为了回报大家,就把信的内容贴出来。
看起来英文语法还不错。权当学学作文吧。
其中除了价格以外,还有时区(人在伦敦,两三点还在回信),
出租理由(说是financial needs,那就应该租贵一点),
让用skype还不要,非要打电话。
这个不让看房子的理由编得不错。
我在猜其它的是不是如果我说要去看房子,是不是都要推说人不在了?
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Hello,
My name is Ruth Carthew, 30yrs old female , professional, straight, Christian, I grew up in New Zealand before moving down to Melbourne. I like adventures, honesty and cleanliness. Tell me about yourself.
My apartment is on 343 Pitt Street, Sydney NSW 2000 located on level 49 of the prestigious century tower in the heart of the CBD. This stunning three bedroom apartment is on offer with a spectacular south facing view, master bedroom with walk in robes that leads to the main bathroom, modern kitchen with a spacious open plan living and dining area and the stunning city view and water view from each of the room.
This spacious apartment also features a concealed separate laundry, undercover security car park and a fantastic city atmosphere all around. Fantastic locale! walking distance to all city amenities.
Facilities include indoor pool, Ducted air-conditioning, Fully equipped kitchen with marble bench-top, well equipped gym,Internal laundry, storage cage, available outdoor entertainment area and 24 hour concierge.
The minimum stay is one month ($700/Month) utilities included such as Internet access(wireless), Parking space, electricity, water, laundry, dishwasher, kitchen utensils e.t.c , Bond: $700.00 (The Bond is a refundable security deposit).
Find attached are some picture of my apartment for you to view what i am talking about.
I wish you the best in your search if my place doesn't suit your preferable location and taste.
Cheers and God bless you
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我回信简单自我介绍了一下。又问
May I ask a few questions about the apartment?
1) Is this your own property or one you sublet from the owner?
2) Is the price $700/mth for one bedroom or 2 bedrooms?
3) As we have children, we need to cook for them. Would you mind?
结果这三个问题一个也没被回答。
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Hello,
Thanks for the reply and for your interest in my apartment. Can I know when you would like to move in please? I asked this because I need somebody that would like to move in as soon as possible or able to book for it now. I'm currently in London UK for a long training from work. Just got a new job and I'll be here in training for the next six months.
I actually want to rent out two rooms out of the three rooms in my apartment because of my financial needs here and I don't want to leave my apartment empty for such a long period of time too. So, I need somebody that would like to move in as soon as possible before the end of my training here.
You can go take a look at the apartment from outside and let me know if you're ready to rent my apartment. All I can do is make arrangement for the documents through my solicitor because I have my keys here with me and as soon as my solicitor is able to complete the lease agreement, he will send them to me so that I can sign my part and I will forward it to you to sign you part too. I will send the keys to you via courier post next day delivery as soon as all necessary documentation has been completed and you can move in immediately you get it there.
I dont know how often you check your email but if you're willing to secure my place from what I have told you above. I would need these information below to prepare the lease agreement for you.
Name in full, Contact address, Phone number, Occupation, Age, Sex, Preferable Move in Date, Marital status and Total Period of rent/Stay.
Make sure you leave your correct phone number please. I only have access to the internet anytime but I can't use my phone here. I can only call you in the night after all training sessions is over and I will even need to call you when its time for you to move in.
I would need you to give me the information required which I listed above, so that I can forward them to my solicitor to prepare your lease document and email them to you as soon as possible. I will make available scan copy of my passport too and send them to you as soon as you're willing to rent my place.
Cheers and God Bless !!!!!
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回信说31号才move in可以用skype聊。给了skype id。
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Hello,
Thanks for getting back to me. There is no problem with your move in date and total period of stay. You can get back to me with your comprehensive details as requested earlier so that we can proceed from there.
I will prefer communication via phone call.
Waiting to hear from you.
Ruth |