谁帮翻译一下呀，紧急！

无袖冬日

请各位大哥大姐大叔大爷帮我做一下这个作业呀，这是我的一个作业，但我的英文是见不得人的，所以只能求助各位能　人了，帮我用过去试译一下以下这段话。

　　当我进SAM家的时候，他正坐在地上玩他前面的一堆玩具。“SAM，你好！”我说“你好VIVIAN”他双手还玩着一辆玩具车抬头说。　我在他的身边坐下来，问他：“你在玩什么”他右手举起他的车说“这是我的车”它会跳舞。然后他双手把车翻过来，用右手按了一个小开关，再把它放在了地板上，小车开的很快，还会转弯，SAM骄傲的说，看到了吧，它跳舞的。SAM用右手抓了抓头，然后爬过去又把小车用右手抓了回来。然后递给我说“你会玩吗？”我说我可以试试，他凑过来替我把开关打开，然后认真的说，是这样的。然后他退回去用手指着地板说，把它放下去。我放下去，车开走了，他开心的笑，双手支起身子去追车了。

xblues

Members Big Brother Big Sister Uncle Abai help me to do this work ah, this is one of my work, but I can not see the English people, therefore, can only help you hotshots, I use the past to help try to translate these words following .

When I SAM into the home, he is sitting on the ground in front of him on a pile of toys. "SAM, hello!" I said, "Hello VIVIAN" he hands a toy car Wan Zhao also said the rise. I sit down to his side, asked him: "What you are playing," he raised his right hand to say "This is my car," it will dance. Then he hands the car turned over, andThe right hand by a small switch, then it on the floor, opened the car quickly, but also turn, SAM proud of that and see it, it's dance. SAM Zhua Liaozhua head with his right hand, and then climb again over the past car with his right hand grasping the back. And then handed it to me that "you will play?» "I said I can try, I Couguo functions of the switch to open, and then seriously, is this. He then returned to the floor with their hands pointed at that, to put it aside. I lay down to, the car gone, his happy smile, hands-Quzhui from the body of the car.

woody81

xblues

Sam was sitting on the floor, in front of him, there are plenty of toys, when I walked into the room.
"Hi, Sam, how are you today?", I greeted to him.
"I am good, Vivian." Sam raised his head and replied to me, didn't stop playing with a toy car.
I sit right next to him and asked, "What is this?"
"This is my car, and it can dance!" Sam, holding his car over the head, answered me.
Then he turned over the car upside down, found a switch, turned on it with his right and put the car back to the floor.
The toy car started moving very fast, and made turns automatically.
"You see, there, it is dancing!" said Sam very proudly.
............. woody 还剩一下的一半就交给你了。

无袖冬日

还有一半呀，谁帮我完成它吧， 拜托了！！！

woody81

woody81

SAM used right hand to give a scrach on his head. Then he got over to carrid the toy by his right hand."Would you play?"he passed the toy.I Said I would like to try.He closed to me ang switched it on."Like that!"He speaking seriously.Then he moved back and pointed to the floor,said"put it down".I put the car down then it was running,He smiled and looked happy,standing up to catch the car.

woody81

U should try it by yourself

xblues

我完全同意!

西澳海豚

LZ 这是你的作业阿！

学习也还能找枪手吗？

个人非常不欣赏这种行为～

你应该尽自己学生本分，努力学习！

不要做这种虚伪造假的事，今天你找人做功课，明日就找人帮你作假资料～

观念错误，心态不好！

无袖冬日

受攻击了！！没办法，我真的是不会写，我本来是去念语言的，但学校老帅听说我在国内念幼师的，正好有个CHILDCARE课在语言学校开班，就让我去那个班上念，人家都开课两个月了，我才去，我真的很难听明白老师说的，但说心里话我很用功呀，每天回来就拼命研究今天老师说的是什么，我的快译通都快让我按爆了，可老师让我写这些我还是写不出来，但也不能不交作业呀，所以只能出此下策了。各位就别攻击我了，我已经很惭愧　，很难受了，不过英文不好也不全是我的错，在国内念幼师的时候根本就没有英文这一门的。所以也没有去学。现在郁闷了！！

woody81

LS稍安勿燥！ LZ下次努力！

ubuntuhk

不是攻击你，大家是在帮你端正观念，大家帮得了你一时，帮不了一世。

c2j

lz写一份贴上来让我们帮你改吧。

nizi

chubbycat

西澳海豚

原帖由 无袖冬日 于 14-9-2008 16:22 发表

                               
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受攻击了！！没办法，我真的是不会写，我本来是去念语言的，但学校老帅听说我在国内念幼师的，正好有个CHILDCARE课在语言学校开班，就让我去那个班上念，人家都开课两个月了，我才去，我真的很难听明白 ...

所以～你人已经在OZ了？那---当时没有考IETLS吗？

就你的叙述来看，目前你的学习内容远超出你的程度。

这样子会导致学习效果低下，且难见成效，就像将幼儿送至大学听课一样----

你应该将学习内容强度降至约高於你程度的10-30％之间，这才是适当的！

因为LZ你的作法个人不欣赏，非涉及人身攻击，请分辨其差异。

或许先上语言，将底子打好，或许两者并进。

但是，像你这样转至CHILDCARE，你尚未有能力掌握英文当成学习工具，所以会～徒劳无功，心力交瘁！

衷心的建议：语言是第一要务，要做任何事，先掌握部分英文能力再说！

ubuntuhk

bug兄说出我想说的话