overqualified之嫌，我准备把以前manager的title隐去，但是不知道应该是另外编一个title给自己好呢，还是干脆不提以前的position（但这样的CV好像比较少见）。同时，以前雇主给出的reference letter都有提到我当时的实际职位，万一agent要看我的reference letter，又该如何应对呢？

qian403

贴出我的简历：IT Tester 。 136PR。请高手指点啊！

Resume
Personal Data
Name: Qian
Sex: Male
Date of Birth:
Nationality: Chinese
Tel:
Add:  Chaoyang District, Beijing, China

Skills Highlight
        Rich development experience in Microsoft Visual Basic, Visual C++, Visual C# SQL Server
        Skilled in software testing
        Good knowledge of Symantec individual/enterprise network security products
        Good understanding of Windows 2000, Windows XP, Windows98/ME
        Proficient in MS SQL Server 2000, Access

Education
09/1997 – 07/2001         University （校名忽略先，不给母校丢脸了。呵呵，找到工作再公布）
        Qualifications: Bachelor Degree of Science
        Major: Information Science
        
Career History
03/2005 – present         Symantec ( Beijing )Information Technology Co., Ltd.
        Position: Software Testing Engineer
        Main duties:
        Ensuring the smooth operation of the Chinese versions of Symantec individual and network security products and proving users with total network security solutions;
        Designing methods and procedures for the localization of Symantec individual and network security software series;
        Designing localization testing plan, testing cases and testing tools for the Symantec individual and network security software series;
        Establishing testing environment and implementing localization testing;
        Coordinating team work;
Projects participated in:
        Making and testing of patching packages for Symantec series
        Testing of Norton Internet Security 2006/2005
        Testing of Symantec Mail Security for Domino 6.0/5.1/5.0
                Testing of Symantec Ghost Solution 2.01/2.0/1.1
                Testing of Symantec SEP 5.1
My duties in the projects:
        Establishing testing environment;
        Designing testing plan;
        Compiling testing cases;
        Allocating personnel and implementing testing task
        Simulating network attacks and finding solutions for safety holes
Testing  tools: Preflat, Diircdev, Equalizer Total Command  ( All these tools is designed by Symantec )
Testing platforms:
        WINDOWS VISTA
                WINDOWS 2000 Server/Professional operating system
        WINDOWS 2003 Server operating system
        WINDOWS XP Professional operating system
        WINDOWS 98/ME operating system
        IBM Domino 7.0/6.5/6.0/5.5
        IBM Lotus Notes 7.0/6.5/6.0/5.5

04/2004 – 03/2005        Beijing Beyondsoft Co., Ltd
        Position: Software Testing Engineer
        Main duties:
        Analyzing computer application software system;
        Designing & analyzing database ;
        Building test environment;
        Writing software test tool codes;
        Writing test plan , test case ;
        Testing software;
Major projects participated in:
        Testing of Microsoft MSN Search website, a new generation of searching platform similar to Google, Yahoo
        Testing of Microsoft MSN release project
Main duties:
        Analyzing computer application software system;
        Designing & analyzing database ;
        Building test environment;
        Writing software test tool codes;
        Writing test plan , test case ;
        Testing msn search web site , msn hotmail , msn messenger ;
Technologies used: 1. Software testing technique; 2. Visual C# developing technique;  3) ODBC database visiting technique; 4) ASP technique .
Testing platforms: Windows XP/2000
Database: MS SQL Server 2000, Access

06/2003—03/2004        Beijing StarSoft Science and Technology Co., a company dedicated to the development of network games
        Position: Software Development and Testing Engineer
        Major projects participated in:
                Developing computer network gambling software for foreign  gambling companies, with  products developed including: Dragon Fighting Tiger, Wheel, and Horse Racing
Duties in the project:
        Analyzing and designing system structure;
        Analyzing and designing database;
        Analyzing , designing and Programming network security assurance module;
        Programming chief function modules;
        Programming user identity checking module;
        Programming user management module;
        Programming communication parameter setup module;
        Programming communication transmission module;
Technologies employed:
WinSock network programming, multithread programming, ADO/ODBC database visiting, ASP
Developing tools: VB6.0, VC6.0
Developing platform: Windows 2000 Sever operating system
Database: SQL Server 2000


09/2001 – 06/2003        Beijing Founder Order Computer System Co., Ltd.
        Position: Software Designer
        Main duties:
        Designing and analyzing computer application software system;
        Designing & analyzing database structure;
        Writing software codes;
        Upgrading & revising software program and database structure;
        Testing logic and validity of application software;
Projects participated in:
          Development of Electronic Seal Verification System for Commercial Banks
Duties in the project:
        Analyzing and designing system structure;
        Analyzing and designing database;
        Analyzing, designing and Programming network security assurance module;
        Programming chief function modules;
        Programming log management module;
        Programming user management module;
        Programming the check loss-reporting module;
        Programming communication transmission module;
Technologies employed:
WinSock network programming, multithread programming, ADO/ODBC database visiting, ASP
Developing tools: VB6.0, VC6.0
Developing platform: Windows 2000 Sever operating system
Database: SQL Server 2000

Interests
        Internet Surfing, Football, Basketball and Traveling

老大卫

Resume
Personal Data
Name: Qian
Sex: Male
Date of Birth:
Nationality: Chinese(加australia PR)
Tel:
Add:  Chaoyang District, Beijing, China (用email, 不写海外地址）

Skills Highlight
        Rich development experience in Microsoft Visual Basic, Visual C++, Visual C# SQL Server （不要用rich等修饰词，写出具体几年）
        Skilled in software testing
        Good knowledge of Symantec individual/enterprise network security products（同上）
        Good understanding of Windows 2000, Windows XP, Windows98/ME(good understanding这样得词太弱了）
        Proficient in MS SQL Server 2000, Access

Education
09/1997 – 07/2001         University （校名忽略先，不给母校丢脸了。呵呵，找到工作再公布）
        Qualifications: Bachelor Degree of Science
        Major: Information Science （学士学位放前面，海外学校名放后面）
        
Career History
03/2005 – present         Symantec ( Beijing )Information Technology Co., Ltd.(公司规模描述)
        Position: Software Testing Engineer
        Main duties:
        Ensuring the smooth operation of the Chinese versions of Symantec individual and network security products and proving users with total network security solutions;
        Designing methods and procedures for the localization of Symantec individual and network security software series;
        Designing localization testing plan, testing cases and testing tools for the Symantec individual and network security software series;
        Establishing testing environment and implementing localization testing;
        Coordinating team work;
Projects participated in:
        Making and testing of patching packages for Symantec series
        Testing of Norton Internet Security 2006/2005
        Testing of Symantec Mail Security for Domino 6.0/5.1/5.0
                Testing of Symantec Ghost Solution 2.01/2.0/1.1
                Testing of Symantec SEP 5.1
My duties in the projects:
        Establishing testing environment;
        Designing testing plan;
        Compiling testing cases;
        Allocating personnel and implementing testing task
        Simulating network attacks and finding solutions for safety holes
Testing  tools: Preflat, Diircdev, Equalizer Total Command  ( All these tools is designed by Symantec )
Testing platforms:
        WINDOWS VISTA
                WINDOWS 2000 Server/Professional operating system
        WINDOWS 2003 Server operating system
        WINDOWS XP Professional operating system
        WINDOWS 98/ME operating system
        IBM Domino 7.0/6.5/6.0/5.5
        IBM Lotus Notes 7.0/6.5/6.0/5.5

04/2004 – 03/2005        Beijing Beyondsoft Co., Ltd （公司性质，规模描述）
        Position: Software Testing Engineer
        Main duties:
        Analyzing computer application software system;
        Designing & analyzing database ;
        Building test environment;
        Writing software test tool codes;
        Writing test plan , test case ;
        Testing software;
Major projects participated in:
        Testing of Microsoft MSN Search website, a new generation of searching platform similar to Google, Yahoo
        Testing of Microsoft MSN release project
Main duties:
        Analyzing computer application software system;
        Designing & analyzing database ;
        Building test environment;
        Writing software test tool codes;
        Writing test plan , test case ;
        Testing msn search web site , msn hotmail , msn messenger ;
Technologies used: 1. Software testing technique; 2. Visual C# developing technique;  3) ODBC database visiting technique; 4) ASP technique .
Testing platforms: Windows XP/2000
Database: MS SQL Server 2000, Access

06/2003—03/2004        Beijing StarSoft Science and Technology Co., a company dedicated to the development of network games
        Position: Software Development and Testing Engineer
        Major projects participated in:
                Developing computer network gambling software for foreign  gambling companies, with  products developed including: Dragon Fighting Tiger, Wheel, and Horse Racing
Duties in the project:
        Analyzing and designing system structure;
        Analyzing and designing database;
        Analyzing , designing and Programming network security assurance module;
        Programming chief function modules;
        Programming user identity checking module;
        Programming user management module;
        Programming communication parameter setup module;
        Programming communication transmission module;
Technologies employed:
WinSock network programming, multithread programming, ADO/ODBC database visiting, ASP
Developing tools: VB6.0, VC6.0
Developing platform: Windows 2000 Sever operating system
Database: SQL Server 2000


09/2001 – 06/2003        Beijing Founder Order Computer System Co., Ltd.
        Position: Software Designer
        Main duties:
        Designing and analyzing computer application software system;
        Designing & analyzing database structure;
        Writing software codes;
        Upgrading & revising software program and database structure;
        Testing logic and validity of application software;
Projects participated in:
          Development of Electronic Seal Verification System for Commercial Banks
Duties in the project:
        Analyzing and designing system structure;
        Analyzing and designing database;
        Analyzing, designing and Programming network security assurance module;
        Programming chief function modules;
        Programming log management module;
        Programming user management module;
        Programming the check loss-reporting module;
        Programming communication transmission module;
Technologies employed:
WinSock network programming, multithread programming, ADO/ODBC database visiting, ASP
Developing tools: VB6.0, VC6.0
Developing platform: Windows 2000 Sever operating system
Database: SQL Server 2000

Interests
        Internet Surfing, Football, Basketball and Traveling

技术我不熟，不过个人感觉没有突出自己得特长，只是简单说明自己在做什么。想想申请同样得职位，你比其他候选人有什么优势。

另外，5年跳四家公司，稍微多了一点，求职时想好自己得说辞。

blueflyingpig

看到救星了,我刚毕业的,没什么工作经验,找工作一直没有音讯啊.郁闷S我了,请指点指点我.

Objective       Accounting focus on business environment

Education
2006          Monash University
Post graduate diploma in Accounting
2004-2006          Deakin University
Bachelor of Commerce
Major in Commercial Law
2002-2003          Holmes Collage
Diploma of International Trade
1998-2001      South China University of Technology
               Graduation certificate of Economic Law

Summary of Skills
        Demonstrated effective verbal communication skills through sales experience
        Proven research and analytical skills including qualitative and quantitative methods as exemplified by thesis work
        Academic assignments have developed my skills in producing grammatically correct and intelligent written communication
        Highly developed interpersonal skills strengthened through customer service experience
        Participation in both sporting teams and work teams has enhanced my ability to work collaboratively with others and contribute to team goals
        Highly proficient in written and spoken Chinese
        Proficient in Microsoft Office

Employment History
April 2007-current       Tower sushi, St Kilda
                      Counter hand   
Responsibilities:      
        working to high standards of customer care and food hygiene
        Quick mentally calculate every purchase
        Maintaining and securing of premises and equipment

2004-2006            Defries industries Pty Ltd, Keyborough
Office/processing Assistant
Responsibilities:
        Finish all the processing task with specify instruction
        Help with orders entry, invoicing sending
        Document sorting and reception jobs

August 2004          Real girl clothing, Melbourne
                    Sales assistance
Responsibilities:
        Develop good sales skill.
        Organizes stocks in perfect order

March-November 2003    Malvern café
                       Waitress
Responsibilities:
         Build up great customers’ relationship
         Provide high standard service and customers care.

August-December 2000    Economy Adjudgement Court
                       Judge Assistant
Responsibilities:
        Organize cases schedule.
        handle most document jobs of judge
        sort records and files
        take part into the whole process of case
        assist the investigation and record the evidence  

Voluntary Activities
26th May, 2007     Think Pink for breast cancer fund foundation Ball

Interests: Watching movies, fishing, traveling, badminton, tabletenies, bowling, snorkeling, reading, internet surfing

老大卫

楼上的简历要重写，你去申请会计的工作，什么会计的经历都不写，就写你打工做服务员的经历人家怎么会要你？都删了。想想自己有什么专业相关经历
skill summary也不对，都是套话，想想自己有什么特色，比如学习成绩方面，专业技术方面

不容易啊，98年读书读到现在。是该好好找工了。

Apple_Lui

请问老大卫有没时间看看我贴的resume（124楼）？我之前投过Management accountant类的工作，但是就连电话面试的机会都没有。我自信自己的英语能力可以应对澳洲的生活和工作，但由于缺乏local experience，目前颇为矛盾不知该投会计类的何种职位，还望高人指点啊。

老大卫

楼上请贴出来好吗？

Apple_Lui

先谢谢了！

Apple Lui
Address:
Telephone:
Email:   

Career Objective
Seeking a supervisory position that utilizes my experiences and skills to generate staff effectiveness, enhance productivity, and meet organizational goals.

Skills and Achievement
Planning
        Prepared annual budgeting and quarterly forecasting
        Managed capital expenditure project and obtained capital projects approval from the headquarter
        Reviewed capacity and headcount
        Made financial projects

Analysis
        Produced monthly output variance report and explored potential problem with line managers
        Tracked capital expenditure project
        Made appropriate recommendations and advice of the impact on the business.
        Reconciled general ledger accounts

Development
        Appointed as team leader for SAP FI and CO module during the implementation in two multi-national companies respectively.
        Improved output variance reporting system resulting in significantly efficiency improvements and cost savings
        Established fix asset registration system
        Setup accounting policy and procedure according to SOX

Management Skills
        Communicated efficiently to senior management in headquarter
        Negotiated with site managers for further cost saving projects
        Persuaded the senior management in modifying investment budget to expand the capacity for future market needs
        Led more than 6 staffs to accomplish SAP FI module implementation within 7 months

Working Experience
A Company Limited, China
Accounting Manager, 2005.9 to 2006.10

B Company Limited, China
Technical Controlling Section Manager, 2003.10 to 2005.9

C Company Limited, China
Financial Manager, 2002.09 to 2003.10

B Company Limited, China
Technical Controlling Supervisor, 2000.07 to 2002.08

D Company Limited, Hong Kong
Accounting Manager, 1999.01 to 2000.07

F Construction Corp. (located in USA)
Office Accountant, 1997.01 to 1998.12

Education
University of XX (USA), Major on Business administration emphasizing on Accounting

cantomel

先交代一下自己的情况.国内本科读电气工程, 2.5年电子制造业工作经验. 04年到canberra读工程master,也是制造方面为主.PR拿到以后搬到melbourne,今天刚好两个月. 由于制造业在澳洲机会不多,想重点找electrical engineering的工作.但没有这方面的工作经验,graduate和entry level的工作又竞争不过本地的undergraduate和tafe学生. 工作投了不少回复不多, 面试了两个也给拒了. 感觉主要原因是没有过硬的技术底子. 有打算去tafe读part-time工程diploma学点实用的知识,如CAD/CAM (也是自己一直有兴趣的方向), 同时继续找工作.

话说多了 ,帖简历,请各位给点意见. 谢谢!

Full name
Address, Telephone, Email

OBJECTIVE
To start my professional career in the field of Manufacturing or Electrical Engineering in an Australian or global leading engineering organization.

SKILLS SUMMARY
Communication
·        Well-established interpersonal skills acquired while working as a process engineer at A Ltd. and involvement of group projects in postgraduate study.
·        Writing skills gained through writing the Part Line Verification (PLV) system development process reports and user manual as the PLV system coordinator at A Ltd.

Teamwork
·        As the PLV system coordinator I effectively worked in a project team with colleagues from different departments.
·        I had participated in a number of group assignments while doing postgraduate study.

Analytical Skills
·        I gained analytical ability in my postgraduate studies involving computer modeling, statistical data processing of Lean Production systems, and their financial analysis.

Computer Skills
·        Intermediate knowledge of AUTOCAD gained through 2D CAD course at xx Institute.
·        Skill in mathematics and simulation software such as Matlab, Extend and S-plus.
·        MS Project, Word, Excel and PowerPoint.

Languages       
·        I speak Chinese Mandarin and Cantonese fluently as well as English. I am also learning Spanish.

EDUCATION
2004 – 2006        Master of Engineering (Honours) in Manufacturing and Electrical Engineering
Australian National University (ANU), Canberra
         
1996 – 2000        Bachelor of Engineering in Electrical Technology
        Guangdong University of Technology, Guangdong, China

ENGINEERING EMPLOYMENT
2000 – 2002        Process Engineer, A Ltd. China

Responsibilities and Skills developed
·        Part Line Verification (PLV) System Coordinator in Sept 2000 responsible for system implementation in Surface Mounting Technology (SMT) production lines.
·        Responsible for generating and maintaining all programs of SMT mounting machines from 2001 to 2002.
·        Organizing PLV training sessions for operators and engineers.
·        Routine maintenance for SMT machines.
·        Stock control for spare part warehouse.
·        Electronic manufacturing experience and knowledge of electrical equipment gained through two difference job titles.
·        Strengthened communication skills through teamwork with team members of a cross functional base.

ADDITIONAL EMPLOYMENT
2006 – 2007        Shop Assistant, XX supermarket
       
        Responsibilities
·            Serving customers and answering customer enquiries
·            Maintaining and controlling stocks
·            Cash handling

2006        Part-time Warehouse Technician, xx Auctions
                       
Responsibilities
·        Identifying and categorizing IT equipment
·        Booking items into inventory software system
·        Maintaining inventory system

ADDITIONAL EXPERIENCE AND INTERESTS
·        Voluntary worker for Volunteer xx, responsible for helping children with mental disability to study.
·        I play soccer, swim and work out in the gym.

REFERENCES

m3love

cover letter
Chunxi546ao W645g
Address:7/20 Vccccy st Beccccgh 3204
Tel: 0445436
23/05/2007
Dear Sir or Madam,
I wish to apply for the position of IT support & Network
I have enclosed my resume to provide you with an overview of my experience. I am a well-qualified IT supporter with an excellent record of achievement in building value through expertise in:
Software：SQL Server 2000, Oracle, Server-U, Office2003, PhotoShop,
DreamweaverMX, FTP，Outlook Express ，Adobe Acrobat
Ghost……

Systems： MS/DOS, Windows 2000, Windows NT, Windows 2000 Server
          Windows XP, Windows 2003 Server, Windows Vista
（setup diversified system software）

Hardware： Able to resolve the problems on hardware sharply，and rapid assemble PCs
           
Languages：C++, VC, ASP, JAVA, Microsoft.Net

Networks： Router debugging, Setup various  LAN/WAN，Patch Cables/ Switches/ Hubs/ Wireless
I have four years experience working in IT support and Network area and a solid commitment to this important staff service field. My foundation of technical expertise stems from a hand-on development and leadership background along with project management and implementation experience.
If your firm currently has a need for a thorough and insightful IT personnel with a solid performance track, I would be very pleased to discuss with you the value that my strengths and experience can bring. Please contact me at the above address so that I can provide you with any additional information you may require. I am looking forward to hearing from you!
I am willing to be a volunteer if possible  
Yours sincerely
Alpha Wang


希望能给点指导

I2004

辛苦了，各位。我呢，悉尼毕业后有过短期的工作经验，有accounting 的和data entry,前者不喜欢那里的工作氛围（华人的），走了。后者是个contract. 然后怀孕生孩子，现在想重返战场，可是就连个data entry都没找到。 想问我的summary 该怎么写，return to work mom ......因为没法解释这进2年的空档。
我准备把在家这段时间写成office admin for a family business....不知怎么样？

kingsking

好人啊。
愿上帝保佑我们。

sisleycpa1

R。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

[ 本帖最后由 sisleycpa1 于 18-6-2007 10:32 编辑 ]

老大卫

原帖由 sisleycpa1 于 12-6-2007 01:55 发表
Resume


ACCOUNTANT
CPA Aus. ASA
Strong PC Skills
Excellent attention to details
Excellent communication skills
A desire to work as an integral member of a team

CORE COMPETENCIES
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不好意思，这份简历我和leily是不会改的。给你个建议。求职的时候一定要把对方的名字写对，否则人家连看都不看的。

老大卫

原帖由 I2004 于 9-6-2007 22:04 发表
辛苦了，各位。我呢，悉尼毕业后有过短期的工作经验，有accounting 的和data entry,前者不喜欢那里的工作氛围（华人的），走了。后者是个contract. 然后怀孕生孩子，现在想重返战场，可是就连个data entry都没找 ...

就写maternity leave就可以了。个人认为造假反而不好。不过之前如果你没有太长的工作经历，那现在重返职场难度很大。就当从头开始吧

老大卫

原帖由 m3love 于 8-6-2007 22:57 发表
cover letter
Chunxi546ao W645g
Address:7/20 Vccccy st Beccccgh 3204
Tel: 0445436
23/05/2007
Dear Sir or Madam,
I wish to apply for the position of IT support & Network
I have enclosed ...

你列的东西太多了。没有重点。Cover letter要根据广告太改写，突出对方要的重点。几句话就可以了，目的是为了让人看你的简历。建议你看看报纸上的房屋出售广告，看看人家是怎么突出自己房子特点的。

你可以写成这样几条：
4 years experience in the field of…
Extensive knowledge of….
Familiar with…




I am willing to be a volunteer if possible  (你到底是求职还是祈求工作？这样写太弱了，反而人家看低了你)

If your firm currently has a need for a thorough and insightful IT personnel with a solid performance track, I would be very pleased to discuss with you the value that my strengths and experience can bring. （不要用if这样一个假设，那如果对方不要人呢？你要说，偶就是你要的人，让我们找一个机会面谈吧！）

晕菜花

原帖由 sisleycpa1 于 12-6-2007 01:55 发表
Resume


ACCOUNTANT
CPA Aus. ASA
Strong PC Skills
Excellent attention to details
Excellent communication skills
A desire to work as an integral member of a team

CORE COMPETENCIES
&# ...

昏倒， sisleycpa1你把2位老大的名字怎么写成这样了。。。。。。。

cantomel

Hi 老大卫  & Leily, please give me some advice on my resume which is the revision of the one in #132. I revised it before you comment because I have found it still has a lot of room to improve. Thanks for your time, much appreciated!

Full name
Address, Telephone, Email

OBJECTIVE
To start my professional career in the field of manufacturing or electrical engineering in an Australian or global leading engineering organization.

SUMMARY
·        2 years work experience as a Process Engineer in Electronic Manufacturing industry in which I have developed skills in manufacturing operations, and knowledge in CAD and Computer Integrated Manufacturing (CIM) software.
·        Solid knowledge of Mechanical and Electrical Engineering in automation and PLC acquired from undergraduate study of Bachelor of Engineering.
·        Intermediate skills of AUTOCAD gained from role as Process Engineering and AUTOCAD course at XXX.
·        Self-motivated person and desire to gain hands-on experience from challenging work.

SKILLS
Manufacturing Process and Operations
·        Familiar with electronic manufacturing processes particularly Surface Mounting Technology (SMT) process.
·        Knowledge of Lean Manufacturing and Just-in-time (JIT) approach gained by the one-year research project in postgraduate study.

Analytical
·        I gained analytical ability in postgraduate research that involved computer modeling, statistical data processing of Lean manufacturing systems, and their financial analysis.

Computer
·        Intermediate knowledge of AUTOCAD.
·        Skills in CIM software of GC-Place and Cimbridge.
·        Skill in mathematics and simulation software such as Matlab, Extend and S-plus.
·        MS Project, Word, Excel and PowerPoint.

Languages       
·        I speak Chinese Mandarin and Cantonese fluently as well as English. I am learning Spanish.
                  
ENGINEERING EMPLOYMENT
2000 – 2002        Process Engineer
        xxx Ltd, Guangzhou, China

Responsibilities
·        As the Part Line Verification (PLV) System Coordinator, I was responsible for system hardware installation, software implementation, operator trainings and system maintenance.
·        Responsible for generating and maintaining Surface Mounted Technology (SMT) machine programs.
·        Provided support for New Product Introduction (NPI) such as SMT programming and SMT process troubleshooting.

Achievements
·        Successfully implemented the PLV system in all 6 SMT production lines in which around 60 machines have been monitored by the PLV system.
·        Generated programs for more than 30 new products that run in 5 different production lines.

ADDITIONAL EMPLOYMENT
2006 – 2007        Shop Assistant
        xxx supermarket, Canberra
       
2006        Part-time Warehouse Technician
        xxx, Canberra
                       
Responsibilities
·        Identify and categorize IT equipment
·        Book items into inventory software system
·        Maintain inventory system

EDUCATION
2007                 Statements of Attainment in Computer Aided Drafting
Canberra Institute of Technology, Canberra

2004 – 2006        Master of Engineering (Honours) in Manufacturing and Electrical Engineering
        Australian National University (ANU), Canberra
         
1996 – 2000        Bachelor of Engineering in Electrical Technology
        Guangdong University of Technology, Guangdong, China

ADDITIONAL EXPERIENCE AND INTERESTS
·        Voluntary worker for Volunteer xxx, responsible for helping children with mental disability to study.
·        I play soccer, swim and work out in the gym.

REFERENCES

[ 本帖最后由 cantomel 于 13-6-2007 09:54 编辑 ]

傻狈

跟大家的简历一比较，我的真的是“简”历。

大学毕业那会儿，简历只有一页，黑白，标题加粗了一下，别的就什么都没有了。面试更简单，人家都快结束了，我匆匆忙忙拿着一堆的演出服装，穿着牛仔裤就进去问他们是不是在招人。跟人力资源的人谈完，就跟市场部主任谈，15分钟后就跟市场总监在扯淡了。几天后就通知签约，什么户口，档案都是公司搞定的。

第二次找工作还是那么简单，简历发到外办，有个工作人员打电话用英语跟我聊了一通，说了句你英语真好就让我面试去了。跟俩鬼在kitchenette谈了半个小时，问了我一些我都回答不上来的问题，就让我过两个星期上班去。

第三次简直就是捡回来的。鬼婆介绍的工作，跟COO, CTO在白天鹅喝了两杯咖啡就被人请上车了。

依澳洲这么严谨的招聘程序看来，我是不可能找到工作的。尤其是每个工作都要一条一条讲述自己为什么满足该职位的要求，这是我最愤恨的。

傻狼，加油加油！养家糊口就靠你了！！！

老大卫

Full name
Address, Telephone, Email

OBJECTIVE
To start my professional career in the field of manufacturing or electrical engineering in an Australian or global leading engineering organization.（你写这句话就把自己的求职范围缩小了。小公司就不敢要你了。建议散去global leading engineering organization)

SUMMARY
－－－－－2 years work experience as a Process Engineer in Electronic Manufacturing industry 。
－－－－－Master of Engineering (Honours) from Australian National University
－－－－－Rich knowledge in CAD and Computer Integrated Manufacturing (CIM) software.
－－－－－Solid knowledge of Mechanical and Electrical Engineering in automation and PLC programing
－－－－－soft skill..

                  
ENGINEERING EMPLOYMENT
2000 – 2002        Process Engineer
        xxx Ltd, Guangzhou, China

Responsibilities
·        Responsible for system hardware installation, software implementation, operator trainings and system maintenance.
·        Responsible for generating and maintaining Surface Mounted Technology (SMT) machine programs.
·        Provided support for New Product Introduction (NPI) such as SMT programming and SMT process troubleshooting.

Achievements
·        Successfully implemented the PLV system in all 6 SMT production lines in which around 60 machines have been monitored by the PLV system.
·        Generated programs for more than 30 new products that run in 5 different production lines.

ADDITIONAL EMPLOYMENT(和你申请工作无关的part time job, 全部删去）
2006 – 2007        Shop Assistant
        xxx supermarket, Canberra
       
2006        Part-time Warehouse Technician
        xxx, Canberra
                       
Responsibilities
·        Identify and categorize IT equipment
·        Book items into inventory software system
·        Maintain inventory system

EDUCATION
2007                 Statements of Attainment in Computer Aided Drafting
Canberra Institute of Technology, Canberra

2004 – 2006        Master of Engineering (Honours) in Manufacturing and Electrical Engineering
        Australian National University (ANU), Canberra
         
1996 – 2000        Bachelor of Engineering in Electrical Technology
        Guangdong University of Technology, Guangdong, China

Computer Skills
·        Intermediate knowledge of AUTOCAD.
·        Skills in CIM software of GC-Place and Cimbridge.
·        Skill in mathematics and simulation software such as Matlab, Extend and S-plus.
·        MS Project, Word, Excel and PowerPoint.

Languages       
·        IMandarin, Cantonese, basic Spanish.

ADDITIONAL EXPERIENCE
·        Voluntary worker for Volunteer xxx, responsible for helping children with mental disability to study.

REFERENCES

给你改的主要是突出你的重点，简历不是经历，人家要什么你说什么，没有必要把无关的东西写上去。技术性的简历很重要的一点是根据你申请的职位来描述简历。比如你申请PLC的工作，你就要说出相关PLC编程的经验。（这里好像大多是用西门子，ABB的。）如果你申请的是一个特殊的行业，你就要说出相关行业的技术应用经验。

另外，你懂的东西太多了，process engineer, electronic engineering, electrical engineering（过程控制，电气自动化，电子工程）都是不同的东西，主意根据广告着重一方面就可以了。

voluntary 的工作再强调一下

老大卫

原帖由 Apple_Lui 于 6-6-2007 11:13 发表
先谢谢了！

Apple Lui
Address:
Telephone:
Email:   

Career Objective
Seeking a supervisory position that utilizes my experiences and skills to generate staff effectiveness, enhance prod ...

你的简历要改有很多可以改的，你有很好的美国学历和工作背景，懂SAP，但你没有说出在每一个公司具体做什么，特别是最近几个公司做什么，有什么achievements。而且你的简历没有简单的skill summary来突出你的特长。

但说实话，再怎么改，你还是有一个致命伤，就是你跳得公司太多了。10年跳6次。基本每两年就跳一次。除非你有合适得理由，否则如果我是人事肯定不要你得，跳槽是你的惯性了。

简历其实只是一个包装的作用，职业发展生涯的自我设计才是写好一份简历的内在力量。

回头让leily来帮你看看吧，她是职业中介，可能有办法来进一步包装你。不好意思，我改不好，怕误导了你。

leily

原帖由 Apple_Lui 于 6-6-2007 11:13 发表
先谢谢了！

Apple Lui
Address:
Telephone:
Email:   

Career Objective
Seeking a supervisory position that utilizes my experiences and skills to generate staff effectiveness, enhance prod ...

我很简单的看了一下你的简历，我觉得这份简历如果投到我的手上，要找管理的岗位，可能我也不会给你面试的机会。你一共就七个月的管理经验，带过六个人。跟我手上的所有manager的职位要求都相去甚远。而且跳槽太频繁，从简历上看也没有太出彩的地方。

建议你重新修改一下你的定位目标，先取得相关的local经验，再往管理方面发展。你的背景很好啊，但是简历里都没有表达出来，想一想你的卖点在哪里，你和一般的新移民比强在什么地方，你懂什么是别的公司特别需要的，把它列出来。

好好的包装一下自己。

cantomel

谢谢老大卫!你的意见很中肯. 这份简历不是针对某份工作或方向的, 对特定工作我会根据广告要求作修改突出重点. 所谓"懂的太多"但没有一方面是精通,这就是我的弱点  关键是来澳洲读书之前没有为以后发展方向作认真考虑也没有对这里就业前景作调查,所以找工遇到不少困难. 现在从entry level工作入手, 今天刚去中介面试了一份电子维修技术员的contract工作,下星期一跟雇主面试,希望下周能给大家带来好消息吧!

cansea

我一直是做软件开发工作,开始几年主要做基于C/C++语言开发,后来转入做互联网行业软件开发,主要使用JAVA语言做了近4年的项目. 所以我的简历比较乱,因为涉及到的开发语言比较多,不够集中.我目前还是想在互联网行业里找JAVA开发的工作,所以一直想,是不是在投简历时要把C/C++的工作经历隐藏了,这样好么?因为面试的时候,对方有可能会问到这个问题.

请三位大侠帮忙看看.

Personal Information:

Last Name:
First Name: Joe
Sex: Male
Email:
Phone:
Mailing Address: Melbourne
Hobby: Tour, music and sports

Educational History:

09/1992 - 07/1996        Institution:                 University(国内)
Specialty:        Measuring

Working Experience:
12/2004 – Present        A COMPANY
        Position: Senior Software Engineer

12/2003 – 11/2004        C COMPANY
        Position: Senior Software Engineer

09/2000 – 11/2003        B COMPANY
        Position: Senior Software Engineer

12/1998 – 08/2000                S COMPANY
                                                        Position: Software Engineer

08/1996 – 11/1998        H COMPANY
        Position: Programmer

Professional Skills:

■ Operation system:
a)        Proficient in administrating Windows 2003 Advance Server and skillfully programming on MS Windows 2000 and MS Windows XP
b)        Expert in administrating HPUX, Solaris server
c)        Familiar with administrating Linux Server and capable of skillfully programming on Linux, such as Java and GNU C/C++

■ Database:
Fluent in using large-scale database and DDBMS, such as Oracle, MS SQL Server, Sybase, MySQL, Postgresql and so on; Six-year database programming experience with Oracle, tree-year with MS SQL Server and two-year for MySQL,Postgresql as well as Client/Server, Browser/Server experienced in designing database structure and programming complex database procedure & function & trigger. .
■ Programming language:
Familiar with JAVA ,C/C++, PASCAL; very experienced in programming
■ Internet programming:
Skillfully developing application software with Browser/Server structure by using programming tools such as Eclipse, Idea; Familiar with JSP/JAVASCRIPT/XML/XSL/XSQL/CSS to develop web application or create template; Familiar with the usage and configuration of Apache & Weblogic Server & Tomcat & Resin & JBoss as well as Lucene & Ioc technique and Struts, Spring, Hibernate, AJAX framework.
■Communication software programming:
Familiar with TCP/IP, UDP, FTP, TELNET,HTTP/HTTPS,WAP communication protocols, serial communication, modem communication, and WinSock communication software programming, GSM, GPRS wireless communication software programming.
■ Programming tool:
Proficient in object-oriented programming method, using developing tools such as VC++(Communication, Driver), Borland C++ Builder(MIS), Delphi(MIS&Component), Idea(EJB&Java Application), Eclipse(Java Application、JavaBean、EJB), QT(MIS) to develop software independently.
■ Project management
Analyzing and designing application software of numerous projects by using standard system analyzing and designing methods, and accumulated abundant experience in application analysis and design. Using developing tools such as ERWin, PowerDesigner, PLSQL Developer for database design and developing, and Rational Rose, ArgoUML,Together, Visio, MS Project for system analysis and design. Using CSS/ Subversion /VSS as the Version Control Management. Familiar with quick development(Ruby on Rails) and SOA(Service-Oriented Architecture).
■ Others
Good ability of English listening, speaking, reading and writing and being amiable and eager to cooperate with others

Important IT Projects:
■12/2004 – Present  A COMPANY.
Position: Senior Software Engineer
Project:
1.        Logistics Management System
Duration: 12/2004 –Present
Application&Database: Eclipse &Tomcat &XMLSPY&Oracle9i
Role: Analyst, Administrator and Developer
URL: ...
2.        Contract Purchase System
Duration: 12/2005 – 06/2006
Application&Database: Eclipse &Tomcat &XMLSPY&Oracle9i
Role: Analyst, Administrator and Developer
URL: ...

3.        Buy System
Application&Database: Eclipse &Resin &XMLSPY&Oracle9i
Role: Analyst, Administrator and Developer
URL: ...
4.        Pounchout System(Data Interface)
Application&Database: Eclipse &Tomcat &XMLSPY&Oracle9i
Role: Analyst, Administrator and Developer
URL: ...

5.        Product Search Engine & Fuwutong Search Engine
Duration: 04/2005 – 06/2005
Application&Database: Eclipse &Tomcat &XMLSPY&Oracle9i
Role: Analyst, Administrator and Developer
URL: ...


■12/2003 – 11/2004  C COMPANY
Position: Senior Software Engineer
Project: Background Management System
Duration: 12/2003 – 11/2004
Application&Database: Eclipse &Tomcat &XMLSPY&Oracle9i
Role: Analyst, Administrator and Developer
URL: ...

■09/2000 – 11/2003 B COMPANY
Position: Senior Software Engineer
Project:
1.        XML Full-text Search Engine
Duration: 10/2003 – 02/2004
Application&Database: Eclipse &Tomcat &XMLSPY&Oracle8i
Role: Analyst, Administrator and Developer

2.        ePayment Commerce Manage System
Duration: 03/2003 – 06/2003
Application&Database:C++Builder6&Eclipse &Tomcat& SQL Server2000
Role: Analyst, Administrator and Developer

3.        Sutong IC Manage System
Duration: 06/2002 – 12/2002
Application&Database: C++Builder6 &Oracle8i
Role: Analyst, Administrator and Developer

4.        ePayment Manage Platform(Duration: 01/2001 – 03/2002):
(1) IC Manage System  
(2) Device Manage System  
(3) Supervising Manage System  
(4) Call Center Service System
(5) Device Manage System(GIS Tecnology)
Application&Database: VC++6.0&C++Builder5&JBuilder6&Weblogic server&Oracle8i/SQL Server2000
Role: Analyst, Administrator and Developer

5.        IC Fill Data System(Include manage software and terminal application software)
Duration: 10/2001 – 12/2001
Application&Database: LINUX GNU C&C++Builder5&Oracle8i/SQLServer2000
Role: Analyst, Administrator and Developer

6.        Expressway & Bridge Charge(without stopping) Manage System
Duration: 10/2000 –12/2000
Application&Database: VC++6.0&Oracle8i
Role: Analyst and Developer

Detail:
a)        Analyzing and designing system together with other team leaguers. Using Rational Rose tools to construct model, Other tools, such as Project2000, Visio and so on also are used in system designing and project progress control.
b)        Designing database(ORACLE8i/SQL Server2000) structure before coding independently or cooperating with other team member. Using correlative database designing tools such as Power Designer, ERWin and so on.
c)        Organizing the project team members to program or developing the project independently.
d)        Writing the accomplished application system design documents and user manual documents independently..
e)        Having organized and led a 5-persons team to develop project.

■12/1998 - 08/2000 S COMPANY
Position: Senior Software Engineer
Project:
1.        City Public Computer System(Include MIS and terminal application software)
Duration: 01/2000 – 06/2000
Application&Database: Delphi5.0&Oracle8
Role: Analyst, Administrator and Developer

2.        Telecom Fibre-optic Testing System
Duration: 11/1999 – 05/2000
Application&Database: Delphi5.0&IntDev6.0&IIS &Oracle8
Role: Analyst and Developer

3.        Telecom Multimedia Query System
Duration: 08/1999 –10/1999
Application&Database: Delphi5.0&Oracle7/Sybase10
Role: Analyst, Administrator and Developer

4.        Telecom Cable & Inflator Control System
Duration: 04/1999 –07/1999
Application&Database: C++Builder6 &Oracle8i
Role: Analyst and Developer

5.        Telecom 170 Call Center Query System
Duration: 02/1999 –03/1999
Application&Database: Delphi3.0&Oracle7
Role: Analyst and Developer

6.        Telecom Charge Supervising and Urging System
Duration: 12/1998 –01/1999
Application&Database: Delphi3.0&Oracle7
Role: Analyst and Developer

Detail:
a) Analyzing and designing system together with other team leaguers. Using system designing tools, such as Project2000, Visio and so on also are used in system designing and project progress control.
b) Designing database structure before coding independently or cooperating with other team member. Using correlative database designing tools such as Power Designer..
c) Organizing the project team members to program or developing the project independently.
d) Writing the accomplished application system design documents and user manual documents independently..
e) Having organized and led a 5-persons team to develop project.

■08/1996 – 11/1998        H COMPANY
Position: Programmer
Detail:
a)        Participating in analyzing and designing industrial automation project, using AUTO CAD tools to draw the industrial automation drawing.
b)        Taking part in industrial automation project construction, such as Fixing the device, testing the device and so on, Meanwhile, doing the united system test.
c)        Installing, configing and testing the industrial automation software. Such as China automation software, Honeywell automation software, Norway SAS automation software and so on.
d)        Familiar with CL(Control Language) to develop control model, and using C/C++ together with INTOUCH tools to develop industrial automation control application software.
e)        Writing engineering documents of the correlative project.

[ 本帖最后由 cansea 于 15-6-2007 14:09 编辑 ]

Apple_Lui

原帖由 老大卫 于 14-6-2007 09:38 发表



你的简历要改有很多可以改的，你有很好的美国学历和工作背景，懂SAP，但你没有说出在每一个公司具体做什么，特别是最近几个公司做什么，有什么achievements。而且你的简历没有简单的skill summary来突出你 ...

谢谢老大卫，在生活中，愿意这样直面地提中肯意见的恐怕也只有相交经年的朋友了。我之前是有把responsibilities 和achievements写上的，后来觉得过于冗长（整整4页），所以就删掉，现在我会重新归纳整理的。

更谢谢你关于职业规划方面的提醒，过去数年在国内经历的基本上都是工找人而非人找工，因此确实是被动而欠缺规划。其实我与过往的雇主都有保持良好的互动，他们在我辞职时均给予非常正面的refernece letter，我相信这些“证据”能让我的未来雇主对我增添信心。同时我也会做一些合理解释，希望能说服agent和潜在雇主给予我面试的机会。

Apple_Lui

原帖由 leily 于 14-6-2007 21:58 发表


我很简单的看了一下你的简历，我觉得这份简历如果投到我的手上，要找管理的岗位，可能我也不会给你面试的机会。你一共就七个月的管理经验，带过六个人。跟我手上的所有manager的职位要求都相去甚远。而且跳 ...

感谢leily，可能我之前的cv写得不够清楚，其实我已经有近10年的管理经验。目前我准备重点从contract工着手，当然，当务之急是重新修改cv。

sisleycpa1

原帖由 老大卫 于 12-6-2007 10:00 发表



不好意思，这份简历我和leily是不会改的。给你个建议。求职的时候一定要把对方的名字写对，否则人家连看都不看的。

真的不好意思哦。。。是老大卫。。那天太匆忙，没看清楚   帮改下巴

sisleycpa1

。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

[ 本帖最后由 sisleycpa1 于 18-6-2007 10:31 编辑 ]