Freeoz工作室的简历样本(目前不提供修改，历史记录仅供参考)

dali

原帖由 emilydear 于 9-7-2007 16:40 发表
老大卫说：“volunteer的工作很重要,有这段经历绝对是加分的”
那么容偶问个傻问题，偶能在简历最后other information 里加入偶当背包客Backpacker的经历吗？
偶在Brisbane曾当过背包客，被city backpacker里 ...

喜欢就加了。。

最少没坏处。

能否抓眼球就不好说了

johnlee

Resume

Objective

Seeking a position where chemical engineering skills and chemical research experience will add value.
Profile

About 10 years of experience in major firms, engaged in chemical industrial operation and synthetic researches of inorganic and polymeric materials. Be competent for the qualifications concerning chemical or chemical engineering. And about two years of experience as English translator and corrector in a company providing patent abstracts for chemical abstracts service ().

Experience


(1) About two years, as a translator and corrector in the editing and translating department of Co. Ltd., mainly translated the Chinese chemical, electronic and mechanical abstracts of patents into English for CAS, and enhanced the abstracts by extracting the key parts from the inventions.

(2) About five years, worked as chemical engineer in the research and development center of Co. Ltd. Mainly researched the deep developments of the main and side products in the company.

Recycled Pd from the useless Pd on carbon catalyst in the hydrogenation of the PTA chemical factory; researched preparation of anti-static PET fiber containing CuI which was prepared by myself and designed its industrial preparation process; prepared the ultraviolet proof PET fiber containing zinc oxide prepared through a patented method of myself and wove the fabrics with UPF greater than 30, and realized industrial production of the fiber; and took part in the research subjects of the cooperators, such as the luminescent PET fiber containing rare-earth luminescent powder, the barium sulfate nanoparticles dispersed in the ethylene glycol, application of carbon nanotube in PET fiber, antibacterial fiber, etc.

As one of the inventors, patented six findings in which five are authorized; and published five papers in the chemical and composite chemical fiber fields.

(3) About four years of experience as assistant chemical engineer in purified terephthalic acid (PTA) chemical factory of Co. Ltd.

Engaged in the operation of the chemical process and the control of process parameters, and especially mastered various operation units of the chemical equipments, such as centrifugal pump, positive displacement pump, centrifuge, hydrogen electrolytic cell, blower fan, hot oil furnace, etc.

Took part in annual maintenance of the pipelines and devices of the factory; and was responsible for the dispatch of the parts which are adequate for the specifications and chemical conditions of the units, and responsible for in-situ maintenance of the chemical operation units mentioned above.

Found the cause of the hot oil furnace unable to provide sufficient heat, after analyzed the conditions including the atomizing steam pressure, the flow rate and pressure of the fuel oil, the running state of fuel oil gear pump and the flame state in the furnace to draw the conclusion that the abnormal water content in the fuel oil results in the undesired effect.

Researched the abnormal high content of p-toluic acid in the PTA by analyzing the operation conditions of the crude TA unit, and the two-stage centrifugal separators, recycle water, hydrogen pressure, crystallization in the reaction drum and the three-stage crystallizing drums in PTA unit, and found that mother liquor entrapped in the terephthalic acid crystals has the most possibility to cause the problem.

Education Background

Master of inorganic chemistry （2004）
Bachelor of Chemical Engineering（1996）

Other Facts

Be familiar with computer softwares and have the interpersonal skills for liaison with clients and authorities

单衣纵酒

原帖由 emilydear 于 9-7-2007 16:40 发表
老大卫说：“volunteer的工作很重要,有这段经历绝对是加分的”
那么容偶问个傻问题，偶能在简历最后other information 里加入偶当背包客Backpacker的经历吗？
偶在Brisbane曾当过背包客，被city backpacker里 ...

Volunteer可以表现出的是你的社会责任感，爱心，当然会加分。

背包客属于个人爱好，而且在国外很多年轻人都有这个阶段。个人觉得背包客给人的印象是不稳定，以及个性，与大部分公司要求的忠诚，团队合作不锲合。

单衣纵酒

原帖由 magic2007 于 8-7-2007 12:46 发表
我现在在新加坡工作，移民澳洲正在申请阶段，如果顺利，可能十二月会下来，我目前想在新加坡换一家公司，因为我目前的公司搞开发的大部分是中国人，所以交流都用中文，我想减少到澳洲的磨合期，所以想找另外一家 ...

http://www.freeoz.org/forum/view ... 6647&highlight=

leily

原帖由 单衣纵酒 于 11-7-2007 13:26 发表


Volunteer可以表现出的是你的社会责任感，爱心，当然会加分。

背包客属于个人爱好，而且在国外很多年轻人都有这个阶段。个人觉得背包客给人的印象是不稳定，以及个性，与大部分公司要求的忠诚，团队合作 ...

同意这个意见。

sunray

真是好贴，相见恨晚，请帮我看看我的简历，银行方面的，可能专业不甚对口，可各位大侠都是熟练加高手，请赐教．
  Education

2003-2005        East China University of Politics and Law
International Economic Law (master of law)
1994-1998        Bachelor of Finance
South West University of finance and economics
ChengDu, China

Skill Summary
1        able to make accurate calculations quickly
2        Computer proficiency (Microsoft Office: word, Excel, Lotus Notes, Email and Internet)
3        Ability to work both independently and as part of a team
4        well organised
5        Friendly and efficient customer service
6        good communication and negotiation skills
7        aptitude for research
8        Fluent in Chinese
9        interested in the financial market.
10        able to be firm yet tactful.
11        familiar with international settlement and clearing procedure

Employment History

May 2005 – June 2007        Manager of section office/ Risk management department/

        assesses the viability and credit risk of business and consumer loan proposals
        examines, evaluates and processes applications for credit or loans and, in a commercial enterprise, controls and processes accounts
        analysis financial statement and make reports, graphics and financial statement to report the result to management level

Jul 2002 – May 2005        Customer manager/ Corporation department/

        assess loan requests or commercial credit applications through interviews with applicants and checking application forms, references, credit ratings, credit scores, pay slips and other information
        approve or recommend approval of loans and commercial credit applications within policy guidelines
        prepare papers setting out conditions and periods of loans, rates of repayment, or in a commercial area, the setting out of trading terms
        prepare reports of loans and accounts which have outstanding (unpaid) amounts
        keep records of arrears (behind in payments) and prepare routine letters or make telephone calls requesting payment
        prepare statements of overdue accounts and forward these for legal action
        prepare reports on credit ratings of customers
        answer enquiries concerning loan balances or commercial accounts, penalties and credit standing of customers.

Oct 2000 – Jul 2002        International officers
        deals with international finance enquiries and transactions for customers, including documentation for importing and exporting
        deal with the application of telegraphic remittance, Letter of credit, drafts, etc.
        conducts foreign currency transactions for overseas travelers
        make reports, graphics and declaration to regulation enforcement

Jul 1998 – Oct 2000        Accounts clerk
        receive and record invoices and arrange payment
        prepare and send invoices to debtors
        check and process loan applications
        calculate and distribute wages and salaries
        prepare regular reports and summaries of accounting activities
        prepare financial statements and debtors' listings
        check customers' credit ratings
        verify recorded transactions and report irregularities to management
        prepare reconciliations of accounts.
        familiar with international settlement and clearing procedure

[ 本帖最后由 sunray 于 12-7-2007 16:59 编辑 ]

funjoke

呵呵，今天才认真看完这个帖子，看来我的简历要改了。

leily

原帖由 sunray 于 11-7-2007 17:13 发表
真是好贴，相见恨晚，请帮我看看我的简历，银行方面的，可能专业不甚对口，可各位大侠都是熟练加高手，请赐教．
  Education

2003-2005        East China University of Politics and Law
International Econom ...

银行方面的简历我还真看不出什么，从架构上看没问题。看看老大卫会不会有意见给你，他还蛮熟悉银行工作的。

crystalmm

请老师们帮我看看，我都是只申请entry level的，所以简历也做得很简单，争取一目了然。我现在投的基本上是bookkeeper/office clerk之类的，效果很差。那么像我这样的经历，还可以投什么样的职位呢？先在此大礼谢过！

Name

Address：
Tel:
Mobile:
Email:
Resident Status: Permanent Resident of Australia

CAREER OBJECTIVE               
To apply expertise in Chinese culture and serve as a bridge between the east and west （一直想做点和中国相关的事情，比如找china desk之类的）
To excel in business development& communication skills


EDUCATION:               
(2006-2007) Diploma of Business Management，Central TAFE WA
(2006-2007) Diploma of Accounting, Central TAFE WA
(1997-2001) Bachelor of Arts in Journalism /News Media and Communication, XXX University, China

SKILLS:               
Computer literature
Skilled in MYOB and Microsoft office
Bilingual – English & Mandarin
Good organization，communication & time management skills

WORK HISTORY:
1999-2001        XXX Daily (newspaper),  China       
Market researcher & journalist (Part time)

2001-2004        Media and Publication Bureau of XXX Province China       
Media market analyst
Media department Officer

2004  XXX International Language School, Singapore       
Administrative staff

2005  XXX Hotel, Perth WA       
Customer service

ACHIEVEMENTS:

MEDIA MANAGEMENT                
Analyze marketing objectives, formulate media strategies and recommend best media plans for senior management.

Oversee official communication channels between government agencies and various media companies including newspapers, radios and TV stations.

Organized and maintained an “early and simple warning system” to provide guidance regarding day-to-day actions for senior management.

Organized yearly training programs targeting senior executives, managers, academic staff and journalists.

Team leader of the official media centre for “2003 Western Forum of China (international conferences on economic development in Western China)”

Officer of the official media centre for “2001 World Asen Symposium on Forest Conservation and Sustainable Development”

Wrote and edited more than 200 articles which were published in various Chinese newspapers and magazines.

EXPERIENCED JOURNALIST               
Interview information sources and collect news information.

A proven professional with experience in covering a variety of topics including general assignments, business reporting, courthouse reporting, special projects, human interest stories.

Gather and coordinate photos for stories. Designed setups for and photographed series on food and construction projects.

Versed in researching topics and developing relationship with key sources.

Accustomed to demanding deadlines and high-pressure situations.

Experienced in navigating the Internet to research daily stories.


INTERESTS:               
Music , photography, travel, table tennis and badminton

[ 本帖最后由 crystalmm 于 13-7-2007 16:07 编辑 ]

金枪布道

第一印象先随便说几句：
1。去掉Career Objective
2。去掉Resident Status
3。Education去掉中国的学历
4。Skills重写，加强Accounting方面的技能
5。Work history重写，把时间倒过来，从最近的往以前写。去掉与Accounting\Administration\澳州、新加坡工作经验不相关的部分
6。增加你在TAFE学到的课程的内容，着重写这些课程涵盖的东西

发挥你记者的语言组织能力，把简历写到：
突出Bookkeeper需要的精确、有条理、值得信赖、擅长沟通这些特性，着重写你的办公室管理经验、客户服务经验

Good luck!

crystalmm

原帖由 金枪布道 于 13-7-2007 16:08 发表
第一印象先随便说几句：
1。去掉Career Objective
2。去掉Resident Status
3。Education去掉中国的学历
4。Skills重写，加强Accounting方面的技能
5。Work history重写，把时间倒过来，从最近的往以前写。 ...

这么快！！我还做好排两天队的准备呢。
您的意思是不是我以前那些记者和政府的工作经历就干脆别写了？要是中国学历也不要的话，简历就没有什么可写的了。如果人家问我以前在中国都干什么呢，我又怎么回答呢？谢谢

emmadashaozi

这个简历是我斟酌了好久才写出来的，希望前辈们帮我修改一下。我刚刚搬来墨尔本，准备开始找关于accounting的工作，还请大家多多关照！谢谢。

Objective
A challenging accounting position in an organisation where a background in accounting and bookkeeping, customer services and office administration experience would be needed.

Summary
Highly motivated, responsible person with experience in customer services, office administration and management in a fast-paced environment, where a strong multi-tasks ability is regarded. Qualified skills in accounting and bookkeeping backgrouds and MYOB software with high attention to details. Energetic and outgoing young person who is seeking challenges and varieties in workplace.

Employment History
Assistant accountant                                   04/2007 – 06/2007
Jilin Yatai Vehicles Supermarket Co. Ltd.

Duties:

        To maintain and update the records of book keeping.   
        To reconcile invoice e.g. payment invoice, receipt invoice
        To maintain accurate list of all clients along with the details of amount owed.
        Daily banking and reconciliation of bank statements
        Compute and account for the accountant

Administrative Manager                                08/2006 – 02/2007
Espee Imports Pty Ltd

Duties:

        File invoices and documents
        Maintain financial records of the company in MYOB
        Process weekly payroll for 30 staff
        Prepare quarterly reports, reconciliations, and accounts for review by the external accountant
        General payments of bills
        Control costing
        Order stocks of two restaurants under the company
        Be responsible and report to director

Assistant Manager/Manager                             06/2006 -- 12/2006
The Spice Indian Restaurant, Café & Bar

Duties:

        Control and order stocks
        Roster staff
        Monitor work operations and staff performance
        Maintain high quality customer service
        Handle daily cash takings and report to owner weekly
        Organize in house functions and parties
        Create and develop business plans for special occasions and implement
        Communicate and deal with employees, suppliers and customers

Waitress                                             
The Spice Restaurant, Café & Bar                        03/2006 -- 06/2006
Dragon Palace Restaurant                               02/2004 -- 07/2006
Mikaku Japanese Restaurant                             03/2005 -- 02/2006
Flavor of India & the Saffron Indian Restaurant              06/2004 -- 01/2005

Duties:
        Provide quality service and responsible service of alcohol
        Make and serve espresso coffees
        Operate a bar
        Provide a link between kitchen and service area

Education background
Tertiary
January 2004—July 2006      Bachelor of Commerce (Accounting)  
University of Tasmania
03/2006-- now              Certificate Ⅳ in Hospitality (Supervision)
                          Drysdale Institute Tasmania
              Certificate Ⅲ in Hospitality (Operation)
                          Drysdale Institute Tasmania

Membership
July 2006 -- now            Associated member of CPA Australia

Community Service
Secretary                                            02/2006 – 02/2007
Chinese PRC Society

Duties:

        Work with colleagues to provide service to Chinese students at University and college
        Provide a link between students and Chinese embassy
        Keep records of meetings and society
        Organize functions and activities of society

2005 Mentor Scheme
University of Tasmania

Duties:

        Provide campus tour
        Support new international students

Work Status
Australian Permanent Resident

Language
Speak Mandarin as the first language
Band 7 of IELTS test in listening, reading, writing and speaking

References
Available upon the request

金枪布道

原帖由 crystalmm 于 13-7-2007 16:24 发表

要是中国学历也不要的话，简历就没有什么可写的了。如果人家问我以前在中国都干什么呢，我又怎么回答 ...

我不是给你建议了一些东西你需要在简历里面强化么？比如，从你的简历里面看不出你在Bookkeeping方面学了什么，学得怎么样。又比如，你这个人是否耐得住枯燥的bookkeeping工作，是不是值得信赖、是否稳定。你知道吗，做帐很忌讳换人频繁，如果你突出很多其他方面的东西，人家会觉得：你overqualified，做不长久。

至于你以前在中国做什么，有机会问你，就说明人家对你有兴趣了！那时候你怎么如实回答人家只会给你加分，不会影响你的表现。

crystalmm

原帖由 金枪布道 于 13-7-2007 17:24 发表



我不是给你建议了一些东西你需要在简历里面强化么？比如，从你的简历里面看不出你在Bookkeeping方面学了什么，学得怎么样。又比如，你这个人是否耐得住枯燥的bookkeeping工作，是不是值得信赖、是否稳定。 ...

醍醐灌顶！！马上就改！改了要是还不行，我再来！！
感谢大师真诚的帮助，祝您周末愉快

distantmusic

Thanks for so good topic, could you please give me some advices, thanks!

Resume
Personal information                                         
First Name:   XXX
Family Name: XXX
Gender: Female
Nationality:        Chinese
Resident Status: Permanent Resident
E-mail Address: XXX
Mobile Phone: XXX
Mailing Address: XXX
                                                            
Objectives
I am seeking a job which mainly focuses on but not limited in architectural projects. It is ideal if it combined knowledge of both architecture and planning, because I’m quite familiar with the filed of architecture, and I’m studying in planning now. If the job needs to use drawing or graphic software, I’m willing to do that, because it’s indeed an enjoyable thing for me.
                                                                              
Key Skills
●        Advanced AutoCAD and Photoshop skills
●        Be proficient in using MS Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Land and GIS (ArcMap).
●        Be good at analysing data, organising materials and compiling reports.
●        Effective communication and interpersonal skills.
●        Experiences in well managing small projects.
                                                         
Other Skills
●        Ability to provide a high level of customer service.
●        Problem solving and decision making skills
●        Well developed coordination skills in the team work.
●        High level of professional ethic.
●        Capability and willingness to learn professional skill.
●        Strong ability to plan and manage own time.
                                                            
Education
●        Bachelor of Architecture: Beijing University of Technology, China (June 2002)
●        Master of Planning: University of New South Wales (Ongoing)
                                                            
Further Training                                             
●        Vocational Training for Architect, including training courses of Site Planning, Architectural Materials, Architectural Economics,             Construction and Operation Management, and Architectural Physics. (2005, 120 hours, by Jingtie Social Science & Technology Ltd.)

●        Energy Efficiency Design (2006, 40 hours, by Ministry of Construction, China)

●        Important issues on Construction Document Design (2006, 40 hours, by China Exploration & Design Association)
                                                            
Employment                                                
Period:        July2002 – February 2007
Employer:         Internal Trade Engineering Design & Research Institute, P.R. China
Job Title:        Assistant Architect
Major duties:       
●        Site inspections.
●        Project programming.
●        Project feasibility studies.
●        Proposal and tender documentation.
●        Develop master plans.
●        Concept/ sketch design.
●        Presentation reports or drawings to the working team for opinions, or to the client               for approval.
●        Documentation on both explanations and drawings.
●        Project Coordination with team members from relevant disciplines, project developers, building material suppliers and builders.
●        Construction documentation.
●        Provide necessary consultation during the construction process and solve relevant technical problems.
                                                            
Main Achievements in my work
From 2002 to 2007, I worked on a broad range of projects including residential, industrial and commercial developments. Now I just list several important ones, as well as the main role I played in these projects.  

●        Oriental Hawaii Residential Community (2003-2005)
As one of the main participators in this project, I worked on four apartment buildings and two houses in this project, from project feasibility study to construction documentation. This project won the honors of “The Top Ten best Villa Communities in Beijing” and “A Good Sample of Economical and Livable Residential Buildings”.

●        Cook Islands Police National Headquarters (2004-2005)
I acted as the team leader of the architectural specialty in this project, and managed most architectural tasks including concept design, tender documentation and construction documentation.

●        Sierra Leone Ministry of Foreign Affairs Office Building (2004)
●        Lesotho Parliament Office Building (2005)
In these two projects, I both acted as one of the three main designers and was responsible for developing concept design and            tender documentation.

●        The Fifth Pig Slaughter & Cut Workshop Redevelopment (2005-2006)
This is a complex industrial project, in which I worked as one of the two main designers. In addition to developing design work,             I was also responsible for communication and collaboration with the client, technologists and other engineers involved. I did a               competent job and finally won my client and colleges’ confidence.

●        Yufei Plaza (2006-2007)
This is a high rise commercial building in Beijing. As the three main participators in architecture, I mainly took on part of construction documentation.

Social Activities
●        Making surveys and measurements of heritage courtyard houses in Beijing (1999)
●        Managing an online forum (2001-2004)
●        Helping make an electronic English vocabulary book (2002)
●        Giving lectures about Reading Comprehension Issues in GRE (Graduate Record Examination) to the undergraduate test-takers               (2003)
●        Making an online guideline book about reading comprehension in GRE
●        Compiling two GRE Reading Comprehension books which were published by Tsinghua University Press (2003). Information
                available on
          http://www.tup.tsinghua.edu.cn/b ... 2152-01&DJ=38.9
          http://www.tup.tsinghua.edu.cn/b ... 2151-01&DJ=21.9

●        Being the student representative in the Board and the Standing Committee of the Faculty of Built Environment in the
                University of New South Wales (ongoing)  

Interests/ Hobbies
●        Travel
●        Photography
●        Graphic processing
●        Poster design collection
●        Badminton and Pingpong
                                                                                   
Contact details of two referees
•        Da Hai Xiao: the Vice-president of XXX Institute, China. (An interpreter is needed)
                Phone No.: XXX
                Fax: XXX

•        Dong Hai Li: the Vice-manager of Sector 1 of XXX Institute, China. (An interpreter is needed)
                Phone No.:XXX
                Fax: XXX

[ 本帖最后由 distantmusic 于 13-7-2007 20:23 编辑 ]

leily

原帖由 distantmusic 于 13-7-2007 20:15 发表

                               
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Thanks for so good topic, could you please give me some advices, thanks!

Resume
Personal information                                         
First Name:   XXX
Family Name: XXX
Gender: Fem ...

Resume
Personal information                                         
First Name:   XXX
Family Name: XXX
Gender: Female
Nationality:        Chinese
Resident Status: Permanent Resident
E-mail Address: XXX
Mobile Phone: XXX
Mailing Address: XXX
                                                            
Objectives
I am seeking a job which mainly focuses on but not limited in architectural projects. It is ideal if it combined knowledge of both architecture and planning, because I’m quite familiar with the filed of architecture, and I’m studying in planning now. If the job needs to use drawing or graphic software, I’m willing to do that, because it’s indeed an enjoyable thing for me.
   
你的summary写的不好，你写的这些技能是非常基本的，吸引不了眼球的。你是做建筑的，应该写一下你从事什么方面的建筑，民用，市政，道路，桥梁？你在项目里担当什么样的角色？建筑师？结构师？预算师？做过大约多少项目，什么规模的项目？做了几年了？最起码我看了你的summary，要对你有初步的了解，才能吸引我继续看下去，也才能知道你对于我手头上的工作合不合适。                                                                           
Key Skills
●        Advanced AutoCAD and Photoshop skills
●        Be proficient in using MS Word, Excel, PowerPoint, Land and GIS (ArcMap).
●        Be good at analysing data, organising materials and compiling reports.
●        Effective communication and interpersonal skills.
●        Experiences in well managing small projects.
                                                         
Other Skills泛泛而谈，这一段放到任何人的简历里都可以，看不出你的个性与卖点。如果改不了，也放到后面去。
●        Ability to provide a high level of customer service.
●        Problem solving and decision making skills
●        Well developed coordination skills in the team work.
●        High level of professional ethic.
●        Capability and willingness to learn professional skill.
●        Strong ability to plan and manage own time.
                                                            
Education有当地学历是你的优势，读多久了？快毕业了的话，可以写到summary里去。
●        Bachelor of Architecture: Beijing University of Technology, China (June 2002)
●        Master of Planning: University of New South Wales (Ongoing)
                                                            
Further Training    这一段放到最后去                                         
●        Vocational Training for Architect, including training courses of Site Planning, Architectural Materials, Architectural Economics,             Construction and Operation Management, and Architectural Physics. (2005, 120 hours, by Jingtie Social Science & Technology Ltd.)

●        Energy Efficiency Design (2006, 40 hours, by Ministry of Construction, China)

●        Important issues on Construction Document Design (2006, 40 hours, by China Exploration & Design Association)
                                                            
Employment                                                
Period:        July2002 – February 2007
Employer:         Internal Trade Engineering Design & Research Institute, P.R. China
Job Title:        Assistant Architect
Major duties:      
●        Site inspections.
●        Project programming.
●        Project feasibility studies.
●        Proposal and tender documentation.
●        Develop master plans.
●        Concept/ sketch design.
●        Presentation reports or drawings to the working team for opinions, or to the client               for approval.
●        Documentation on both explanations and drawings.
●        Project Coordination with team members from relevant disciplines, project developers, building material suppliers and builders.
●        Construction documentation.
●        Provide necessary consultation during the construction process and solve relevant technical problems.
                                                            
Main Achievements in my work
From 2002 to 2007, I worked on a broad range of projects including residential, industrial and commercial developments. Now I just list several important ones, as well as the main role I played in these projects.  

●        Oriental Hawaii Residential Community (2003-2005)有作品获奖是卖点，也写到summary里去。另外每一个项目之前最好有一个项目介绍，大概说明一下什么规模的项目，什么样的情况。相信澳洲以住宅项目为主，你做的也是这种，就显得比较适合。
As one of the main participators in this project, I worked on four apartment buildings and two houses in this project, from project feasibility study to construction documentation. This project won the honors of “The Top Ten best Villa Communities in Beijing” and “A Good Sample of Economical and Livable Residential Buildings”.

●        Cook Islands Police National Headquarters (2004-2005)
I acted as the team leader of the architectural specialty in this project, and managed most architectural tasks including concept design, tender documentation and construction documentation.

●        Sierra Leone Ministry of Foreign Affairs Office Building (2004)
●        Lesotho Parliament Office Building (2005)
In these two projects, I both acted as one of the three main designers and was responsible for developing concept design and            tender documentation.

●        The Fifth Pig Slaughter & Cut Workshop Redevelopment (2005-2006)
This is a complex industrial project, in which I worked as one of the two main designers. In addition to developing design work,             I was also responsible for communication and collaboration with the client, technologists and other engineers involved. I did a               competent job and finally won my client and colleges’ confidence.

●        Yufei Plaza (2006-2007)
This is a high rise commercial building in Beijing. As the three main participators in architecture, I mainly took on part of construction documentation.

Social Activities
●        Making surveys and measurements of heritage courtyard houses in Beijing (1999)
●        Managing an online forum (2001-2004)
●        Helping make an electronic English vocabulary book (2002)
●        Giving lectures about Reading Comprehension Issues in GRE (Graduate Record Examination) to the undergraduate test-takers               (2003)
●        Making an online guideline book about reading comprehension in GRE
●        Compiling two GRE Reading Comprehension books which were published by Tsinghua University Press (2003). Information
                available on
          http://www.tup.tsinghua.edu.cn/b ... 2152-01&DJ=38.9
          http://www.tup.tsinghua.edu.cn/b ... 2151-01&DJ=21.9

●        Being the student representative in the Board and the Standing Committee of the Faculty of Built Environment in the
                University of New South Wales (ongoing)  

Interests/ Hobbies
●        Travel
●        Photography
●        Graphic processing
●        Poster design collection
●        Badminton and Pingpong
                                                                                   
Contact details of two referees等别人问你要了再写吧。
•        Da Hai Xiao: the Vice-president of XXX Institute, China. (An interpreter is needed)
                Phone No.: XXX
                Fax: XXX

•        Dong Hai Li: the Vice-manager of Sector 1 of XXX Institute, China. (An interpreter is needed)
                Phone No.:XXX
                Fax: XXX

leily

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Resume

Objective

Seeking a position where chemical engineering skills and chemical research experience will add value.
Profile

About 10 years of experience in major firms, engaged in ch ...

你的简历格式就不对。这样的简历送出去非常失分的哦。先按照标准格式，把简历重写一下吧。写完了再贴过来。

zngy

just read 1 page of this post, I feel it's a great experience sharing from our forum leaders. I believe I will learn a lot by reading the rest of this topic.

Thanks!

tumama

Hi all,really appreciate your offer to help people here.

pelase find the resume below for a cost engineer in construction area. Any suggestion would be invaluable. Thanks a lot.

Career Profile

Twelve and a half years of experience as Construction Cost Engineer, Consultant to business and government in construction cost and Engineer in Construction Management on behalf of project owners enable me to have
•        Extensive experience in construction management
•        Competent computer skills include Microsoft Excel, Word, PowerPoint and the Internet
•        Excellent problem solving skill
•        Excellent verbal and written communication skills with people at all levels
•        Ability to work accurately with figures and to concentrate for long periods
•        Ability to work both independently and as a member of a team
•        Attention to details and excellent observation skill


Employment History

Month year-February 2005
Construction Cost Consultancy Department in *** Bank of China, ***Branch
Construction Cost Engineer and Consultant
•        Acted as consultant to business and government in construction cost
•        Liaised with government infrastructure departments, building companies, real estate developers, project owners, architects, suppliers and committee of arbitration
•        Undertook feasibility studies to assist in decisions about the worth of a project proceeding
•        Studied architectural and engineering drawings and specifications
•        Prepared construction cost estimates, which listed the individual components required to construct the project
•        Prepared tender documents
•        Participated in the process of tender bidding
•        Made decision on the final winner in the bidding
•        Administered construction contracts
•        Oversaw changes of design to assess the effects on cost
•        Assessed and recommended payment to contractors during construction
•        Visited the building sites to oversee the construction cost during the process
•        Worked out the final account of the construction cost
•        Resolved disputes as expert witness regarding construction cost
•        Managed marketing to attract more clients


Month year– December 1999
Real Estate Developing Company, affiliated to **Bank of China, ***Branch
Manager of Construction Department and Engineer in construction management
•        Managed projects of water and electricity facilities installation
•        Liaised with government infrastructure departments, architects, engineers, building companies, and suppliers
•        Studied construction drawings
•        Oversaw change of design in the construction
•        In charge of indoor and outdoor decoration of buildings
•        Visited the building sites
•        Oversaw the construction process
•        Produced cost estimates for construction projects
•        Checked monthly report forms of construction to supervise payment plans


      
Qualifications/ Training

2006            Graduate Certificate in Building and Planning, University of ****
        Australia
2003           Certificate of Construction Cost Engineer registered by China
    Ministry of Construction
2003           Qualification of Agent in Tender Bidding awarded by ***  Provincial Construction Committee of China
2003           Trained and completed four courses awarded by China Ministry of
    Construction: Knowledge of Construction Cost Management,
   Confirmation and Control of Construction Cost, Building
   Technology and Measurement (Civil Engineering), Case Analysis of
   Construction Cost
2002        Qualification of Budgeter awarded by ***** Provincial
        Construction Committee of China
1998            Awarded the technical title of Engineer
1992        Diploma of Industrial Electric Automation in *****Industry  
        and Technology College, China




Achievement

•        In charge of construction cost estimates and final account valued of RMB80,000,000
•        In charge of construction bidding valued of RMB1,250,000,000
•        Managed construction projects of 110,000 Square meters of residential properties and 48,000 Square meters of office buildings
•        Resolved disputes of 7 cases regarding construction cost


Personal Attributes

•        Analytical and logical
•        Honest and credible
•        Good leadership, warm-hearted, passionate
•        Flexible, ability for quick adjustment, a fast learner
•        Sensitive to details
•        Awareness of and concern for environment

                                 
Referees:

leily

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Hi all,really appreciate your offer to help people here.

pelase find the resume below for a cost engineer in construction area. Any suggestion would be invaluable. Thanks a lot.

Career Pro ...

Career Profile

Twelve and a half years of experience as Construction Cost Engineer, Consultant to business and government in construction cost and Engineer in Construction Management on behalf of project owners enable me to have
•        Extensive experience in construction management
•        Competent computer skills include Microsoft Excel, Word, PowerPoint and the Internet
•        Excellent problem solving skill
•        Excellent verbal and written communication skills with people at all levels
•        Ability to work accurately with figures and to concentrate for long periods
•        Ability to work both independently and as a member of a team
•        Attention to details and excellent observation skill
和前一封简历一样，Summary写的没有个人特色，或者 说卖点不突出。放之四海皆准的summary是激不起人家想进一步看简历的欲望的。你做的是建筑成本，是不是预算师啊？你要写一下，你一般做哪些类型的工程，多大规模，你后面的Achivement就蛮好的，•        In charge of construction cost estimates and final account valued of RMB80,000,000
•        In charge of construction bidding valued of RMB1,250,000,000
•        Managed construction projects of 110,000 Square meters of residential properties and 48,000 Square meters of office buildings
•        Resolved disputes of 7 cases regarding construction cost

这一段放到前面 来，我会比较感兴趣一点。

Employment History

Month year-February 2005
Construction Cost Consultancy Department in *** Bank of China, ***Branch
Construction Cost Engineer and Consultant
•        Acted as consultant to business and government in construction cost
•        Liaised with government infrastructure departments, building companies, real estate developers, project owners, architects, suppliers and committee of arbitration
•        Undertook feasibility studies to assist in decisions about the worth of a project proceeding
•        Studied architectural and engineering drawings and specifications
•        Prepared construction cost estimates, which listed the individual components required to construct the project
•        Prepared tender documents
•        Participated in the process of tender bidding
•        Made decision on the final winner in the bidding
•        Administered construction contracts
•        Oversaw changes of design to assess the effects on cost
•        Assessed and recommended payment to contractors during construction
•        Visited the building sites to oversee the construction cost during the process
•        Worked out the final account of the construction cost
•        Resolved disputes as expert witness regarding construction cost
•        Managed marketing to attract more clients

建议加一下你的项目经验，比如你一共做了哪些项目，这些项目是个什么样的情况，有多少金额，你的工作有没有什么独到之处，比如为业主节约了多少资金，非常好的控制了成本之类的。

Month year– December 1999
Real Estate Developing Company, affiliated to **Bank of China, ***Branch
Manager of Construction Department and Engineer in construction management
•        Managed projects of water and electricity facilities installation
•        Liaised with government infrastructure departments, architects, engineers, building companies, and suppliers
•        Studied construction drawings
•        Oversaw change of design in the construction
•        In charge of indoor and outdoor decoration of buildings
•        Visited the building sites
•        Oversaw the construction process
•        Produced cost estimates for construction projects
•        Checked monthly report forms of construction to supervise payment plans


  你有本地学历，请把它放到summary里去，我看到前面 的时候还在想呢，你05年就不工作了，这一段时间在干吗啊，如果你把这个放在前面 ，会更吸引人，也很好的回答了别人的这个疑问。   
Qualifications/ Training

2006            Graduate Certificate in Building and Planning, University of ****
        Australia
2003           Certificate of Construction Cost Engineer registered by China
    Ministry of Construction
2003           Qualification of Agent in Tender Bidding awarded by ***  Provincial Construction Committee of China
2003           Trained and completed four courses awarded by China Ministry of
    Construction: Knowledge of Construction Cost Management,
   Confirmation and Control of Construction Cost, Building
   Technology and Measurement (Civil Engineering), Case Analysis of
   Construction Cost
2002        Qualification of Budgeter awarded by ***** Provincial
        Construction Committee of China
1998            Awarded the technical title of Engineer
1992        Diploma of Industrial Electric Automation in *****Industry  
        and Technology College, China




Achievement

•        In charge of construction cost estimates and final account valued of RMB80,000,000
•        In charge of construction bidding valued of RMB1,250,000,000
•        Managed construction projects of 110,000 Square meters of residential properties and 48,000 Square meters of office buildings
•        Resolved disputes of 7 cases regarding construction cost


Personal Attributes

•        Analytical and logical
•        Honest and credible
•        Good leadership, warm-hearted, passionate
•        Flexible, ability for quick adjustment, a fast learner
•        Sensitive to details
•        Awareness of and concern for environment

yddlx

贴出我LG的简历，他干的是IT里GIS Analyst，请各位帮忙改一下，谢谢

Resume


NAME:××××
Email: ××××
Tel: ××××
Objective

Seek the Challenging Position of _GIS Analyst _.


Professional Summary
•        More than 7 Years of experiences in GIS software operation, analysis and implementation.
•        Acted as a key team member in many large-scale e-government GIS projects.
•        Excellent interpersonal and communication skills
•        Teamwork spirit, strong problem-solving skills, excellent time/priority management and be able to work under pressure
•        Solid knowledge in environmental science and system integration with GIS technology


Technical Skills
•        More than 5 Years experience in ESRI’s products (ArcView3.2, ArcGIS8, ArcGIS9, ArcIMS, ArcSDE, ArcGIS Server)
•        Professional experience with GIS integration based on ESRI's products ( MapObject, ArcObject, ArcEngine, ArcIMS)
•        Expertise in creating, querying, mapping, and analyzing cell-based raster data and performing integrated vector–raster analysis
•        Familiar with the use of ArcGIS9’s analyst tools (Value Map, Density Map, Overlap, Buffer, Network, Shortest Path, etc)
•        Proficient at ArcSDE administration for Oracle and SQLServer
•        2 Years experience in MapInfo and MapBasic (V6.0)




Professional Experience
××××Co., Ltd. - Guangzhou, China

May 2006 - Jun 2007    Senior GIS Engineer (Full time)
•        Responsible for the software operating, functional analysis and designing of J2EE application with ESRI’s products(ArcGIS 9.1 and 9.2)
•        Taking charge of the design of spatial database and ArcSDE administration for Oracle 9i
•        Coordinating with surveyor and draftsman to control the quality of the map
•        Played key role in design, control and coordination of GIS integration projects
Achievement:
•        Served as GIS analyst and system analyst successfully integrating Forest MIS(Panyu, Guangzhou) with fully functional GIS application ,including Map navigation, forest density analysis and fire ranking analysis.(Technology used: J2EE, ArcIMS, ArcSDE)
•        Designed and implemented entire Panyu District Address Locating System (from the ground up) using J2EE technology implementing geocoding searching pattern with the aid of ArcGIS. (Tools used: J2EE, ArcIMS, ArcSDE, ArcGIS)
•        Successfully coordinated and produced Panyu Digital Map(1/10000), Panyu Doorplate Address Digital Map(1/500) and Panyu Forest Digital Map(1/10000)
•        Coordinating the Production of Digital Orthophoto Map(DOM) Based on High Resolution Quick Bird Remote Sensing Image(Tools used: ERDAS IMAGINE 8.5)
××××××. - Guangzhou, China

Aug 2001 - Dec 2005    GIS Engineer/Developer (Full time)
•        Installed (from the ground up) and maintained ESRI’s products- Experienced with ArcGIS Desktop, ArcSDE, ArcIMS
•        Take charge of GIS analysis using ArcGIS9 analysis tools(Spatial Analyst, Network Analyst, Geostatistical Analyst, etc)
•        Played key role in the design and coding of GIS integration applications
•        Served as Technical Lead of establishing spatial database by ArcSDE for Oracle9i/SQLServer2000
•        Coordinated and guided drawing team to survey, edit digital map and input them to the ArcSDE database
Achievement:
•        Successfully designed and implemented the Environmental Protecting Authority GIS Enquiry and Analysis System based on MapObject/ArcObject Component, including value map, buffer, overlap and density analysis in Air/Water Pollution Diffusion and Population Density Distributing( Tools used: VB, MapObject/ArcObject, ArcSDE, Oracle9i/SQLServer2000)
•        Successfully designed, QA and imported Guangzhou Digital Map(1/10000) with the aid of ArcGIS9 and ArcSDE9
•        Completed drafting, digital image processing, data inputting and editing of the digital map for environmental protecting subject in Guangzhou(Technology used: Autocad, MapInfo, ArcGIS, ArcSDE)
•        Designed, Developed, and Deployed Web based MIS for Pollutants Control. Used ArcIMS9 for delivering dynamic maps, GIS data and services via the Web as well as ArcSDE9 for Oracle9i as the back end
×××××× - Guangzhou, China
Jul 1999 - Aug 2001    GIS Engineer/Map Draftsman (Full time)
•        Responsible for drawing draft, digital input, composing maps
•        Designed and established property database and connected to the spatial data
•        Played key role in the integration between MIS and GIS with MapInfo and MapBasic
•        Served as data analyst and GIS operator using ArcView3.2
Achievement:
•        Served as main draftsman for the seashore map of Guangdong Province(1/50000) using scanner and MapInfo in special coordinating
•        Successfully design and coding GIS integration part of Shenzhen Marine Resource MIS with the aid of MapInfo and MapBasic(VB)
•        Successfully transfer map format from MapInfo(tab) to ESRI(shape) by MapInfo for the application in Arcview3.2
•        Successfully creating density maps from themes containing marine resource point features with Arcview3.2 Spatial Analyst Tool

Education
Master of Environmental Engineering - Guangzhou, China
Bachelor of Chemistry Science – Guangzhou, China
Professional Training
•        Oracle DBA – PCI (Oracle Authorized) - Guangzhou
•        Advanced Analysis with ArcGIS – Esri - Guangzhou
•        Working with ArcGIS Spatial Analyst – Esri - Guangzhou
•        Programming MapObjects with Visual Basic – Esri - Guangzhou
•        Advanced ArcObjects Component Development – Esri - Guangzhou
•        ArcSDE Administration for Oracle – Esri - Guangzhou
•        Senior Project Manager and Archetecher Training – Microsoft -Guangzhou
•        Effective project management - Personal Development  - Guangzhou
       
Reference available upon request

emmadashaozi

是不是我的resume没有什么新意和值得修改的地方呀，还是没有给大家提供参考的价值呢？也帮我提提建议吧。像我这样刚刚毕业很短时间，没什么工作经验，拿了PR就回国放假去了，刚刚回来开始找工作的人，应该怎么样写一份简历，才会给别人留下深刻的印象呢？到墨尔本这个地方，我该怎么开始，从哪里开始做起呢？请大家帮我想想办法吧。心里很迷茫滴说！！！

Karena

自认没什么过人之处和专长，也只有你等专业人士帮助帮助，小妹我先谢了！！


SUMMARY:

More than 4 years of multi-national company
Good independent working ability and problem-solving skill;
A good team player;

    Computer skills: SAP operation system
    Good command in Microsoft Office-Advanced
    PowerPoint, Lotus Notes.

(Bachelor of Arts from University of XXXXXXXXXXX)


Working Experience:
Client Service Representative--Purchasing           2006.2—now
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX—Shanghai Br.
XXX is a leader in science and technology, providing innovative chemical, plastic and agricultural products and services to many essential consumer markets.

• Coordinate material specification approval / supplier sign-off and the supplier self-assessment process for the Purchasing function
• Handle spot orders within delegation of authority to commit
• Create and manage system contracts in accordance with commercial agreements
• Negotiate commercial agreements with suppliers for material and package which are delegated by the Purchasing Supply Managers
• Represent Purchasing during external/internal ISO/QS9000 quality audits under the direction of the Process Leader


Procurement Assistant                          2005.6—2006.1
XXXXX (Shanghai) Trading Co., Ltd
XXXXX - the dyestuff company of Bayer and Hoechst – which is the key one in
producing dyestuff for different kinds of clothing material.

• Coordinating supplier and foreign or domestic customers.
• Data entry, vendor data creations, updating pricing and filing
• Getting quotation Air/Ocean cost from forwarding agent in order to feedback customers overseas.
• Purchasing the goods—Pigment from mainland China according to the
• corresponding purchasing list then to ship out in order to comply with the due time of each production.
• Communicating with Sourcing Manager, support sourcing team on all   procurement set-up activities
• Working with suppliers & monitor procurement operation on a daily basis,   
• Accomplishing other assignments from Supply Chain Manager.

Global Sales Dept.--Shipping Coordinator         2003.11—2005.6
XXXXXXXXXX (JV by Japan and China)
XXXXXXXXX is one of the world's leading international air/ocean freight forwarders with operations throughout the world and with more than a century of experience, and she’s currently set up service centers in 159 cities in 33 countries around the world.

• Contact shippers to ensure the correct export information of each shipment like volume, gross weight, pieces, commodity etc. after receiving SLI (Shipper’s Letter of Instruction) from customer;
• Pass all the information to export & space booking departments in order to make the right arrangement and coordination in between like: detail time for picking up, weighing, preparing related documents, booking space etc.; and send pre-alert to overseas branches in advance to ensure that all the shipments can be received at the destination port without fail;
• Contact with shippers to correct in case of any wrong information, then inform overseas branches by fax/call to make sure the right information have been accepted;
• Update and tracing the flight date of each shipment through internal Nippon System; to gather and make all the new information into a template which can be sent to customer;
• Cooperate with Nippon overseas to target global accounts by attending the global bidding;
• Assist manager to sort out global accounts’ files and provide the related daily report.
• To better the daily works for my customers by paying a periodical return visit.
• Join in some big project’s biddings like SONY，SIEMENS，TYCO, B&L, Baxter etc. together with overseas GSC (global sales center) team in order to finish them;

Personal Skills:
○ Easy-going, a good team player;
○ Good tolerance and with high responsibility;
○ Eager to learn and add value to the organization and the team;
○ Advanced Word and Excel skills，SAP system and Lotus Notes;
○ Fluent in oral and written English;
○ Self-motivated, able to work well under pressure;


REFERENCES FURNISHED UPON REQUEST

再次感谢各位的帮助！！！

能具体指出哪有错吗？多谢了！！

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金枪布道

原帖由 Karena 于 16-7-2007 16:40 发表

                               
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SUMMARY:

More than 4 years of multi-national company
Fluent in English (both in spoken and written);
Experienced  ...

头五行我看至少有5处语法、语意错误，下面的我就没再看下去了。我估计recruiter也会一样处理。

funjoke

认真看了此帖改的，希望各位牛人指正。拜谢！
小弟我是电信业的万金油，基础电信做过，手机做过，项目做过，产品做过，惭愧的是不思上进，无任何证书，好像也没有什么可以量化的一技之长。

PROFESSIONAL SUMMARY
        3 years experience in mobile handset development and management.
        More than 6 years project management experience in top telecom firm.
        Strong financial/analytical skills with deep understanding of ICT industry from telecom infrastructure to end-user products.
        Master of Business Administration and Bachelor of Communication Engineering.
        Proficient in Powerpoint and Excel, and working knowledge of Lindo, SPSS.
       
EMPLOYMENT HISTORY
XXX Mobile Phones Limited
Product Manager (09/2004 – 05/2007)
Responsibilities
        Analyzed the worldwide consumer market trends and competitors in specific segments in close collaboration with the market analyst for product offering, pricing & marketing.
        Identified product development opportunity in well defined segment of targeted end user, price, and commercial offers from a global view.
        Defined high-level specifications for handset products, chose the technical approach, developed business requirements for products, ensured the profitability of the product according to the product priority and strategy, tracked and reported on product performance against plan.
        Developed proposals to the major operators from Europe, Latam and Asia Pacific and adapted the handset specifications to their specific requirements.
        Established and maintained close relationship with different world-leading mobile technology suppliers in order to keep abreast of the latest technical evolution.
        Coordinated design creation with European mobile designers.
        Acted as a key role in the project team in the course of product development in order to ensure proper implementation of the product specifications and to secure product manufacturing cost.
        Coordinated MMI specifications, User Manual Guide, OEM alternatives, third-party software applications and accessory policy.
        Enhanced knowledge sharing with the sales & marketing department to ensure right product proposals & messages delivered to end-users and customers.
        Assisted the product marketing manager in organizing commercial launch.

Achievements:
        Acted as the product manager of the most successful product series -XXX (Mobile Phone xxx......) in 2005. These models were widely selected by different operators, such as Vodafone, Orange, Telefonica, T-mobile and Telstra, with total sales volume reached 15 million handsets.
        Successfully developed and launched xxx...

XXX  Co., Ltd., China
Project Manager (12/2000 – 08/2004)
Responsibilities
        Assessed the feasibility of the telecom infrastructure (SDH, DWDM) project based on client requirements.
        Defined project scope, developed work plan and provided detailed approach for contract negotiation.
        Monitored the team of up to 15 people in the project implementation for major operators in China with extensive coverage of East and Northwest regions in China.
        Allocated project resources and monitored project progress and expenses.
        Estimated and controlled overall project risks ensuring on-time deliverables.
        Provided quick response to the technical inquiries from the clients.
        Reviewed target performance and followed up with the project payment.
        Worked closely with the functions of sales, logistics and finance.

Achievements
        Accomplished a number of projects generating the total revenue of 120 million USD.
        Won the XXX Outstanding Team Award of Year 2000 & 2001.
        Contributed 40-45% of total revenue for the whole service dept in 2000 & 2001.

Technical Support Engineer (03/1998 – 11/2000)
        In charge of factory test on the first DWDM long haul optical system for China which connects Hong Kong and Guangzhou. The test was conducted in Boston for 2 months period.
        Responsible for technical support in Northwest region of China, including phone inquiries, equipment installation, testing and trouble-shooting, on-site support and client training, etc.
        Acted as an professional specialist in SDH, DWDM, Unix.
       
EDUCATION
XXX University (09/2003 – 01/2006)
Master of Business Administration.
XXX University (09/1994 – 07/1998)
Bachelor of Communication Engineering (graduated with honors).

LANGUAGE
Excellent in written and verbal communication.
Perfect Chinese mandarin.

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原帖由 Karena 于 16-7-2007 16:40 发表

                               
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SUMMARY:
4+ years of solid working exprience in multinational companies
Years of field history of managing domestic and foreign suppliers and clients
Detailed understanding in purchasing handling and shipping processing
Strong in deal neogotiating, collaboration of forwarders and agents
Self-motivated performer in both independent and team working environment

Computer skills:
Solid hands-on exprience in SAP ERP system, Advanced knowledge in Microsoft Office Suite and Lotus Notes Suite

Education:
(Bachelor of Arts from University of XXXXXXXXXXX)


Working Experience:
Client Service Representative--Purchasing           2006.2—now
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX—Shanghai Br.
XXX is a leader in science and technology, providing innovative chemical, plastic and agricultural products and services to many essential consumer markets.

• Coordinate material specification approval / supplier sign-off and the supplier self-assessment process for the Purchasing function
• Handle spot orders within delegation of authority to commit
• Create and manage system contracts in accordance with commercial agreements
• Negotiate commercial agreements with suppliers for material and package which are delegated by the Purchasing Supply Managers
• Represent Purchasing during external/internal ISO/QS9000 quality audits under the direction of the Process Leader


Procurement Assistant                          2005.6—2006.1
XXXXX (Shanghai) Trading Co., Ltd
XXXXX - the dyestuff subsidiary of Bayer and Hoechst, which is the dominating manufecturer in producing dyestuff for different kinds of clothing material.

• Coordinating foreign or domestic suppliers and customers.
• Business data aggregating, vendor records management, pricing information updating and archiving
• Neogotiating freight costs with variable Air/Sea forwarding agencies on behalf of overseas customers
• Purchasing the goods—Pigment from mainland China according to the corresponding purchasing list then to ship out in order to comply with the due time of each production.
• Communicating with Sourcing Manager, support sourcing team on all procurement set-up activities
• Working with suppliers & monitor procurement operation on a daily basis,   
• Accomplishing other assignments from Supply Chain Manager.

Global Sales Dept.--Shipping Coordinator         2003.11—2005.6
XXXXXXXXXX (JV by Japan and China)
XXXXXXXXX is one of the world's leading international air/ocean freight forwarders with operations throughout the world and with more than a century of experience, and she’s currently set up service centers in 159 cities in 33 countries around the world.

• Contact shippers to ensure the correct export information of each shipment like volume, gross weight, pieces, commodity etc. after receiving SLI (Shipper’s Letter of Instruction) from customer;
• Pass all the information to export & space booking departments in order to make the right arrangement and coordination in between like: detail time for picking up, weighing, preparing related documents, booking space etc.; and send pre-alert to overseas branches in advance to ensure that all the shipments can be received at the destination port without fail;
• Contact with shippers to correct in case of any wrong information, then inform overseas branches by fax/call to make sure the right information have been accepted;
• Update and tracing the flight date of each shipment through internal Nippon System; to gather and make all the new information into a template which can be sent to customer;
• Cooperate with Nippon overseas to target global accounts by attending the global bidding;
• Assist manager to sort out global accounts’ files and provide the related daily report.
• To better the daily works for my customers by paying a periodical return visit.
• Join in some big project’s biddings like SONY，SIEMENS，TYCO, B&L, Baxter etc. together with overseas GSC (global sales center) team in order to finish them;

Personal Skills:
○ Easy-going, a good team player;
○ Perfessional manner and highly responsible;
○ Eager to learn and contribute to the organization and the team;
○ Advanced Word and Excel skills，SAP system and Lotus Notes;
○ Fluent in oral and written English;
○ Self-motivated, able to work well under pressure;

Karena

感谢金枪兄弟的帮助，再次不胜感激！！

yddlx

原帖由 yddlx 于 16-7-2007 10:16 发表

                               
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贴出我LG的简历，他干的是IT里GIS Analyst，请各位帮忙改一下，谢谢

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为啥没给我提点意见啊？请各位大侠帮忙看看，非常感谢！！！

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原帖由 yddlx 于 18-7-2007 15:56 发表

                               
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为啥没给我提点意见啊？请各位大侠帮忙看看，非常感谢！！！

我觉得你们写得很好，基本上没什么问题。祝你们好运！

funjoke

我的呢？金枪布道？老大卫呢？

今天去OQP面试，面试我的老师不理解我是干吗的。这里好像是没有手机的产品经理，项目经理我又没有证书，唉。