[原创]我的摄影入门习作之1

susan

1.他和正午的阳光<br>
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2.us<br>
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3.MAZDA在Frankston<br>
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qqyang的老婆

<P><table border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=0><tr><td><OBJECT codeBase='<a target=_blank href=http://download.macromedia.com/pub/shockwave/cabs/flash/swflash.cab>http://download.macromedia.com/pub/shockwave/cabs/flash/swflash.cab</a>#version=4,0,2,0' classid='clsid:D27CDB6E-AE6D-11cf-96B8-444553540000' width='48' height='48' Id='Audible80234348225'><PARAM NAME=movie VALUE='../plug-ins/audio/swf/05.swf'><param name=menu value=false><PARAM NAME=quality VALUE=high><PARAM NAME=play VALUE=false><param name='wmode' value='transparent'><embed src='../plug-ins/audio/swf/05.swf' quality='high' pluginspage='<a target=_blank href=http://www.macromedia.com/shockwave/download/index.cgi?P1_Prod_Version=ShockwaveFlash'>http://www.macromedia.com/shockwave/download/index.cgi?P1_Prod_Version=ShockwaveFlash'</a> type='application/x-shockwave-flash' width='48' height='48'></embed></OBJECT></td><td align='left' style='cursor:hand;' title='鼠标悬停播放' nowrap  onclick='document.Audible80234348225.Play()'>一定要幸福喔！</td></tr></table></p><P><table border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=0><tr><td><OBJECT codeBase='<a target=_blank href=http://download.macromedia.com/pub/shockwave/cabs/flash/swflash.cab>http://download.macromedia.com/pub/shockwave/cabs/flash/swflash.cab</a>#version=4,0,2,0' classid='clsid:D27CDB6E-AE6D-11cf-96B8-444553540000' width='48' height='48' Id='Audible62480648225'><PARAM NAME=movie VALUE='../plug-ins/audio/swf/06.swf'><param name=menu value=false><PARAM NAME=quality VALUE=high><PARAM NAME=play VALUE=false><param name='wmode' value='transparent'><embed src='../plug-ins/audio/swf/06.swf' quality='high' pluginspage='<a target=_blank href=http://www.macromedia.com/shockwave/download/index.cgi?P1_Prod_Version=ShockwaveFlash'>http://www.macromedia.com/shockwave/download/index.cgi?P1_Prod_Version=ShockwaveFlash'</a> type='application/x-shockwave-flash' width='48' height='48'></embed></OBJECT></td><td align='left' style='cursor:hand;' title='鼠标悬停播放' nowrap  onclick='document.Audible62480648225.Play()'>你好可爱耶！</td></tr></table></p><br>
加油哦～<br>
我们支持你！

susan

我用的是很傻瓜的2000多元，400万象素的傻瓜数码相机。相片是PS处理的。<br>
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第一张，我是特意把爆光调过，用来在黑与白之间有明显的反差。因为我的数码相机表现不出层次感，所以干脆用另外一种失真的视觉效果去表现这张图片。<br>
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第二张，因为阳光的反射，相片本身就有很多白色的磷光。没有特地去调整他的爆光程度。我也觉得这张不很非常满意，不是因为过爆的问题，而是觉得正张画面没有对比，颜色没有层次，就像一大块水泥。不过我还是放上来，是因为这张相片体现了“我们”，我是打算用来给自己美好的回忆用的。<br>
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第三张，我曾经的确是把地面缩小，露出更多天空。不过我实在是舍不得那只小鸟。并且在剪裁掉小鸟，露出更多的天空以后，整个画面会显得毫无生趣。于是我就把小鸟留下了，相比去掉小鸟的图片，我更喜欢有小鸟的这张。如果我能有个比较专业的相机和广角镜头，也许就能即保留小鸟又有景深了。<br>
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呵呵，我上面说的那么多，不是不接受意见，我只是想说明一下我的创作背景和我的思路，不一定就是对的。其实我很高兴你们俩能给我意见的，挺好，真的。<br>
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我其实是摄影还没有入门的选手，刚刚开始尝试去拍照，呵呵。只是开始喜欢了，就弄点相片让大家多评评，这样我才能进步。<br>
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欢迎大家一起来讨论，呵呵。

qqyang1980

不好意思地说一句....头两张的暴光稍微有点过,使主体不得突出.第三张如果少点地面,多点海,相信更加精彩,因为景深加强了,感觉更加开阔....<P><table border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=0><tr><td><OBJECT codeBase='<a target=_blank href=http://download.macromedia.com/pub/shockwave/cabs/flash/swflash.cab>http://download.macromedia.com/pub/shockwave/cabs/flash/swflash.cab</a>#version=4,0,2,0' classid='clsid:D27CDB6E-AE6D-11cf-96B8-444553540000' width='48' height='48' Id='Audible25133780441'><PARAM NAME=movie VALUE='../plug-ins/audio/swf/07.swf'><param name=menu value=false><PARAM NAME=quality VALUE=high><PARAM NAME=play VALUE=false><param name='wmode' value='transparent'><embed src='../plug-ins/audio/swf/07.swf' quality='high' pluginspage='<a target=_blank href=http://www.macromedia.com/shockwave/download/index.cgi?P1_Prod_Version=ShockwaveFlash'>http://www.macromedia.com/shockwave/download/index.cgi?P1_Prod_Version=ShockwaveFlash'</a> type='application/x-shockwave-flash' width='48' height='48'></embed></OBJECT></td><td align='left' style='cursor:hand;' title='鼠标悬停播放' nowrap  onclick='document.Audible25133780441.Play()'>加油喔！</td></tr></table></p><br>

qqyang的老婆

悄悄地说:第三张的色彩把握的很好,但是景深不是很够.<br>
解决方法:减少地面在画面上出现的空间,拉长海洋视角.这样感觉更加高阔哦....<br>
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安州人

哇,这个厉害.不仅仅是照片,而是有思想的设计啊.<br>
继续等待新的...<br>
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astina

酷～～～

风中旗

劲！

dearjelly

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hobtack

第三张是有点主题不明，景深不够。我感觉你换个方向取围墙上的那几个小鸟效果会好些，也能兼顾汽车的主题。

快乐的小旗

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JIM

什么构图啊，景深啊都是扯的，摄影最重要的是感觉，就是后期作的太过了一点，总的说不错！

happylulu

SUSAN MM很厉害的呀，入门习作拍的很好呀，我喜欢。<br>
假以时日，一定能成为摄影师，呵呵！<P><table border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=0><tr><td><OBJECT codeBase='<a target=_blank href=http://download.macromedia.com/pub/shockwave/cabs/flash/swflash.cab>http://download.macromedia.com/pub/shockwave/cabs/flash/swflash.cab</a>#version=4,0,2,0' classid='clsid:D27CDB6E-AE6D-11cf-96B8-444553540000' width='48' height='48' Id='Audible66760843984'><PARAM NAME=movie VALUE='../plug-ins/audio/swf/05.swf'><param name=menu value=false><PARAM NAME=quality VALUE=high><PARAM NAME=play VALUE=false><param name='wmode' value='transparent'><embed src='../plug-ins/audio/swf/05.swf' quality='high' pluginspage='<a target=_blank href=http://www.macromedia.com/shockwave/download/index.cgi?P1_Prod_Version=ShockwaveFlash'>http://www.macromedia.com/shockwave/download/index.cgi?P1_Prod_Version=ShockwaveFlash'</a> type='application/x-shockwave-flash' width='48' height='48'></embed></OBJECT></td><td align='left' style='cursor:hand;' title='鼠标悬停播放' nowrap  onclick='document.Audible66760843984.Play()'>一定要幸福喔！</td></tr></table></p>

阿兵

我看ＰＰ觉得漂亮就可以了，呵呵，肤浅啊１

ivymann

第一张调的暴光过度效果挺好，现在很流行。<br>
我喜欢第2张，女孩有时候很会捕捉感觉的瞬间，而且很少被技术束缚，<br>
这点比男孩强。<br>
第三张一般，呵呵。<P><table border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=0><tr><td><OBJECT codeBase='<a target=_blank href=http://download.macromedia.com/pub/shockwave/cabs/flash/swflash.cab>http://download.macromedia.com/pub/shockwave/cabs/flash/swflash.cab</a>#version=4,0,2,0' classid='clsid:D27CDB6E-AE6D-11cf-96B8-444553540000' width='48' height='48' Id='Audible77961163930'><PARAM NAME=movie VALUE='../plug-ins/audio/swf/07.swf'><param name=menu value=false><PARAM NAME=quality VALUE=high><PARAM NAME=play VALUE=false><param name='wmode' value='transparent'><embed src='../plug-ins/audio/swf/07.swf' quality='high' pluginspage='<a target=_blank href=http://www.macromedia.com/shockwave/download/index.cgi?P1_Prod_Version=ShockwaveFlash'>http://www.macromedia.com/shockwave/download/index.cgi?P1_Prod_Version=ShockwaveFlash'</a> type='application/x-shockwave-flash' width='48' height='48'></embed></OBJECT></td><td align='left' style='cursor:hand;' title='鼠标悬停播放' nowrap  onclick='document.Audible77961163930.Play()'>加油喔！</td></tr></table></p>