Freeoz工作室的简历样本(目前不提供修改，历史记录仅供参考)

WICLO_C · 发表于 1-5-2007 12:50:17

good place here. i will attach later.

WICLO_C · 发表于 1-5-2007 22:30:51

有请各位提出宝贵意见，谢谢。

NAME
Address
Cell Phone: 04********
Email:

Summary

¨ 2 years Accounting experience, focus in full function accounts job
¨ Bachelor Degree of Commerce – Accounting (Macquarie University)
¨ Proficient in MYOB, Excel, Word, windows XP and Internet
¨ Member of golden key international honour society
¨ Strong teamwork and good communication skill
¨ Positive attitude, reliable, outgoing, quick learning and strong problem solving ability
¨ Hight level of attention to details
¨ Own transport

Education

Bachelor of Commerce- Accounting       Macquarie University          2004 -2006
Advance Diploma of Accounting          ** University, China             ****- ****
Diploma of Economic                            ** University, China          **** -****

Professional Experience

****** Co Pty Ltd, *** NSW                                           Mar 2006-Present
Accounts Officer

Responsibilities:
-Accounts payable/receivable
-Reconciliation
-Payroll process
-Prepare cheque payment
-Batching and coding of invoices
-Data entry
-Tax process
-Petty Cash
-Maintaining and processing ledger
-Liaising with the clients

**************, P.R.C                                                 Apr 2003-Apr  2004
Accounts Officer

Responsibilities:
-Accounts payable
-Payroll process
-Batching and coding of invoices
-Data entry
-Bank reconciliation

**************, P.R.C
Administration Officer                                              Dec 1999- Apr 2004

Responsibilities:
-Prepare weekly and Ann Rep annual report to the supervisor
-Draft the speech and minutes
-Maintain records, files
-Prepare administrative documents for signature and release
-Meeting arrangement
-Answering enquiries
-Maintain the Computer System

Other Employment History

Aug 2004 – now          Private tutor

Private Tutor of Accounting 101, management accounting, Macroeconomic Principles & Microeconomic Principles for Macquarie university’s students

Dec 2001- April 2004    Journalist of******Newspaper (part-time)

Achievement
¨ Member of golden key international honour society, which is opened for students whose academic achievement are in the top 15% at the university.
¨ The first in ECON110 Macroeconomic Principles at semester 2, 2004
¨ Chairman of Student council at *** University

REFERENCE:
Available by request

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leily · 发表于 2-5-2007 00:41:46

原帖由 WICLO_C 于 1-5-2007 21:30 发表
有请各位提出宝贵意见，谢谢。
NAME
Address
Cell Phone: 04********
Email:

Summary

¨ 2 years Accounting experience, focus in full function accounts job
¨ Bachelor Degree of ...

我对于会计不是很懂，但你的这个简历的summary写的实在一般。没有把一个招聘会计的HR注重点找出来。

首先，按国内来说，做贸易的，做制造业的，等等公司要找的会计是不一样的。

你的2年经验是在哪个行业没有写出来。

会计一般有一些专用的软件，你熟练掌握哪几种也没有写。

看你的responsibility，你应该是在一家比较小的公司里做会计的工作，可能所有的会计事务你都有管。但是你如果就写一句focus in full function accounts job，就突不出你的优点。你可以写的详细点，比如熟悉报税的全过程啦，熟悉整个帐务的流程啦。

我对于会计的专业知识了解不多，可能还需要对这方面更懂的TX来指点一下。

但你的summary里要着重突出你的专业优势，至于一些很大路的形容词可以少一点，比如Positive attitude, reliable, outgoing, quick learning and strong problem solving ability, 这些东西完全说明不了什么。

你的简历是要能证明你的专业度以及和别人不一样的价值。在这方面再多下点工夫。

二分之一 · 发表于 2-5-2007 03:50:45

比较郁闷，中介好像不大感兴趣，是不是简历不对，或者overqualified，或者没有本地工作经验？

Mobile: 04*****
Email: ************
Address: ***********
Resume
*******
______________________________________________________________
EDUCATION
Master of Business Information Technology, *********************
(Currently completing 11/2007)
Bachelor of Accounting, *************** University, 9/1996 – 6/2000

LANGUAGE AND PROFESSIONAL SKILLS
Language (spoken and written): English, Cantonese, Mandarin
Advance Level: MS Excel
Intermediate Level: SAP, MYOB Premier 8, Solution 6
Intermediate Level: MS Word, Access, Powerpoint, Outlook, SQL

WORK HISTORY
*******************             Dec 2000 – Feb 2006
System Accountant (5/2004 – 2/2006, subsidiary: ******************.)
Responsibilities/ Achievements:
• Executing G/L reconciliation and budget report.
• In charge of monthly and yearly financial reports.
• Coordinating with the Auditors for external reports.
• Face to face verbal communication with internal customers and external colleagues.
• In charge of month-end process and streamlining the financial software system.
• Constructing the ********** model with over 30 parameters.
Financial Accountant (10/2003 – 5/2004, headquarter)
Responsibilities/ Achievements:
• Preparation and analysis of monthly financial reports.
• Coordinating the financial reporting with 13 subsidiary companies.
• Coordinating with the Auditors for external reports.
• Developing a consolidated financial model using Excel and significantly reducing the time for preparation of consolidated financial statements.
• Working collaboratively in a team co-operating and sharing expertise, and developing positive working relationships.
Graduate Accountant (12/2000 – 10/2003, subsidiary:************************)
Responsibilities/ Achievements:
• Preparing journal entries, maintaining the general ledger.
• Processing payroll for 30 staff and relating bookkeeping work on a monthly basis.
• Processing month end journals, accruals and reconciliations.
• Maintaining Assets Register and reconciliations to accounts.
• Preparation and analysis of monthly financial reports.
• Budget and forecast preparation.
• Preparing and reporting ad hoc findings with the aid of spread sheet modelling.
• Coordinating directly with Head Office Accountants on a regular basis using a team based approach.
Computer software used in the positions: SAP R3, Excel, Access, Word, Project, Visio, Outlook, PowerPoint
Jul. 2000 – Dec. 2000 Assistant Accountant
*************** Co., Ltd. Hong Kong

Duties/Accountabilities/Responsibilities:
• In charge of the financial reporting of a company which operated in England
• Prepared and transformed financial statements from RMB yuan to HK dollars according to HK GAAP

PROFESSIONAL MEMBERSHIPS AND CERTIFICATES
CGA, MCSE, MCDBA, CISA

ACADEMIC RESULTS
Summary (Details available upon request):
Academic Transcript)    Segment Results (CGA )
ISYS2044 HD       FA4 HD
ISYS1018    HD         AU1 DI
INTE1002    HD       MA1    DI
ISYS2394    DI       FN1 HD

INTERESTS
Badminton, soccer, hiking, reading, exploring new challenges and learning new things

REFEREES

WICLO_C · 发表于 2-5-2007 11:02:09

many thanks leily .
any more suggestions from the other TXs?

twotwo · 发表于 2-5-2007 15:10:25

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shopfloor · 发表于 2-5-2007 21:10:14

谢谢老大卫，我改好后继续让你们帮我修改哈，谢谢谢谢

shopfloor · 发表于 2-5-2007 22:51:11

老大卫阿，我这次可是重新写了，您在帮我看看哈，谢谢哈
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Responsibilities:
I completed a Bachelor of Science in Environmental Science from Shanxi University of Finance and Economics in 2004 and commenced my employment as Engineer and Laboratory Manager with the Research and Development Department at Shenzhen VECT Catalyzer Co., Ltd in March 2004 and I was also a team member of our environmental research project “YSZ/Pd catalyzer”.

In 2004, I participated in research and development of a project titled “the pure palladium catalyzer which adopts the high ratio surface high-temperature-resistant RE oxygen-storing material----zirconium-cerium complex as the basis and theγ-Al2O3 carrier improved by RE (La and Ba)”.

Working along with Managing Director Mr. Han, General Engineer Dr Pang and colleague Ms Liu, I was involved in research on Production rule and technology of high-performance RE oxygen-storing material and high-temperature-resistant high surface ratio materials and assisted with completion of application for a patent titled “Pd/YSZ-Al2O3 catalytic converter with cellular carrier made of soft steel treated by hot dip aluminizing and micro-arc oxidization” with managing director Mr. Han.

In September 2005, I published the thesis titled “Test for Performance of Hot-proof and Anti-vibration of Ceramic Honeycomb Carrier Catalytic Converter for Motorcycle” on the magazine “Motorcycle Technology”.
See this:
http://www.wanfangdata.com.cn/Se ... b%e6%b5%b7%e5%85%89

In October 2006, I attended the seminar in Shenzhen of control technique of Motorcycle emission pollutant in China and published ”Speedy synthesis of Motorcycle with Trap of Hydrocarbon catalytic converter “ over the seminar.

In October 2006, I published the thesis titled “The Structure, Performance Evaluation and CAD of Cellular Ceramic Substrate Catalyst for Motorcycles” on the magazine “Motorcycle Technology”.
See this:
http://www.wanfangdata.com.cn/Se ... b%e6%b5%b7%e5%85%89

Besides the above-mentioned achievements and the duties I was responsible for and stated on my employment certificate, I have also undertaken the following responsibilities and tasks with my last employment, which include:

1) Designing the preparation technology of Catalyst and Conducting an ongoing and full-scale monitoring of catalyst quality, such as Catayst specific surface area, aperture, specific pore volume, granularity, etc. essential data information;

2) Ensuring that correct materials and equipment are used;

3) Training and supervising laboratory technical staff to ensure they comply with safe operating rules to work and operate equipment in laboratory;

4) Oversee researching staff of concern to fulfill the related experiment tasks;

5) In charge of day to day management in laboratory which includes dealing with abnormal conditions that happen in Chemical laboratory, stipulating the preventive measures and supervising the implementations of management rules in laboratory, undertaking operations and maintenance of equipment and collecting the relevant data of instrumental analysis and conducting a quality control of instrumental analysis.

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老大卫 · 发表于 4-5-2007 17:17:36

Job responsibility的写法有很大的问题。应该是用Bulletin Point来写，而且应该是短语，不是句子。你的写法完全错了。而且下面的应该是你的acheivements, 不是responsibiltiy。
Responsibilities:
I completed a Bachelor of Science in Environmental Science from Shanxi University of Financeand Economics in 2004 (这是你的学历，写在这里干什么)and commenced my employment as Engineer and Laboratory Manager with the Research and Development Department at Shenzhen VECT Catalyzer Co., Ltd in March 2004 and I was also a team member of our environmental research project “YSZ/Pd catalyzer”.

In 2004, I participated in research and development of a project titled “the pure palladium catalyzer which adopts the high ratio surface high-temperature-resistant RE oxygen-storing material----zirconium-cerium complex as the basis and theγ-Al2O3 carrier improved by RE (La and Ba)”.(不用直译名字，更重要的是说明你做了什么样的项目，属于那个industry。记住你的简历是给人事或中介先看的，具体项目的专业东西他们不懂.而且偶觉得你的翻译也不太英语化。太直接了。估计鬼佬更看不懂）

Working along with Managing Director Mr. Han, General Engineer Dr Pang and colleague Ms Liu, （告诉他们你老板叫什么名字没有意义的。关键是写什么项目，什么内容，你在里面的作用，你老是用was involved, was participated这样的词语，你的作用就减低了很多）I was involved in research on Production rule and technology of high-performance RE oxygen-storing material and high-temperature-resistant high surface ratio materials and assisted with completion of application for a patent titled “Pd/YSZ-Al2O3 catalytic converter with cellular carrier made of soft steel treated by hot dip aluminizing and micro-arc oxidization” with managing director Mr. Han.

In September 2005, I published the thesis titled “Test for Performance of Hot-proof and Anti-vibration of Ceramic Honeycomb Carrier Catalytic Converter for Motorcycle” on the magazine “Motorcycle Technology”. （这些论文是好东西，建议另列出，这不是responsibility，不过下面的link没有用，中文的界面，你倒是可以带几份杂志过来面试的时候装装样子show一下）
See this:
http://www.wanfangdata.com.cn/Se ... b%e6%b5%b7%e5%85%89

In October 2006, I attended the seminar in Shenzhen of control technique of Motorcycle emission pollutant in China and published ”Speedy synthesis of Motorcycle with Trap of Hydrocarbon catalytic converter “ over the seminar.

In October 2006, I published the thesis titled “The Structure, Performance Evaluation and CAD of Cellular Ceramic Substrate Catalyst for Motorcycles” on the magazine “Motorcycle Technology”.
See this:
http://www.wanfangdata.com.cn/Se ... b%e6%b5%b7%e5%85%89

Besides the above-mentioned achievements and the duties I was responsible for and stated on my employment certificate, I have also undertaken the following responsibilities and tasks with my last employment, which include

1) Designing the preparation technology of Catalyst and Conducting an ongoing and full-scale monitoring of catalyst quality, such as Catayst specific surface area, aperture, specific pore volume, granularity, etc. essential data information; （这句不错，多写点这样的）

2) Ensuring that correct materials and equipment are used; （基本职责，不写也罢）

3) Training and supervising laboratory technical staff to ensure they comply with safe operating rules to work and operate equipment in laboratory;

4) Oversee researching staff of concern to fulfill the related experiment tasks; （太高级了，这里找工没有用）

5) In charge of day to day management in laboratory which includes dealing with abnormal conditions that happen in Chemical laboratory, stipulating the preventive measures and supervising the implementations of management rules in laboratory, undertaking operations and maintenance of equipment and collecting the relevant data of instrumental analysis and conducting a quality control of instrumental analysis.

建议你这样改：
job responsibility
1,
2,
3,
4,
5,
achievements
1,
2,
3,
4,
5,
每句话用短语，不超过30词。多用主动词，多些行业经验，少直接翻译项目名字。

老大卫 · 发表于 4-5-2007 17:21:22

原帖由 twotwo 于 2-5-2007 14:10 发表

总部在美国的，如果去澳洲的分公司是不是有希望？我目前主要是marketing events执行方面和promotion material审批方面的工作．如果想找相近工作的不知需什么要求？没有local的经验应该较难吧？另外问一下， ...

能不能进澳洲分公司要问你自己公司啊，各公司不同的。不过个人认为作为marketing staff有点难，特别是你做events的，local性很强。
找相近工作要什么要求建议你网上自己找，seek.com。每个职位要求不一样，偶不敢在这里误人子弟。不过marketing events的specialist职位偶看到过几次，不是没有机会，但的确如你所说，没有local的经验很难很难。公司的推荐信没有太大的用处，除非你进自己公司。其他的一般不看。

老大卫 · 发表于 4-5-2007 17:28:17

Leily说得很对，你得简历里job responsibility说得太简单。等于不说，你可以看看下面二分之一得简历得职责描述。其实accouting得工作你说一个title大概就知道你做什么了。但还是要详细按照广告要求去强调你得工作背景。有什么achievements吗？比如应收帐款90％以上？帮公司建立什么财务process或系统？想想看，一样得会计去应聘，人家为什么要你。

summary里重点不突出，softskill太多，这样得话谁都会写，没有什么意思得，一般summary里softskill一条就够了。

最后一段报纸工作得经历不写也可以，对你求职没有什么意义。

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老大卫 · 发表于 4-5-2007 17:39:30

Mobile: 04*****
Email: ************
Address: ***********
（加上澳洲PR）
Resume
*******
______________________________________________________________
EDUCATION
Master of Business Information Technology, *********************（和你accounting得背景好像有点不付，怎么想到读那个专业呢）
(Currently completing 11/2007)
Bachelor of Accounting, *************** University, 9/1996 – 6/2000

LANGUAGE AND PROFESSIONAL SKILLS（这个放到后面去写，语言和基本PC技术不会给你加分得）
Language (spoken and written): English, Cantonese, Mandarin
Advance Level: MS Excel
Intermediate Level: SAP, MYOB Premier 8, Solution 6
Intermediate Level: MS Word, Access, Powerpoint, Outlook, SQL

WORK HISTORY
*******************             Dec 2000 – Feb 2006
System Accountant (5/2004 – 2/2006, subsidiary: ******************.)
Responsibilities/ Achievements:
• Executing G/L reconciliation and budget report.
• In charge of monthly and yearly financial reports.
• Coordinating with the Auditors for external reports.
• Face to face verbal communication with internal customers and external colleagues.（这条写得有问题，英语上）
• In charge of month-end process and streamlining the financial software system.
• Constructing the ********** model with over 30 parameters.
Financial Accountant (10/2003 – 5/2004, headquarter)
Responsibilities/ Achievements:
• Preparation and analysis of monthly financial reports.
• Coordinating the financial reporting with 13 subsidiary companies.
• Coordinating with the Auditors for external reports.
• Developing a consolidated financial model using Excel and significantly reducing the time for preparation of consolidated financial statements.
• Working collaboratively in a team co-operating and sharing expertise, and developing positive working relationships.
Graduate Accountant (12/2000 – 10/2003, subsidiary:************************)
Responsibilities/ Achievements:
• Preparing journal entries, maintaining the general ledger.
• Processing payroll for 30 staff and relating bookkeeping work on a monthly basis.
• Processing month end journals, accruals and reconciliations.
• Maintaining Assets Register and reconciliations to accounts.
• Preparation and analysis of monthly financial reports.
• Budget and forecast preparation.
• Preparing and reporting ad hoc findings with the aid of spread sheet modelling.
• Coordinating directly with Head Office Accountants on a regular basis using a team based approach.
Computer software used in the positions: SAP R3, Excel, Access, Word, Project, Visio, Outlook, PowerPoint
Jul. 2000 – Dec. 2000 Assistant Accountant
*************** Co., Ltd. Hong Kong

Duties/Accountabilities/Responsibilities:
• In charge of the financial reporting of a company which operated in England
• Prepared and transformed financial statements from RMB yuan to HK dollars according to HK GAAP
（职责没有问题，就是没有突出你得特色。有没有什么大得achievements? 偶知道routine得工作很难写，但现在得写法太普通了。谁都可以用得职责）另外注意你申请得职位是什么，就要突出那部分得经历，如果你申请得是financial account，你就突出你做financial report得经历，如果是小会计得职位，那这段经历就不match了。记住中介要什么你说什么，不用把所有做过得事情都写上去得。
PROFESSIONAL MEMBERSHIPS AND CERTIFICATES（这段放到前面去）
CGA, MCSE, MCDBA, CISA

ACADEMIC RESULTS(看不懂这些专业名词）
Summary (Details available upon request):
Academic Transcript)    Segment Results (CGA )
ISYS2044 HD       FA4 HD
ISYS1018    HD         AU1 DI
INTE1002    HD       MA1    DI
ISYS2394    DI       FN1 HD

INTERESTS
Badminton, soccer, hiking, reading, exploring new challenges and learning new things(这句不要写，有工作不稳定得嫌疑，和accounting得性格要求不付）

REFEREES

你有很长得会计背景，如果你申请会计得职位，建议加一个summary把你得背景说一下：
master degree of...bachlar degree of..
..years expereince in accounting and..
familar with MYOB...
Certificate of.....

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若菲 · 发表于 5-5-2007 22:56:48

这么好的帖子，建议班竹置顶

shellte · 发表于 6-5-2007 04:17:29

各位老大也给我的resume提提意见吧，通讯工程的。谢谢。

PROFILE

            Over 3 years work experience in wireless communication area including more than 2 years experience in WiFi (802.11a/b/g)/GPRS network engineering and 1 years experience in wireless transmission system
   (RF at 2.4GHz and 3.6GHz).
          Over 3 year experience in maintaining telecommunication networks and equipments
          Over 2 year experience as customer support engineer with the responsibilities of presale and post sale
          1.5 years experience in network technical support
          Master of Engineering, Wireless Communication, ANU
          CCNA certified
          Flexible, responsible and good team player

SKILL SUMMARY

       Solid background of designing and maintaining Wireless communication for different applications:
          -WiFi Network elements (Client, AP, Bridge, Router, AC and NMS)
               -GPRS archtecture
          -RF Amplifier and Antenna
          -Hardware installation, maintenance and firmware upgrade
          -Wireless network survey and test
       Solid background of designing, configuring and maintaining TCP/IP telecom network:
          -Router
          -Switch
          -VoIP system
          -Fiber system
       experienced in carrier class VPN, AAA and SNMP system
       Proficient in Microsoft Visio for designing wireless solution
            Proficient in Matlab and C

EMPLOYMENT HISTORY

ABC Inc.          Product Engineer                November 2002 – January 2005
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
   ABC was founded in 2002. It is a subsidiary of Gemtek Technology Co. Ltd, Taiwan, which is a global leading manufacturer focusing on wireless network (WLAN) market, and a giant OEM supplier to the world-class
   OEM partners, such as Compaq, Intel, NEC, and Nokia.
      Responsibilities:
       ---Designed and implemented various WLAN (802.11a/b/g) solutions, such as WLAN for enterprise (Ethernet+802.11a/b/g+VoIP), WLAN for hotel (Ethernet+802.11a/b/g+AAA server) and WLAN for mobile data
            access (802.11a/b/g+GPRS).
       ---Involved in wireless network engineering including RF survey and test, equipments (wireless AP, wireless bridge, wireless router, antenna and etc.) installation, configuration and troubleshooting.
       ---Provided technical support for customers such as hardware troubleshooting and firmware upgrade.
       ---Technically supported sales team to promote the products and solutions, such as presentation, demonstration and product test.
      Achievements:
       -Built and maintained over 30+ medium size wireless networks in residential area, city center, railway station, government office and university.
       -Implemented GPRS+WLAN integration project for China Mobile Communication Corporation (CMCC) Guangdong, for the purpose of combining the existing 2.5G network with the high speed WiFi network at hot
         spots. It led CMCC Guangdong purchase a large number of products from our company and therefore became our key customer in the following two financial years (2004-2005).
       -Established a network management system (NMS) for CMCC Guangdong to manage all the WiFi network equipments used in Guangdong province.

BCA Inc.       Network Engineer                October 2001 – October 2002
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
      BCA is a Internet service and content provider (ISP and ICP) with a large size broadband network with over 2,000 users in south China.
         Responsibilities:
       ---Maintained all the network equipments in Network Operation Center (NOC), including Gigabyte Ethernet equipments (routers and switches), SDH system and AAA system.
       ---Maintained data transmission systems including fiber and radio transmission links to guarantee the 24-hour non-stop operation.
       ---Network optimization by capturing the network traffic and analyzing the sample data.
       ---Provided weekly report as the technical instruction for next season’s network planning, system upgrade and equipment purchase.
      Achievements:
       ---Built the main network operation center (NOC) to manage the network operation. This project took half year and I participated in it from the beginning, with the tasks including planning, construction,
               equipment installation, testing and optimization.
       ---Independently connected 20+ residential areas into the core network within 6 months to extend the coverage of services.
       ---Built 30+ 2.4GHz radio transmission links as the backup data link of operating fiber backbone in case of emergency.

CAB          Technical Support                      July 2000 – September 2001
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
      CAB is the largest telephone and Internet services provider in China. China Telecom, Guangzhou is the branch company in Canton province.
         Responsibilities:
       ---Provided hotline support for China Telecom’s customers to solve the broadband technical problems including dial-up, ISDN and ADSL problems.
       ---Provided on-site support for business customers.
       ---Provided technical training for new customers.

EDUCATION

         Australian National University                               Feb 2005 – December 2006
         Master of Engineering (with HONOURS), wireless communication

         XXX UNI in China                                              September 1996 – July 2000
         Bachelor of Engineering, electronic material

         Cisco Certified Network Associate (CCNA)             2003-

HOBBIES

         Soccer
         - Had been the member of Chinese soccer team of ANU in 2006
         - Had been the member of engineering faculty team in the University
         Traveling
       Movie
       Reading

REFEREES:

         Mr. xxx    (Personal detail)
         Mr. xxx    (Personal detail)

yb76 · 发表于 6-5-2007 12:56:26

我有多年的DEVELOPER经验,但最近一个工作是在OUTSOURCING的一个UK公司做SUPPORT,(有两个月的UK工作经验)
一周前开始发RESUME到各AGENT,申请了很多DEVELOPER的工作,无一回复,
发给APPLICATION SUPPORT的有过3,4个电话,下周会有一个INTERVIEW.
我比较困惑的是,这里的BANKING SOFTWARE方面需求量比较大,有些明显很MATCH的职位,
不至于连电话都那么少,需要直接给AGENT电话来提示他们吗?

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Address: ## #### Street, Campsie, NSW 2194
Mobile: 0405 ### ###
Email: ##@msn.com
B## Y##
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Technology Summary

10 years of experience in all phases of database application development and support in:
SQL, UNIX shell(ksh,sed,awk), Oracle , C, DB2
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Employment

2005–Feb2007 Software Engineer/Production Support Analyst
###### System Solutions software, Newcastle UK & Hangzhou China
http://www.sssw####.com

 Client: Deutsche Bank Global Exchange System (GES) IT department
 Provide Level 2 support on a mission-critical platform in a demanding 24/7 environment
 Analysing, investigating and solving technology problems via Email and phone.
 Performing root cause analysis of technical outages
 Maintaining strong relationships with the Level 1 teams through whom issues are directed from the end users
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1999–2005 Software Engineer/Programmer
Shanghai #### Software Co.,Ltd. , China
http://www.#####.com/EN

 Development in the banking software via core online trading systems
 Involvement in the whole Software Development Life Cycle(SDLC):
Requirements Analysis, Systems Analysis and Design,
Implementation, Testing, Maintenance, Documentation
 Part of project management and customer training.
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1997–1999 Software Engineer/Programmer
J#### Commercial Bank, China

 Provide continues support to the banking saving OLTP system
 Maintaining and monitoring operation system software and database
 Post Implementation for the saving systems
 Escalating problems to 3rd Level when necessary
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Major Project Experience

Dec2005–Feb2007 Global Exchange System of D#### Bank
D#### Bank
 Analysing, investigating and solving technology problems via Email and phone for customers from different regions.
 Maintaining and post Implementation for the application system
 Maintaining knowledge base of known defects and issues, process, techniques
 Performing root cause analysis of technical outages
 Escalating problems to 3rd Level when necessary
Platform: Windows 2000 server, Oracle 10, AIX 5.0
Language: PL/SQL, Unix shell, Windows scripts, JSP
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Major Project Experiences (cont.)

Jun2003–Jul 2004 #### Commercial Bank Debit Card Transaction System
#### Commercial Bank, China
 Coding and unit testing for the End-of-Day batch processing system
 Coding and unit testing for the Online Transaction back-end system
 Coding and unit testing for the Online Transaction front-end system
 User acceptance testing and deployment for the applications
 Maintaining and post Implementation for the End-of-Day Batch system
Platform: AIX 5.0, DB2 v9, SCO-UNIX 5.0
Language: DB2,Standard C, SQL, Unix shell
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Oct2001–Aug2002 #### Commercial Bank Front-end system, China
#### Commercial Bank
 Coding and unit testing for the Online Transaction front-end system
 User acceptance testing and deployment for the applications
 Maintaining and monitoring operation system software and database
 Post Implementation for the End-of-Day Batch process systems
Platform: SCO-UNIX 5.0, Nonstop-UX, Informix
Language: SQL, C for TCP/IP,UNIX IPC(inter-processes communication)
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Aug1999–Jul 2001 China #### Bank Sun-Card Transaction System
China #### Bank
 Coding and unit testing for the Online Transaction back-end system
 User acceptance testing and deployment for the applications
 Maintaining and post Implementation for the End-of-Day Batch system
 24*7 on-call support for the Online Transaction card system
Platform: HP-UX 11.0, Oracle 8, SCO-UNIX 5.0, Bea Tuxedo
Language: Standard C, PL/SQL, Pro*C, Unix shell
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Sep1997–Jul 1999 #### Commercial Bank Online Saving Transaction System
#### Commercial Bank
 User acceptance testing and deployment for the applications
 Maintaining and monitoring operation system software and database
 Post Implementation for the End-of-Day Batch process systems
 24*7 on-call support
Platform: SCO-UNIX 5.0, TANDEM NSK V45
Language: SQL, C, Unix shell
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Education

Sep1993–Jul1997 Bachelor of Computer Science
#### Engineering University, China
Major: Computer Software
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Residental Status

Australian Permanent Resident, Driver’s License class C NSW
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References

Details of referees available upon request
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leily · 发表于 6-5-2007 13:29:09

原帖由 yb76 于 6-5-2007 11:56 发表
我有多年的DEVELOPER经验,但最近一个工作是在OUTSOURCING的一个UK公司做SUPPORT,(有两个月的UK工作经验)
一周前开始发RESUME到各AGENT,申请了很多DEVELOPER的工作,无一回复,
发给APPLICATION SUPPORT的有过3, ...

建议你把summary重新写一下。

比如你觉得你的优势在银行方面的软件开发，但是summary里完全看不出来。

你可以写一下，你有多少年开发银行软件的经验，曾经参与过哪些银行的多少项目，这些项目中一般使用的是什么平台，什么软硬件环境，你用的是什么语言。这些尽管在后面项目经验中有，但是你在summary里可以重点强调一下。

另外后面的项目经验里可以加一个项目介绍，大概说明一下你做的这些项目是用于什么用途，什么样的规模等。方便别人发现他的要求与你的经验的适合点。

建议你多看看招聘广告。

其实写简历有一个很简便的法子。就是多找一些你认为和你非常适合的招聘广告里的要求，汇总起来就是你的responsibility.这样，一来，英语的语法错误确保不会发生，二来，有的时候你自己做的一些事情，你未必整理的那么系统。

但要切记，不要全抄一个广告，多找几个，汇总一下。否则很刮三的。

[ 本帖最后由 leily 于 6-5-2007 12:32 编辑 ]

二分之一 · 发表于 6-5-2007 17:17:47

感谢老大卫的意见，学BIT原来是想作系统会计方面的工作，那样会稍微专一点点
最近在准备aussie 的CPA，看来唯有加入CPA才有希望

原帖由 老大卫 于 4-5-2007 16:39 发表
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二分之一 · 发表于 6-5-2007 17:18:44

以为你工作忙不上网了，最近过的不错吧？

原帖由若菲于 5-5-2007 21:56 发表
这么好的帖子，建议班竹置顶

oea · 发表于 6-5-2007 21:03:54

原帖由 yb76 于 6-5-2007 11:56 发表
我有多年的DEVELOPER经验,但最近一个工作是在OUTSOURCING的一个UK公司做SUPPORT,(有两个月的UK工作经验)
一周前开始发RESUME到各AGENT,申请了很多DEVELOPER的工作,无一回复,
发给APPLICATION SUPPORT的有过3, ...

我说几句, 如果不爱听就当是我没说.

粗看了一下, 你是在国内银行, 主要做c 和sql 在unix上跑的东西. 哥们在国内也干过这个.

在澳洲的银行, 现在基本不再新做用c的开发项目了. 恕我孤陋, 如果有, 请各位大侠拍砖.

饭碗现在都被java 和.net抢了.

老大去德银做support是比较正确德选择. 人挪活, 树挪死. 换个行当没什么不好的.

如果想做回开发, 学点新东西吧.

另外关于你的简历. 银行里分的是很细的. 比如说 Retail, Equity, FX, Commodity, Asset ....

你是做什么的?

你说做过core online trading systems, 是trading什么的. 最好都要说清楚.

如果看见你认为非常理想的职位, 就给中介打电话.没什么客气的.

[ 本帖最后由 oea 于 6-5-2007 20:14 编辑 ]

yb76 · 发表于 6-5-2007 21:15:59

谢谢LEILY和OEA的专业意见.
已经按照标题党的思路修改SUMMARY.
另外对于申请方向,做DEVELOPER职位少(偶尔见到ORACLE的),
做SUPPORT的难过中介关(一看非LOCAL),确实在困惑中.
还希望听听对BANK IT非常熟悉的单衣班主帮忙分析分析.

WICLO_C · 发表于 7-5-2007 23:28:50

再次感谢。老大卫和蕾蕾工作室

qqyang1980 · 发表于 8-5-2007 16:19:49

回复 #65 二分之一的帖子

原帖由 WICLO_C 于 1-5-2007 21:30 发表
有请各位提出宝贵意见，谢谢。
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应老大卫的要求，看看帖子，觉得这个职业描述的部分，需要做以下工夫：
1、把你做过的这几个accounting role，拿上seek上查一下，看看相关职位的职业描述，然后exactly用同样的字眼去描述相同的职能。seek上招工的字眼应该都是从公司里的职责描述中抄下来的，而职责描述又是HR consulting firm帮忙写的，应该相当概括，相当经典。

2、每次你把简历发过去之前，要根据你申请的职位，把相关性比较大的工作经历往前排，并在resume一开始的personal profile里面强调，这样可以加强agent对你的印象。

老大卫 · 发表于 8-5-2007 16:36:31

多谢oea和qqyang兄弟，其实偶们几个名为工作室，实际只是在抛砖头，各个专业的简历都有很多不同，我们能说的只是通用的问题，希望有更多的朋友们参与进来，贡献自己的职业知识和经验，为广大移友服务。

qqyang1980 · 发表于 8-5-2007 16:38:29

原帖由 leski 于 1-5-2007 00:15 发表
谢谢老大卫了！我也觉得会计这方面太弱了。基本上投出去别人不理我的。sign....

要向各人牛人学习。再努力。

我改完后再贴上来，请领导审阅。

你还有几个方面可以发展一下：
1、你考过CPA没有？一定要快点考过，国内没经验的没这个不成。
2、你不是有payroll experience嘛，你还可以申请payroll方面的工作，不过嘛，爆无聊，最近在做internal audit related to payroll，觉得这个payroll是要身心修炼的工作。但这种工作本地人就不一定favourate，所以，有很多进入的余地。还有，payroll其实很有行业区别的，有不少公司还高payroll 外包，还有专门的payroll system有些integrated with HRIS，如果做的好，还是有出路的。
3、做teller出身的，据说台阶是这样上的，teller-->internal transfer to "assistant accountant"然后就是萝卜坑了。

强调老大卫的观点，跟你现在申请的工作描述无关痛痒的零工经验，简略带过，并且往后排；有关系的写详细点，search招聘网站上相关职位描述的经典词句，直接套用。

还有把你的education写清除，一眼看不到啊，在没有很strong的工作经验支持下，一个qualified的学历还是能够给雇主一些安慰的。每一次面试，雇主都回问我学习和学校的事情。

qqyang1980 · 发表于 8-5-2007 16:48:54

原帖由 leski 于 1-5-2007 00:15 发表
谢谢老大卫了！我也觉得会计这方面太弱了。基本上投出去别人不理我的。sign....

要向各人牛人学习。再努力。

我改完后再贴上来，请领导审阅。

你找适合自己的工作的时候要好像audit里面学的，看internal control的时候先要全面review control risk，还要by account看，然后还要by assertion看，找工也是这样。现是要看这个工作听起来，乍一看合我不？然后对比每一个职业要求，对比下来，有几条不合格？

然后就要form opinion啦：
1、如果全部都合格，那马上投，别犹豫！（Unqualified）
2、如果只有那些标明preferable的不合格，那也尽管投，那些不是选择的关键，只是对比最后的竞争者时候的衡量条件！（Unqualified）
3、如果有1-2条不合格，但不是最基本的不合格，那照样投，试试看吧，顶多也只算qualified report，闯闯关说不定就过了！(Qualified)
4、如果大于2条不合格，那你少来了，别投了，省的这个公司以后出来个你能行的职位，但你的简历已经有不合格的记录，被自动喀嚓下来。(Advert/Disclaim)

单衣纵酒 · 发表于 8-5-2007 17:06:30

原帖由 yb76 于 6-5-2007 20:15 发表
谢谢LEILY和OEA的专业意见.
已经按照标题党的思路修改SUMMARY.
另外对于申请方向,做DEVELOPER职位少(偶尔见到ORACLE的),
做SUPPORT的难过中介关(一看非LOCAL),确实在困惑中.
还希望听听对BANK IT非常熟悉的 ...

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单衣纵酒 · 发表于 8-5-2007 17:11:59

不好意思，最近病的半死不活的，一直看不了小字。
这个是我自己的ＣＶ第一页部分，直接贴上来给你参考下吧。

你的ｓｕｍｍａｒｙ写的太简单了，没有闪光点。
基本上如果在第一页抓不住雇主，你的希望就很小了。要根据ＪＤ写到你会的非常小的细节。

leily · 发表于 8-5-2007 17:12:18

原帖由 老大卫 于 8-5-2007 15:36 发表
多谢oea和qqyang兄弟，其实偶们几个名为工作室，实际只是在抛砖头，各个专业的简历都有很多不同，我们能说的只是通用的问题，希望有更多的朋友们参与进来，贡献自己的职业知识和经验，为广大移友服务。

嗯! 这几天下来,觉得自己在专业知识方面真是有限, 不能在技术方面提出更有深度的建议.

只能说一些皮毛.很羞愧啊.

希望更多专业人士加入我们.

单衣纵酒 · 发表于 8-5-2007 17:15:06

皮之不存，毛将焉附。

偶们还是背靠leily ＭＭ这棵大树好乘凉啊。

yb76 · 发表于 9-5-2007 12:22:30

Urgent help needed !!!

Could anyone explain what is meaning of first question?
What is the best answer for the 2nd question?
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What are the most lines of
original C/C++ code you have personally written in one project? How confident
are you in your ability to write C or C++ without a reference?

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