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本帖最后由 qiuxan 于 3-1-2014 19:38 编辑
大作文科技让越来越多人可以长寿到100,200岁，这是好还是坏，你的观点？
In the context of technical development, a growing number of people are expected to live longer. Some individuals believe it is good, whilst others concern about it. In this essay, this phenomenon will be discussed.
Those who think it can cause problems may hold the view that the soaring number of elderly people would be a heavy burden of the society. That is mainly because the welfare of these elder people will cost considerable money, and the youth will have to pay a lot of tax to support this public welfare. As a result of that, the living quality of young people will be impacted negatively.
On the other hand, others who believe this trend is a good thing might argue that the youth can learn a lot of life experience from the growing number of old people. This is due primarily to the fact that these old people may have much more experience than young people. If the senior citizens are willing to share their experience, the youth would be more mature. Therefore, these young people are more likely to adopt to a new environment and less likely to make mistakes.
In my opinion, the increasing number of elderly people enables people to have a whole family. Therefore their feeling of well-being will be raised. In contrast, in the past, people could not live as longer as they do today, so some people could not even see their grandparents. They might more or less feel a loss of their life. Being able to see more family will help people lead a happy life, and this is particularly important in countries where people place emphasis on family members.
In conclusion, although there is a concern of the growing number of elders, I believe it will bring more benefits.
可以看见，lz考试的时候觉得这题很简单，写in conclusion 的时候正好监考说 还剩下20分钟，后面20分钟全部用来检查了，可是考完和GF（同时考试最后GF作文7分，虽然她福利拼错了）讨论后才发现，题目没看完整，完全忽视了 科技，一次也没提到，大家想考7 真心建议题目先审 5分钟再下笔! 题目里每个名词和每个动词都很重要！！！
ps： a good thing我知道 用的很遭，我看过这篇 http://www.freeoz.org/ibbs/thread-968114-1-1.html ，但是题目是这么写的我才大胆的抄下去的！：）
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