Task Response 7.0
1. addresses all parts of the task
论证不能片面,正面,反面都要说,一边倒的结构只说一方面,而完全漏了反面的论证。
论证结构有三种,
一边倒,通常写5段,开头结尾,加三段理由,或者两段理由
2+1结构,也是5段,第二段承认对方观点,并反驳,第三,第四段写支持自己观点的理由
对称结构,一般4段,第二段写正面,第三段写反面,最后提出自己支持的观点
do you agree or disagree, what is your opinion,可以写一边倒
to what extent do you agree or disagree,需要用2+1
discuss both sides and give your opinion,需要用对称结构
综上,考虑到一边倒容易被判partially address the tasks,对于agree or disagree,推荐使用2+1结构。
2. presents a clear position throughout the response
相对较容易,开头明确提出观点,结尾重申,对称结构,可以最后一段提出自己的观点
3. presents, extends and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to overgeneralise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus
论证有力支持论点,理由充分。避免牵强的理由,不符合逻辑的论证。
解决方案:学习范文,点评及经验帖
Coherence and Cohesion 7.0
1. logically organises information and ideas; there is clear progression throughout
逻辑清晰,理由充分,对论点的论证是连贯的,虽然分了不同的段
解决方案:学习范文,点评及经验贴
2. uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use
合理使用多种连接词,连接句子
解决方案:学习范文,积累同义连接词进行替换,或者其他高级连接词
3. presents a clear central topic within each paragraph
每段都有一个清晰的中心主题
Lexical Resource 7.0
1. uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision
词汇丰富,用词准确
解决方案:积累高级词汇,积累同义词,可进行同义替换,体现了flexibility(灵活),避免相同的意思只能用单一的词汇表达