关于ACS评估的推荐信

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最近正在准备ACS评估，看了一下官方提供的模板Skilled-Employment-Reference-Example.pdf，写了一封推荐信，不知道是否可以，个人感觉有点笼统。
因为我在Skills-Assement-Guidelines-for-Applicants.pdf里面看到下面两条：
1、At least 65% of the duties noted in the employment reference must be closely related to the nominated occupation (ANZSCO) for work experience to be suitable.
2、References need to describe your duties and responsibilities as stated by your employer. Generic job descriptions are not acceptable and will be assessed as not suitable.
还请有经验的前辈们帮忙看一下：


                                                                                                                         Employment Reference

Oct. 18 2013

To whom it may concern,

This is to certify that Mr XX was an employee of Company XX and was employed from September 1, 2007 until March 21, 2013.

Mr XX was employed on a full time (40 hours per week) basis as a Software Engineer. His duties and responsibilities included the following:

        1. Maintains existing code, including bug fixes and software feature requests
        2. Reviews Request Tracker software queue on a regular basis for assigned tasks, making sure due diligence is asserted in completing each request throughout its lifecycle up to and including deployment
        3. Actively engages in the code review process to improve the code quality of the Software Engineering Unit members
        4. Follows configurations management practises, proper code packaging including producing relevant documentation when releasing software.
        5. Manages code check in/check out/merging/branching according to software unit practises
        6. Ensures communications are clear, regular and consistent across all activities including documenting, when required.
        7. Undertakes activities that involve working on all phases of the software development cycle (Requirements, Design, Coding, Testing, Implementation & Maintenance)
        8. Implements software according to design specifications in accordance with the established software development process.
        9. Follows software development processes and holds others within the organisation accountable to follow that process
        10.Assists in producing project plans and completes allocated works to agreed time lines
        11.Meets with end users and contributes to user requirements gathering
        12.Designs appropriate software to meet user requirements

If you have any question regarding this letter, please do not hesitate to contact me at XXX@XXX.com.cn or +86XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX.


Sincerely yours,


XXXXX
Operation Support Center Manager