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 楼主| 发表于 6-10-2018 23:04:48 | 只看该作者
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But he loved sunflowers more than anything else.

And when I asked him why, he said he might have been in love with this girl who loved sunflowers.

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 楼主| 发表于 6-10-2018 23:05:23 | 只看该作者
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And there was this annoyingly dumb girl at school, who killed the lemon tree he planted with me in our first year of high school.

He even comforted her and said it was nothing.

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 楼主| 发表于 6-10-2018 23:05:41 | 只看该作者
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And I just couldn't bear with it.
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 楼主| 发表于 6-10-2018 23:05:59 | 只看该作者
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Until they got so close one day.
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 楼主| 发表于 6-10-2018 23:06:24 | 只看该作者
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And everyone knew they were dating except for me.

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 楼主| 发表于 6-10-2018 23:06:58 | 只看该作者
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I tore up her painting of sunflowers in art class.

And god, I hated her so much.

(嗯?真真是一段激烈的感情戏,笑)
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 楼主| 发表于 6-10-2018 23:07:28 | 只看该作者
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She was making my life a living hell.

And it was all because of him.


(所以我的女主你到底爱谁)
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 楼主| 发表于 6-10-2018 23:07:46 | 只看该作者
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He even got mad at me and scolded me for everything.
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 楼主| 发表于 6-10-2018 23:08:32 | 只看该作者
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After all this time, when I thought at least, he was my friend.


(年少冲动不懂事,误把友情当爱情,结果亏本一场空)
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 楼主| 发表于 6-10-2018 23:08:58 | 只看该作者
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And I really really thought i loved him.




(最简单的真情告白还是忏悔)
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 楼主| 发表于 6-10-2018 23:11:59 | 只看该作者
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In the end she died.

And it was because of him.

They got into a messy argument and she didn't watch the road.


They said her blood type was the rare rh negative A one.
And he was the closest they could find to help.

But that still didn't work.

I went to her funeral like everyone else at school.

And I brought a lemon tree branch, still blossoming.
I thought she might liked them as well, because she often drank lemon tea.



"Sorry. I hope you are happy where you are now. You can rip."

I almost whispered.

I wasn't the nicest person to her and she didn't like me that much anyway.


















And he was right in front of my house with a gloomy face.

I decided to walk past him.

But he pulled me into a tight hug.

And he was sobbing.

As expected.


"I never knew the meaning behind those lemons, and I never understood when you gave them to me, nor when she gave them to me. And it was all my fault she died!"

"It's all too late now."
Maybe that came out too cold.




Long silence.

"Ggo out with me, just for once, will you?"

"Yeah, and let you treat me just like a trash can because I still like you and you can just treat me however you want. Yeah, sure."

"I'm sorry, I really am."
It came out as a whisper.















Even if that meant I'd have to go through pain and possibly get hurt by and because of him.

And see how he suffers from time to time of that daunting memory.

But I thought I'd just be there for him, and with him.

And make a lemonade from the lemons life give me.























======
This is how this ends.



2017/02/04




(他是大猪蹄子,她是傻猪蹄子)
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 楼主| 发表于 6-10-2018 23:15:13 | 只看该作者
全文完


原文也是一天码完的

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发表于 6-10-2018 23:30:06 | 只看该作者
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