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标题: 参加活动--破戒了 -- Napoleon [打印本页]

作者: snapdragon    时间: 28-11-2018 12:58
标题: 参加活动--破戒了 -- Napoleon
本帖最后由 annahw 于 28-11-2018 13:02 编辑

成为 话题中心,迎来八方不解声一片一向不符合我的和事佬范温吞水范儿,因此太过不被理解 的话题,我必自觉删除。这是我的一条清规。
而不写正在读的书也是我的一条戒律。

这本Napoleon,却让我破次戒。

首先呢,我喜欢他的锥子般的尖下巴

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其实呢,我喜欢开头一段,戏份不要太足,武士感太足……  先说天气,然后说这些人并不在乎…… Btw, 如果是这两天悉尼的天气,不知道是不是first thing on their minds?

It is cold, in late winter, here in the foothil s of the Alps, and the open plain by the side of a lake offers no shelter from the wind. But for the two groups of French soldiers facing each other, the weather is the last thing on their minds.

他们为毛线不在乎weather呢?是因为没有下百年一遇的悉尼雨吗? no no no^

They are, for the most part, army veterans of long standing, and they know all too well the horrors of the battlefield—know all too well that within minutes they could be dead, or screaming in agony from ghastly wounds.

再来一波喜欢的,戏剧般的场景:
As the armies face each other, indecisively, the royalist battalion commander steps forward. “If you do not withdraw,” he shouts hesitantly to Napoleon, “you will be arrested.”  On both sides, hands nervously clutch loaded muskets.

hands nervously clutch loaded muskets? 为什么我竟然不nervous, 最近喜剧片看得疯疯癫癫? no no no^

But then Napoleon orders his own men to lower their weapons.An aide protests, but he insists.
因为我信任我大拿,行吗?瞧!

He steps forward, out in front of his own troops, to within twenty feet of the royalist regiment. “Soldiers of the Fifth!” he cries out to them. “I am your emperor! Acknowledge me!” He walks a few more steps, and in a dramatic gesture, opens his coat, exposing his chest as a target. “If there is any soldier among you who wants to kill his emperor,” he continues, his voice firm, “here I am!”

瞧瞧,多男人啊……

For a moment, there is silence. 安静吧,需要静静,静静也需要你们。 都在欣赏我大拿那迷人的myth, 小小的身躯里怎会有如此大大的宇宙?

Then, somewhere in the royalist lines, a voice can be heard ordering men to open fire. But no one does. The line stands, fearful, indecisive. And then, a different cry is heard. “Vive l’empereur!” “Long Live the emperor!” A single voice at first, but immediately repeated by others. “Vive l’empereur!” In a moment, the entire royalist battalion is shouting the words, and as they do, they throw down their weapons, surround Napoleon joyously, and rush to embrace the men who have come with him from elba.

Hardened soldiers burst into tears as they clasp each other, screaming deliriously, “Vive l’empereur!”
看看, Hardened soldiers 配上软软的泪水,尖尖的screaming , 多么戏剧化啊。而面对你伤害了我大拿,我大拿只是一笑而过……

As the clamor subsides, Napoleon smiles contentedly at his small army, which has just doubled in size. He prepares to move onward, further north.

云很淡,风很清,我大拿很大拿……






作者: MICHELLE07    时间: 28-11-2018 14:38
拿破仑的一生峰回路转波澜起伏,具有完美的戏剧结构。三座岛勾勒出一个传奇。年轻的科西嘉怪物横扫整个欧洲,厄尔巴岛归来再创奇迹,最后环境恶劣的岛圣赫勒拿岛给了他充足的时间回忆一切,走向终点。

他很骄傲,但一点不妨碍他在关键时候顺应时势,做墙头草。没有一成不变的政治立场,也没有誓死捍卫的党。"我"就是自己的王。在那个乱世,节操碎一地的王公贵族比比皆是。"为理想而斗",那是教科书,"为利益而斗",那是报纸,心理学家说有时勇敢或无耻行为,就是一念之差。小说版的传记里说大拿用眼神就能征服士兵,拜倒在他马蹄下。

作者: MICHELLE07    时间: 28-11-2018 14:45
本帖最后由 MICHELLE07 于 28-11-2018 15:23 编辑

我也不写正在读的书。读了不写或者拖很久才写是常有的事。

但戒律都是可以破的哈哈哈。

拿“破”仑嘛,又不是波拿巴。。。

作者: MICHELLE07    时间: 28-11-2018 18:36
本帖最后由 MICHELLE07 于 28-11-2018 20:45 编辑

拿破仑有多狂?联军10万兵,法军5万,他说,怕什么,加上我自己,就是15万!
(细节可能有出入)
都说最大的敌人是自己,我觉得这个说法太空。自然条件也是敌人。沙俄几乎是不战而胜,凭借极寒天气,广袤大地和一把火将莫斯科烧而空城而活活拖垮法军。“那拿破仑为什么不充分估计形势,作出正确战略?”
问得对,大拿晚年认识到自己的错误,多次自我批评。不过口述史也有反复,有修改情节的嫌疑。

这位军事天才的梦想是战死沙场,但一旦战场失利,他的政治天分就冒了出来,狡诈,变通,容忍,煽动,无一不作
是的,他本来就是个作家,会写小说的作家,还留下几万封信可以用来编写真真假假的人生。作家都是阅读面极广的。我们常人读个书聊个天已经很美了,拿破仑读的书可以用来搅民心。凭着丰富的文化知识,加上仗剑飞奔的勇猛,在意大利所向披靡。

作者: MICHELLE07    时间: 28-11-2018 18:51
有人将拿破仑和项羽比,说都有几分悲情色彩。我看不好比。对于大拿,虽然我看了美化版,但也看不到什么情义和气节。不辜负美人的战士,多少带点英雄气概吧,而大拿将军和美人们是互相辜负的。至于祖国,这个词在他字典里已经模糊。。。虽然家乡在他身上留下不可磨灭的印记
最终战败后,写信向英国请求保护,是过于自信,还是苟且偷生?有一点可以肯定,这是征战俄国后又一次致命的判断失误
作者: Earlgrey    时间: 28-11-2018 21:45
流水账。。。
作者: yearshappy    时间: 29-11-2018 12:30
本帖最后由 yearshappy 于 29-11-2018 12:52 编辑

introduction部分确实画面感很强,他一人几句话把Louis XVIII那方的兵士变成拥护他
他为什么这样做可以作为一个主题来论述

Was he a risk taker? Do I consider him a heroic figure? My answer is no

他的信心来源于对形式的把握
1)他的士官之前见了对方官得知,皇家兵可能会拒绝射击前皇帝拿破仑
2)拿破仑此时46岁,从24岁以后已经建立了他个人的全方位的威望,卓越的军事技能,治理国家政治上的创新和功绩
3)Louis XVIII 当时的无能无为已经得民愤

作者: yearshappy    时间: 29-11-2018 12:50
Napoleon: a concise biography, this's the book that both Anna and I are currently working on.

Anna and I would love to hear from anyone else's thoughts on this topic @Earlgrey  I recall you have done a wide rang of reading @坏熊猫 your expertise is in the millitery field if I remember it correctly. Look forwad to hearing from youall
作者: ukphd    时间: 29-11-2018 13:37





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