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auphil

wow.. bit harsh, as the whole E 文 has been rewritten, in a way, i think the author has expressed his view queit well, with his perosnal touch.. I guess that is the way he will tell his friends in a normal conversation. This is not an essay, and does not need to pay much attention on the correctness of the gramma.. that my two cents worth.

auphil

原帖由 easoncn 于 19-10-2009 23:45 发表

                               
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Of course, I can't create a new way to express the original feeling of the author. And I admitted that the re-written part is stiff as I didn't have any feeling as Melguy had. The only purpose I poste ...

I was only expressing an opinion from a different point of view. It is never intended to say you shouldn’t rewrite the work. It is never intended to say you are showing off. In fact, I can see Melguy acknowledged and appreciated your effort by giving you two thumb up...