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331#
发表于 26-8-2007 00:03:26 | 只看该作者
刚刚毕业,找工两月,毫无建树,很少电话,更无面试,求求大家,帮帮我吧!

Career Objectives
Summary:        An entry level job with considerable opportunities for further development.
         
Education/Qualifications
Institution:                        xx University
City/Country:         Sydney Australia
Qualifications:         Bachelor of Commerce major in accounting
Duration:         02/2005-07/2007
         
Institution:         Sydney Institute of xx
City/Country:         Sydney Australia
Qualifications:         Diploma of Commerce
Duration:         12/2003-12/2004
         
Current Employment  

Australian xx Accountants Pty Ltd
Public Accountants & Registered Tax Agents
Start date:                 May 2007 (on going)
Position:                   Assistant Accountant (part time)(说白了是在volunteer )
Responsibilities:
·        Review of tax distributions and tax returns for clients
·        Prepare tax report for clients
·        Assist and facilitate communication with clients over their tax reporting requirements and queries                                    
·        Prepare company accounts for clients
·        Prepare tax planning and GST for small business
·        Data entry
·        Accounts payable
·        Answer phone

Referee: xx



Employment History

1.        xx Pty Ltd
Start Date:                        March 2007
End Date :                        June 2007
Position/Title:                   Customer Service Officer
Responsibilities:               
·        Service customer at check out
·        Customer service
·        Keep shop in a good presentation
·        Answer phone
·        Cash handling

2.        xx Marketing Group
Start Date:                         February 2006
End Date:                          June 2006
Position/Title:                   Sales
Responsibilities:   
·        Study marketing and interpersonal communication skills in the training program
·        Provide door-to-door service to promote the electricity contracts and customer survey

Skill Summary

Tax Return:                      Advance Sega Handitax 2007
Bookkeeping:                      Intermediate QuickBooks, MOYB
Computer Skills:         Intermediate MS Office

有一年的housekeeper 工作,但是一中介不要我写, 说你找accounting的工,写housekeeper的经练,rubbish
除了accounting的工作,对bank和finance的工作都感兴趣,不知道人家能对我敢兴趣不

[ 本帖最后由 william23 于 25-8-2007 23:19 编辑 ]
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332#
发表于 26-8-2007 00:09:05 | 只看该作者
原帖由 AGANG 于 22-8-2007 21:01 发表
303#真的很难改吗?还是无药可就呢?万能的FREEOZ呀,救救我吧!


真不是想打击您.

原来有个墨西哥移民过来的朋友, 和您是同行.

他自称曾经做过汤姆,克鲁兹和安吉丽娜·朱莉的专访.

在悉尼从woolworth上货干起, 最后在AGL找了个抄煤气表的perm.

什么时候能干回本行, 他自己说慢慢来吧.

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333#
发表于 26-8-2007 16:41:34 | 只看该作者
的确是很不容易,却也不愿放弃,现在的主要问题是有点怀疑是不是CV格式或表达上有问题,导致HR看不懂或理解上有出入,所以来论坛请求大家的帮助...
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334#
发表于 26-8-2007 18:11:01 | 只看该作者
麻烦老大们了,工作找了一个多月,今天去个Swinbourne大学Open day,看找工作之余能不能读书,一个教授看我的Resume,说有很多问题,谢谢老大们帮我出出主意!!

RÉSUMÉ
H X

Address   Unit 2, 31 C St
            
Contact   0123 456 789 (M)
    Hx2007@hotmail.com

.
Executive Summary

Six years of experience in administration of the real-time securities systems & the stock-exchange networks in Shanghai. A well qualified, experienced systems tester, maintained/supported the systems and networks efficiently & responsibly, I have a good self-learning ability & strong teamwork spirit.

Education/Qualifications

Education     Bachelor of Management (Major in Information Management & Information System Qualification)
                   Shanghai University

Certificate    CNA (Certified Novell Administrator)
MCPs (Microsoft Certified Professional)
HP Net Server Middle Level Engineer
               
Employment History

XXXyyy Securities CO., LTD              Jul 2001 -- Jun 2007
( one of the best and largest securities companies in China)

Position: Computer Assistant Manager

Responsibilities:

1.        Be responsible for about 320 workstations & 5 servers, and dozens of the network facilities working well & efficiently in the networks (IPX & TCP/IP) under normal operation environments, such as Novell Netware4.11, Windows/NT/2000/XP.
2.        Maintained and supported the intramural software and systems running stably, safely & smoothly with the databases, using MS SQL 7.0 Server, MS Visual Foxpro, Novell NetWare tools, Microsoft IIS(Internet Information Server).
3.        Simulated all the failures, which we could image, to learn more and better ensure the smooth operation of the communications and conduct the trouble-shooting with the shortest time as much as possible each half of year.
4.        Conducted much online tests and commissions and ensured the stability and smooth operation of the new system, then analyzed and gave my advices.
5.        Monitored the two kinds of communications (satellite, DDN cable) of our branch with two stock bourses and headquarter of my company.
6.        Made sure every employee using the applications whatever the original and the new in practice
7.        Solved the clients’ problems of how to use our internet exchange software correctly at home.

Referees
Names and contact details of referees will be supplied per request.
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335#
发表于 26-8-2007 19:27:18 | 只看该作者
原帖由 AGANG 于 26-8-2007 15:41 发表
的确是很不容易,却也不愿放弃,现在的主要问题是有点怀疑是不是CV格式或表达上有问题,导致HR看不懂或理解上有出入,所以来论坛请求大家的帮助...


从cv的角度看, 写的很好.

增加个summary就完美了.
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336#
发表于 27-8-2007 00:26:49 | 只看该作者
好不容易找到这。发现这里人好热情。
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337#
发表于 27-8-2007 00:55:48 | 只看该作者
我的情况如下,希望各位帮忙指点一下。因没有会计的经验 ,是投简历很少有回复的最大原因。


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Career Objective
____________________________________________________________

Seeking an Accounting position, where my education background and experience will be further developed and utilised

Education and Qualification
__________________________________________________________________

2006                Bachelor of Commerce in Accounting
                X University   

Skills and Attributes
__________________________________________________________________

•        Sound knowledge with Accounting Theories
•        Experience in MS office and MYOB with fantastic data entry skill
•        Strong University results with solid understanding in accounting
•        Extensive experience in office admin
•        Excellent communication skill with strong ability to multi work
•        flexible and honest
•        Customer service oriented
•        Attention to details and numeric skill
•        Hard working and reliable team member with high responsibility

Employment History
__________________________________________________________________

2007-Current         X Medical Centre
                Receptionist
•        Monitored front desk
•        Answered phone calls and booked appointments
•        recorded and updated patients’details, including scan and fax documents
•        informed and followed up patient’s result when urgent report was released
•        assisted with report filing
•        advised Dr. on stock and re-ordering levels
•        helped keep the work area neat and tidy


2007                 Y Corporate Legal Service
                Office Assistant       
•        greeted and met clients and visitors to the firm
•        undertook general office administration, such as mail collection, cheque deposit
•        handled Phone calls and answered enquiries
•        assisted with simple paper work, filling application form, replying enquiry


2006                 Z  Food Court
                Shop Assistant
•        unloaded goods and checked them against order forms
•        catalogued or labelled items with storage details
•        placed goods in bins and on racks, or stacked bulky items on floors
•        completed orders by selecting goods from shelves and checking them off appropriate lists
•        counted and recorded the number of items in store during stocktaking
•        calculated total amount by touching computer  screen
•        provided customer service
•        advised supervisor on stock and re-ordering levels
•        helped keep the work area neat and tidy

Volunteer Work
__________________________________________________________________

2006 - 2007
                XXX Disability Council
•        undertook domestic duties such as vacuuming, cleaning, washing
•        arranged social activities and shopping trips, and accompany people on outings
•        provided companionship, friendship and emotional support
•        sealed magazines and collected photocopy materials

References are Available upon Request
__________________________________________________________________

[ 本帖最后由 step 于 12-9-2007 19:48 编辑 ]
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338#
发表于 27-8-2007 02:11:26 | 只看该作者

蕾蕾,老大卫,单衣纵酒帮忙看一下。

还在读书阶段,想找个IT的工作,已经投了几家公司,暂无消息。

Career Objective
As a second semester commercial software engineering management student, I have good experience in hardware, software maintenance and website building. I also improved my Java skill after I finished E-Market Trading Technology. I had three years (full-time) working experience as a computer engineer in a state owned company in China. I also have six months (part-time) experience as an assistant in XXXXX internet café  in Sydney.

Education

Master of Commercial Software Engineering Management
University of Technology, Sydney
Expected completion August 2008
Key subjects
􀀀 IT Research Preparation
􀀀 Project Management
􀀀 Software Quality Management
􀀀 E-Market Trading Technology
􀀀 Object Oriented Modeling

Bachelor of Engineering
XXXXX, XXXXX, China
August, 1999 – July, 2003
Key subjects:
Microcomputer Principle and Assembly
Data Structure
Programming in C Language
Software Technology Development
Internet Technique

Skills Summary
􀀀 Enhanced computer skills in hardware, software and LAN
Good knowledge in website building including HTML and JavaScript
Intermediate programming skill in java
Report writing skills: formal reports and research reports
􀀀 High research and analysis skills
􀀀 Teamwork, leadership and supervisory skills
􀀀 Problem solving, managing difficult situations and conflict resolution
Major Projects

A company LAN Design
Designed a company LAN for XXXXX company in XXX city, XXXX Province, China. There are 10 different sections in the company. My colleague and I analyze requirements and decided to use Star Topology. Then we designed three different layers, physical layer, data link layer and network layer. In physical layer we chosen CAT5 cable as wire media type along with EIA/TIA 568B standard for layout and connection of wiring schemes. In data link layer, we set up a LAN switch to connect physical layer media to form LAN segments. In network lay due to high price of router, we just use a layer 3 switch to connect each LAN segment.

Setting up the company internal-website
According to requirement of company, my colleague and I built up internal-website of company using Dreamweaver, Photoshop and Flash. The website is used to communicate between different sections to achieve “no paper working”. That is means any file will be sent through internal-website. Staff also can know the news (internal and external) from the website. The website include five different parts, they are main pager, internal news, external news, communication system and forum.

Relevant Employment History
Computer Engineer (full-time)
XXXXXX company in XXXXX city, XXXXX Province, China
August 2003 – August 2006
Responsibilities
􀀀 Fixing computer hardware and software problems
􀀀 Setting up office LAN and internet
􀀀 Maintaining remote control system of Xi’an to HeFei railway
􀀀 Assisting colleagues to finish website of the computer

Internet Café Assistant (part-time)
XXXXXXX,  Sydney
Dec 2006 – June 2007
Responsibilities
􀀀 Fixing computer hardware and software problems
􀀀 Fixing internet and LAN problems

Other Languages
Fluent in spoken Chinese

Interests
Watching movie and series story, workout, cooking, swimming
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发表于 27-8-2007 18:26:18 | 只看该作者

已经按照要求修改过简历,请三位大侠再次过目。

■        Summary
    Seeking a position where more than five years of banking experience will add value.        

■        Professional Profile
•                   Banking experience in fields of marketing, treasury and operation;
•        Knowledge in banking procedures, credit rules and local authorities’ rules and regulations;
•        Familiar with bank products like financial derivative products, foreign exchange, trade finance and etc;
•        Ability of corporate financial analysis;
•        Proficiency in Microsoft office software.
■ Education
•        Feb 2002 – Feb 2003 , XXX University
Degree:  Master of Commerce
Majors:  International Business,
•        Sept 1997 – June 2001, XXX University
Degree:  Bachelor of Economics
Major:   International Business Management

■ Language Proficiency
•        English:      Proficient in listening, speaking, reading, writing and translating
•        Mandarin:     Fluent in speaking and writing
•        Cantonese:    Basic speaking and listening

■ Working Experience
•        Sept 2005 to present: XXX Bank

        Customer Relationship Manager (Corporate Business Dept.)
        Introduce bank products to customers and design product portfolio for customers;
        Responsible for the raise of  customer’s credit volume and asset quality;
        Collect customers’ and industry information, adjust credit policy to customers and take risk preventing measures accordingly;
        Responsible for customer relationship building and maintenance.

         Business and Achievements
        Export Buyer’s Credit; On-the-spot research and investigation to India、Japan and United States
        Arranging the Financing of  the 70mio Ghanaian national transmission backbone infrastructure project with export buyer’s credit;
        Export Seller’s Credit;
        Acted as a key member in a 12 billion Aircraft Import Credit;
        Maintained good relationship with a series of High-and-New-Tech manufacturers in Shenzhen;
        Maintained good relationship with related government departments.

•        May 2003 – Sept 2005: XXX Bank

        Dealer (Treasury Dept., Nov 2004 – Sept 2005)
        Arrange funding for transactions related to loans, deposit and derivative products;
        Keep branch’s foreign exchange position;
        Prepare various treasury reports and etc.

        Clerk (International Settlement Dept.  & Deposit Dept., May 2003 – Oct 2004)
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发表于 28-8-2007 18:51:45 | 只看该作者

我的resume and cl 蕾蕾,老大卫,单衣纵酒帮请忙看一下

我投了2个星期,但是效果不好。。想请领导看看我的简历问题出在哪里?谢谢
RESUME
PROFILE                                                           
     Competent, organized, and analytical professional seeking transition into the field of Information Technology as an Information Systems Analyst, Network Administrator ,or Network Manager. IT expertise is supplemented by considerable, diverse experienceindustry-related training. Qualified systems engineer with 5 years of professional experience in computer science, I have a strong working knowledge of Microsoft products, network design and security devices. In the 5year work career7 years were spent in ***, and 6 years with the futures trading market. I hold Microsoft Certified Professional (MCSD/MCSE/MCDBA/MCP) certificates and Hewlett-Packard Certified Professional Engineer (HPSE) certificates.  Expertise includes skills and knowledge in:
     
     Problem Analysis           Project Management                  Systems Design
     Bidding Systems           Computer Applications                 Network Administration
     Strategic Planning          Troubleshooting                      System Integration

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发表于 28-8-2007 23:15:46 | 只看该作者
楼上的朋友,可以先参考前面的IT简历模板改一下.
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 楼主| 发表于 28-8-2007 23:50:05 | 只看该作者
theme

单衣纵酒说的对,你的简历模板都不对,建议你先看一下模板,另外好好看看前面简历的修改意见,先自己改一下。
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 楼主| 发表于 29-8-2007 00:00:21 | 只看该作者
原帖由 hummer330 于 27-8-2007 01:11 发表
还在读书阶段,想找个IT的工作,已经投了几家公司,暂无消息。

Career Objective
As a second semester commercial software engineering management student, I have good experience in hardware, softwa ...



Career Objective
As a second semester commercial software engineering management student, 开头就写的不好,如果我看到第一句话,我肯定把你当应届生,然后就把简历放一边去了。你既然有三年的工作经验,就不要把自己定位在一个学生找工作的角色。summary全部重改,一开始就写上你有工作经验在哪个领域,熟悉什么技术。part time的咖啡馆工作是做什么的?如果跟IT没关系,就不用写在summary里了吧。
I have good experience in hardware, software maintenance and website building.到底你熟哪方面?硬,软,网站都懂?这样的人适合什么工作?请根据你要应聘的职位来改这句话,面面俱到的人现在非常之不受欢迎。你要找的是专业工作。所谓专业是有针对性的。 I also improved my Java skill after I finished E-Market Trading Technology. I had three years (full-time) working experience as a computer engineer in a state owned company in China. I also have six months (part-time) experience as an assistant in XXXXX internet café  in Sydney.在summary最后加上,你有本地学历,现在既然从某某大学什么学院毕业。


Education既然你有工作经验,这里应该是你的工作经验。教育背景放到工作经验后面。

Master of Commercial Software Engineering Management
University of Technology, Sydney
Expected completion August 2008
Key subjects
􀀀 IT Research Preparation
􀀀 Project Management
􀀀 Software Quality Management
􀀀 E-Market Trading Technology
􀀀 Object Oriented Modeling

Bachelor of Engineering
XXXXX, XXXXX, China
August, 1999 – July, 2003
Key subjects:
Microcomputer Principle and Assembly
Data Structure
Programming in C Language
Software Technology Development
Internet Technique

Skills Summary
􀀀 Enhanced computer skills in hardware, software and LAN
Good knowledge in website building including HTML and JavaScript
Intermediate programming skill in java你的skills也非常杂。
Report writing skills: formal reports and research reports
􀀀 High research and analysis skills
􀀀 Teamwork, leadership and supervisory skills
􀀀 Problem solving, managing difficult situations and conflict resolution
Major Projects

A company LAN Design这是项目经验吗?你的简历格式完全不对,请先按首页上的格式写。
Designed a company LAN for XXXXX company in XXX city, XXXX Province, China. There are 10 different sections in the company. My colleague and I analyze requirements and decided to use Star Topology. Then we designed three different layers, physical layer, data link layer and network layer. In physical layer we chosen CAT5 cable as wire media type along with EIA/TIA 568B standard for layout and connection of wiring schemes. In data link layer, we set up a LAN switch to connect physical layer media to form LAN segments. In network lay due to high price of router, we just use a layer 3 switch to connect each LAN segment.

Setting up the company internal-website
According to requirement of company, my colleague and I built up internal-website of company using Dreamweaver, Photoshop and Flash. The website is used to communicate between different sections to achieve “no paper working”. That is means any file will be sent through internal-website. Staff also can know the news (internal and external) from the website. The website include five different parts, they are main pager, internal news, external news, communication system and forum.

Relevant Employment History
Computer Engineer (full-time)
XXXXXX company in XXXXX city, XXXXX Province, China
August 2003 – August 2006
Responsibilities
􀀀 Fixing computer hardware and software problems
􀀀 Setting up office LAN and internet
􀀀 Maintaining remote control system of Xi’an to HeFei railway
􀀀 Assisting colleagues to finish website of the computer

Internet Café Assistant (part-time)这应该是网管的工作吧?为什么叫assistant?会引起歧义的。如果你的title是这样,你旁边打一个刮号写上System Admin。
XXXXXXX,  Sydney
Dec 2006 – June 2007
Responsibilities
􀀀 Fixing computer hardware and software problems
􀀀 Fixing internet and LAN problems

Other Languages
Fluent in spoken Chinese

Interests
Watching movie and series story, workout, cooking, swimming
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 楼主| 发表于 29-8-2007 00:07:28 | 只看该作者
原帖由 xxxx1979 于 26-8-2007 17:11 发表
麻烦老大们了,工作找了一个多月,今天去个Swinbourne大学Open day,看找工作之余能不能读书,一个教授看我的Resume,说有很多问题,谢谢老大们帮我出出主意!!

RÉSUMÉ
H X

Address   Un ...


RÉSUMÉ
H X

Address   Unit 2, 31 C St
            
Contact   0123 456 789 (M)
    Hx2007@hotmail.com

.
Executive Summary

Six years of experience in administration of the real-time securities systems & the stock-exchange networks in Shanghai.把in shanghai去掉吧,这是你的弱点,简历要扬长避短,把这个去掉也不算是骗人,只是一开始把软肋藏起来。
A well qualified, experienced systems tester, maintained/supported the systems and networks efficiently & responsibly,如果是我,你这个tester前面那么多的形容词真是不能打动我,请告诉我,你用的什么测试工具,熟哪种语言,哪种系统,这个我更关心。
I have a good self-learning ability & strong teamwork spirit.一个有关技术的summary五句话是比较恰当的。第一句你介绍了你自己是做什么的,对的,第二句就没技术要点了。第三句非常大路,完全可以忽略,任何人的简历里都有,请好好整理你的技术优势,再写上四句吧。

Education/Qualifications

Education     Bachelor of Management (Major in Information Management & Information System Qualification)
                   Shanghai University毕业的时间也要加上的。

Certificate    CNA (Certified Novell Administrator)
MCPs (Microsoft Certified Professional)
HP Net Server Middle Level Engineer
               
Employment History

XXXyyy Securities CO., LTD              Jul 2001 -- Jun 2007
( one of the best and largest securities companies in China)

Position: Computer Assistant Manager

Responsibilities:

1.        Be responsible for about 320 workstations & 5 servers, and dozens of the network facilities working well & efficiently in the networks (IPX & TCP/IP) under normal operation environments, such as Novell Netware4.11, Windows/NT/2000/XP.
2.        Maintained and supported the intramural software and systems running stably, safely & smoothly with the databases, using MS SQL 7.0 Server, MS Visual Foxpro, Novell NetWare tools, Microsoft IIS(Internet Information Server).
3.        Simulated all the failures, which we could image, to learn more and better ensure the smooth operation of the communications and conduct the trouble-shooting with the shortest time as much as possible each half of year.
4.        Conducted much online tests and commissions and ensured the stability and smooth operation of the new system, then analyzed and gave my advices.
5.        Monitored the two kinds of communications (satellite, DDN cable) of our branch with two stock bourses and headquarter of my company.
6.        Made sure every employee using the applications whatever the original and the new in practice
7.        Solved the clients’ problems of how to use our internet exchange software correctly at home.

Referees
Names and contact details of referees will be supplied per request.

你的简历的问题就是完全看不出你的技术优势。请把你的responsibility好好整理一下,再认真写一些项目经验,项目经验如何写,格式前面有。多多强调你的技术吧。
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发表于 29-8-2007 19:10:09 | 只看该作者
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发表于 30-8-2007 01:04:12 | 只看该作者

Mechanical engineer 简历

英语烂到没话说, 硬着头写完了 ,请各位多多批评,批评多才有进步......
Phone:
Mobile:
Email:
CAREER  OBJECTIVE  (申请职位)
Mechanical engineer

PROFILE:

* Over seven years extensive experience in mechanics /electronics designing and engineering .Versed in both Indoor Medium voltage switchgear (Unigear-ZS1).
and Outdoor breaker、 switches and disconnectors (OHB-40.05KV,NPS-24KV)
* Supporting material & manufacturing experience in related industry and master SAP data order handling system experience;
* Familiar with SAP、CAD、Solidworks 、MS Work and Excel .
* An ability to multitask and to run large-scale projects while working well under pressure;
* CNXEC Star Employee in both 2006 year and the 2nd quarter of 2007 year

CAREER HISTORY

Oct.2004-Present        ****** Electrical Controlgear Co.Ltd.
Position : Mechanical engineer
Department :        7/2005- Present  Apparatus Department
                         10/2004-6/2005   Switchgear Department

Responsibilities:
* Responsible for achieving mechanical design for related contracts according to the requirement specification and standards
* Overall management NPS Retrofit project .
* Responsible for updating and maintaining  BOM for related contracts in SAP with high quality on time .
* Responsible for planning and controlling the produce proceeding of related contracts ,keeping communication with workshops and material section to ensure the completion of product .
* To improve the techniques of related product and working procedure quality, and provide technical instruction to related departments and customers
* Design, realize, integrate and test new components in compliance with product development process.
* Developing mechanical design solution to meet customers requirement farthest,
and affirming technical agreements
* To provide  product’s presentations and technical training to customers .
* To provide technical assistance and support to related departments ( after-sale Dept.、 Marketing Dept.、Workshops、etc.).
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Jun. 2003-Nov.2004             ******** Switchgear Co.Ltd
Position : Electrical & Mechanical Engineer
Responsibilities:
* Responsible for electrical and mechanical design of product  (low voltage switchgear)  to meet specific market requirements.
* Responsible for maintaining  BOM ,and making related produce  plan to workshop .
* To provide technical assistance and support to related departments .

April 2001-June 2003          ******Switchgear Co.Ltd.
Position :  Electrical & mechanical engineer                             
Responsibilities:
* Responsible for electrical and mechanical design of product  (low voltage switchgear)  to meet specific market requirements.
* To provide technical assistance and support to related departments .

June 2001-April 2002     *******Electrical Controlgear Factory
Position : Electrical Technician
Responsibilities:
* Co-ordinate requirements between the contracts (low voltage switchgear )and engineering section.
* Review drawings with engineers and co-ordinate marks ups.
* Improve the techniques of switchgear product and working procedure quality.

EDUCATION
* University                Graduated from Electrical & mechanical department of
Gansu Industrial University (china ) in 2000
* Training Courses :      Communicate & Artifice、Seven Quality tools、Lateral Thinking、
(company arranged)        Engineering Sustainable Solutions Program  

MEMBERSHIP
Member of Electrical & Mechanical Union CHINA
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原帖由 jennyhou 于 29-8-2007 18:10 发表
亲爱的蕾蕾,老大卫,单衣纵酒帮忙看一下。真实找到地方了。我是英语专业的,想在澳洲找一份好工作,行政采购物流都行,或者其它有发展前景的,不知各位觉得如何?确实无从下手,另外是不是还有COVER LETTER呢? ...


呵呵,你还真是把这个帖子从头到尾过了遍,谢谢你对大家付出的尊重。

你现在中国还是澳洲?
我看了下,个人觉得你目前最主要的问题不是简历,而是求职的方向和思路的问题。

工作版有几位朋友的帖子你可以参考下,xizi2006,qiusherry几位移友的帖子。
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回复 #349 单衣纵酒 的帖子

报告前辈,我还在中国,还在等待VO发准签呢,8月的补料,应该快了吧,呵呵。

[ 本帖最后由 jennyhou 于 3-6-2008 14:55 编辑 ]
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原帖由 step 于 26-8-2007 23:55 发表
我的情况如下,希望各位帮忙指点一下。因没有会计的经验 ,是投简历很少有回复的最大原因。
会计毕业已大半年,面试几个没成。除了CA大firm如实交代Master degree 外,其他小firm,只能说是本科生毕业。另外做 ...


你的简历已经不错了,我觉得如某个前辈说的,毕业生投简历就是体力活,继续投吧!但记住投了简历还要打电话去跟中介沟通,争取面试机会。

不要放弃。要么,还可以考虑回国投大型跨国公司或者上市公司的会计职位,2~3年后,所得经验都还是可以被澳洲本地承认的,当然打些折扣。
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发表于 31-8-2007 13:58:23 | 只看该作者
MY RESUME

[ 本帖最后由 kaku32 于 7-10-2007 22:30 编辑 ]
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Everyone, I need your help.

亲爱的蕾蕾,老大卫,单衣纵酒帮忙看一下。真实找到地方了。我是想在澳洲找一份工作,或者其它有发展前景的,不知各位觉得如何?

[ 本帖最后由 kaku32 于 31-8-2007 13:00 编辑 ]
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呜呜,为什么没有人看一下我的简历?发在11页329楼。我真的需要你们的帮助啊。谢谢先了。
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原帖由 Rachael725 于 31-8-2007 14:18 发表
呜呜,为什么没有人看一下我的简历?发在11页329楼。我真的需要你们的帮助啊。谢谢先了。


我帮您看了一眼, 觉得写的挺好, 对于申请clerk工作来说.

[ 本帖最后由 oea 于 1-9-2007 09:18 编辑 ]
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原帖由 jennyhou 于 30-8-2007 11:33 发表
报告前辈,我还在中国,还在等待VO发准签呢,8月的补料,应该快了吧,呵呵。我目前是做物流进出口工作的,有兴趣做采购物流或者行政等,确实对如何找工不懂,希望前辈们多多指教。


还早.
先多看看帖子,多上seek找点感觉吧.
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回复 #351 qqyang1980 的帖子

谢谢回复。时间一天一天地过,不知道什么时候才能真正走上本行?
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Thank you guys, please check my application kit

Summary
3+ years of account management experience in full service advertising agencies
Extensive experience in implementing marketing communication campaigns
Profound understanding in strategic planning, branding and marketing communications
Years of experience in collaborating with international media partners and suppliers
Serviced home appliance chain retailer, white goods manufacturer, food/drink manufacturer and city development programme
Hard working and creative thinking as well as responsible and proactive

Education                  

2005-2007           Griffith University                       Nathan, Brisbane QLD
•        B.A. Commerce in Marketing
2003-2005         AIT Academy                            Singapore
•        Diploma in Business




Work Experience               

March, 2003- Oct, 2003             Watch One Advertising Agency       Shanghai, China
•        Leading advertising agency in providing consultative service on marketing and strategic planning in China. Clients range from property developers and food manufacturers.
Position         Assistant Account Manager
•        Managed and assist in developing new and / or existing account relationship
•        Designed and presented marketing communication campaigns, proposals
•        Work closely with senior creative and production team
•        Ensure the work was tracked through respective department
•        Evaluate the results of campaign and Identify the further market opportunities   
Achievements
•        Successfully established new face of White Rabbit Creamy Milk Candy, the brand with 50 years history.  Remarkably increased the annual turnover by 15% (RMB 20,000,000)and significantly occupied 22% of market share for milk candy product in Shanghai.
•        Effectively differentiated the brand image of Anting New Town (Shanghai) among other towns and created brand awareness by unique integrated communication plan. Anting New Town (Shanghai) Scheme is one of the most important of Shanghai Urban and Regional Development Programme. The Town has hosted twice F1 Racing at its international circuit.

Feb, 2000-March, 2003         Big Idea Advertising Agency       Shanghai, China
Company Background
•        Top10 local advertising agency providing full marketing services (ATL & BTL)  
•        70% team members have years of experience in Ogilvy Advertising.  
Position        Senior Account Executive

•        Thoroughly investigated the clients’ background, marketplace and competitors and any related information
•        Assisted in developing campaigns ranging from brand communications strategy, through executional planning, negotiation and implementation
•        Led brainstorming and monitored the creative concept, working progress and quality.
•        Ensured a wide range of advertising medium was strictly performed within timelines and specified budgets
•        Implemented strategic and tactical marketing plans by collaborating with media partner, researches, suppliers and clients
•        liaised with clients, carry out general administrative duties and support the senior account management team
Achievements
•        Successfully enhanced the Electrolux brand image and awareness in Southeast China by introducing newly designed air-conditioner model of Electrolux and improved the overall sales by 50,000 sets of air-conditioner within 6 month
•        Assisted in planning and in charge of executing nationwide branding campaign of TOYO air-conditioner of TOYO Group. Campaign included tactical communication plan, new product launch plan, action plan of sales & marketing activities.     
•        Planed and executed sales & marketing plan for Siemens refrigerator


Interest        Movies, social outings, music, computer

Referees
Upon Request

Cover letter (I wrote it based on the ad)
Working as an Account Coordinator, you will be expected to provide support to Account Managers and Directors on each project you are working on. This could include contributing to brainstorm sessions, providing admin support, internet research, running artwork to and from the studio, liaising with clients and, of course, making the coffee.

A degree is the starting point. Attitude and potential are the key ingredients that will get you the job.

Attitude - willingness to learn, outstanding communication skills, humility, proactive, a can do approach, ambitious but with no ego.

Potential - intelligent, well read, well organised, attention to detail, lateral thinking, geniune passion for advertising.

I would appear to be an excellent candidate for the position of Account Executive, as advertised on Seek website.  I am a fresh graduate with 3-year experience in advertising agency and I am seeking every possible opportunity to restart my career in advertising industry in Australia.

As a recent graduate of Griffith University, BNE I have a Bachelor Degree in Commerce, major in Marketing. I have gained a comprehensive knowledge of marketing communications and enhanced my understanding of marketing operation.

Prior to undertaking my studies, I held a position in account management at advertising agencies in China for more than 3 years. In this role I was in charge of

•        Produced integrated marketing communication plans for domestic and international clients.
•        Collaborating with internal teams, partners, suppliers and clients to implement marketing campaigns
•        Liaison with clients to identify the market opportunities by the feedback of campaigns

I am very proud of my achievements outlined in enclosed resume. Because of my accountability and diligence, I was the Best Account Executive in agency where I serviced for 3 year and obtained high appraisal from clients. I strongly believe that there are countless things keeping me humble every day in this fast-paced, creative-driven industry.
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 楼主| 发表于 3-9-2007 00:08:32 | 只看该作者
Freeoz是一个互助性的赴澳移民社区,倡导的是我为人人,人人为我的服务精神。鉴于此,我们开设了蕾蕾简历工作室,希望能尽我们的绵薄之力,帮助大家熟悉简历的写法,尽早在澳生根落地。工作室自4.27号开张以来,已有四个月,改正简历六十余封,涵盖行业涉及IT,会计,行政,市场,建筑等,均有相关实例及修改意见可供大家借鉴。而且目前收到需要修改的简历,大多数也都是雷同的问题,要提修改意见也都非常重复。

因此相信只要您把简历工作室十余页贴子全部通读后,您对于简历的写法已经可以成竹在胸,自己可以修改出完善的简历了。

另外为了鼓励大家发扬freeoz"我为人人, 人人为我"的精神,更多的去帮助别的需要帮助的新移民朋友,多多发言,发精品贴,也为了照顾简历工作室成员自己的繁忙工作,我们将对简历工作室的准入规则做一个小小的修正。

自9月1日起,我们将只受理发贴数在400贴以上,或有一个及一个以上精品贴的会员的简历修改。

没有达到以上标准的会员也不要着急,我上面说了,请通读蕾蕾工作室全部的简历及修改意见,种类繁多,必有一款适合您,照着修改也就是了!


谢谢大家的支持, 希望大家多到工作版发帖交流讨论, 大家共同提高


[ 本帖最后由 老大卫 于 3-9-2007 20:33 编辑 ]
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发表于 3-9-2007 00:17:26 | 只看该作者

我倒

今天终于尝到只看帖不会帖的恶果了。400分好像很难赚呃。
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发表于 3-9-2007 00:58:20 | 只看该作者
leily jj 偶是在9.1 月号政策前的, #333
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你挤上了末班车
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