简历替几个问题:
1、语言你最好找人改改,To take part in实在不是formal写法
2、篇幅太长,这倒是次要的,流水账,没亮点,至少用用successfully之类的词点缀一下吧,能不能具体描述你的项目呢?是1个人的,还是10个人的,是10000的budget还是100万的budget?你有啥杰出贡献,你想不出来,人家怎么能看中你要你呢?
I dont think it matters, as long as your have the right to work in australia. If the agent is interested in you, they will ask if they feel that is necessary...