ps 这个版有个四个八的 美国回来的哥们回忆的自己的作文原文可以参考一下作为八分参考当时确实把我镇住 ...
亲，能否给我这个哥们的作文原文链接，好想研究研究学习学习，我没找到。 tuan10 发表于 29-10-2014 12:59
还没等到雅思评委来颠覆我的价值观，你们几个移友已经快做到了。
谢谢各位回复，特别是指出我的语法错 ...
其实正如你在信中说的，雅思就是个标准化考试，有着严格的评分标准。雅思分数高只代表你达到了band descriptor中的各个得分点。所以要高分的话不能只是“direct output of my thinking on the spot”，而是应该根据band descriptor来写、来说，这样考官才能给你相应的分数。 举个栗子，Writing Task1 Band8的Grammatical range and accuracy描述是“• uses a wide range of structures • the majority of sentences are error-free • makes only very occasional errors or inappropriacies”，lz的这封信显然没有达到这个标准咯。 Newuse 发表于 29-10-2014 18:58
亲，能否给我这个哥们的作文原文链接，好想研究研究学习学习，我没找到。
https://hioz.me/ibbs/thread-1036061-2-1.html
连接在这里，第二页有一篇文章。
另外，
描述自己英文好，说日常工作语言是英文即可，强调在x百强工作和主题无关，
描述自己如何采用voa bbc提高英文即可，但是没必要强调自己不像其它很多中国人用模板，有踩别人抬自己的感觉，
还有一些句子略显咄咄逼人， 跟考官大人沟通，语气不大合适 zookey 发表于 29-10-2014 22:50
https://hioz.me/ibbs/thread-1036061-2-1.html
连接在这里，第二页有一篇文章。
谢了，亲 tuan10 发表于 28-10-2014 15:30
Below is the letter I sent to IELTS requesting for a re-marking
Dear Sir/ Madam:
一般7是要没有语法错误或者极少语法错误。8要用词地道流畅
需要继续努力啊 楼主什么职业要8炸？ 楼主的这边书信和simon的有很远的差距，
不过6.5可以给的在我看来。 Right now, I need 8’s for all four parts of IELTS, in order to get a chance to move to a better place for me and my family, where a clean and free air could be breathed
估计就介句，就没戏啦:lol 其实给6.5有点高，比6稍微高一点点，是有的，或者直接就给6也是正常，
能写很多，但是都不地道。 我们很多人都能写出这样的人，但是永远上不了6.5、 没详细看，但有两个地方问题比较明显，跟楼主探讨一下：
"... I sit inIELTS test in case my target score not achieved"
sit in ... test 搭配奇怪，可以说participate in，或者直接说take
in case后应接从句，你缺谓语，可以说 in case my target score is not achieved
还有列举用AND things like that 四个8太难考了，可遇不可求。 复议结果出来了， 写作涨了0.5分:L
后面回忆下，当时作文可能有点跑题了。
这段时间集中精力抓写作， 各位大神帮忙看看下面这篇习作：
Some people believe that the best way to improve the general well-being of schoolchildren is to make physical education compulsory in all schools. Others, however, think that this would have little effect on overall health and that other measures are needed.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is a frequent topic of discussion on how to improve the overall well-being of schoolchildren. Some people suggest that compulsory physical education is the best approach, while others think there could be better ways to achieve that. In this essay I will analyze both arguments and aim to find out a comprehensive solution to this issue.
It is true that a compulsory physical education at school could benefit students in a number of ways. Apparently more physical exercise means better physical fitness, and this is particularly important considering the worrying fact that a growing number of children spend much of their spare time on watching TV and playing computer games. Furthermore, sports activities contribute to the development of social and teamwork skills. For example, playing football in a team allows students to learn how to communicate with each other and work together in order to win a game.
That is not to say that physical education alone could improve the overall well-being of the students, there are other equally important measures that help to fulfill the purpose. Firstly, students should be encouraged to join more after-school activities, such as volunteer work and public events. An active engagement in the surrounding communities is beneficial for young people to cultivate a strong sense of responsibility towards society and a spirit of caring to the people in need.Secondly, to better prepare schoolchildren for their future career, the curriculum might be adjusted regularly to be in alignment with the fast changing requirements of the highly competitive job market.
In my opinion, the well-being of a student refers to a well-rounded development on many aspects of human qualities, including intellectual, emotional, social as well as physical. Therefore, a concerted and comprehensive approach is preferred to tackle this issue, rather than focusing on physical education alone.
我准备明年2月考。也要现在开始报名吗？ EchoC 发表于 24-10-2014 20:31
加油 加油, 我在八炸的路上止步在了overall 8.
还好被州担捡到了.. 不然真的要疯了
一鸭就7炸，强！沾沾运气~~:) tuan10 发表于 26-10-2014 13:55
我会在复议信中附一封我的说明和要求，一定要为一个公正的评分讨个说法。这次复议只会有两个结果，要么雅 ...
支持您，顶他们的肺 meditation_yoga 发表于 19-1-2015 12:12
一鸭就7炸，强！沾沾运气~~
:) 祝好运。 楼主加油。楼主是真的勇士！！！！ 现实一点吧。。。
我周围除了马来西亚人和菲律宾人（从小英文），没有考到8888的 我一雅的时候和你是同样的心态，也被雅思狠狠打脸了。现在只求7炸了 andyyangjian 发表于 29-1-2015 22:05
我一雅的时候和你是同样的心态，也被雅思狠狠打脸了。现在只求7炸了
作文再上一点就有了 本帖最后由 abigmouth 于 30-1-2015 09:41 编辑
感觉楼主还是应试准备不足。
语言的最基本的作用就是沟通，你说我明即可，在日常使用中，语法时态可以不太在意。既然是考试，就会有标准，虽然有一些随机性，但是硬伤绝对会被扣分。
我接触的英语牛人，一张嘴就是一般现在时或者现在完成时，雅思是要求将普通道理或没有明确时间状语的前提下可以用现在时，但是在说以前的事情必须用过去时（注意不规则的分词形式），为了得高分，还应该展示你的语言能力的全面性，比如对以后的希望用将来时，对过去的评论用虚拟语气，以及从句和习惯用语。
楼主不妨花点钱在淘宝买个外教课，东南亚的也行，只要母语是英语的即可，让人家以考试的标准帮你挑错误。
霸气侧漏啊
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